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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Hey Maisha Dear Totally Awesome Update....Very well written.....Scenes,dialogues were very goodClap.......I loved Sajans conversation a lot N Samrat applying Sindoor in Gunjans Mang was a cute scene....liked Shilpa and gunjan bonding N Kitchen Scene Samrat helping Gunjan Was just Superb...........Clap.......Good work dearThumbs Up.....
Thanks 4 pmHug and Do update soonSmile.....

Love GunjanSmileSmile...............

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
awsome update
loved this part
glad gunjan told everything to shilpa
sajan to cute
cont soon
 
love
tanzeel
gunjanmariya Goldie
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
hey dear..
sorry for late comment..i was a lil busy...sorry..
coming to the updates....what to say yrrr as always u rocked hon...
the engegment,sangeet,haldi everything was written beautifully..
the part where samrat carry her in his arms on mehndi was veryyyy sweet...and aww samrat is such a sweetheart..he is so understanding.
and the coffee scene was very nice dear.
im sure gunjan will deff fall for him...no one can resist samrat's charm..!
great job yrr....this ff is doing really well n its getting interesting i wonder what will happen when armaan will come to know about her marriage...
loved all the updates dear...can't wait to read more so,
plzz continue soon and thanks alot for the pm...
love,
gunjan mariya..

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 3:12am | IP Logged
part-13
gunjan was getting ready for the lunchh...her cell rang..
g=helloo..
s=ha gunjan...
g=samrat tum kaha ho?? humhe lunch pe jana ha...
s=ha baba mujhe yaad ha..mane isiliye phone kia ha...tum ready hojaoo..ma tumhe pick karne arahahu...
g=im readyy tum ajaooo..
s=ok..ill be there...
gunjan came down...
sh=bhabii..ap tayyar ha??
g=ha..
sh=par bhai to abhitak nahi ayee..
sm=mujhe pata tha..sam ek baar hospital chala jaye phir kabhi time se nahi ata...
g=mummy usne mujhe call kia tha..woh bass atahi hoga.a..
sm=are gunjan ek minute rukna beta..ma abhi ayii..
g=jii...
shilpa came to gunjan..
sh=bhabi apse ek baat puchu?? sach sach batayengii??
g=ha pucho na...
sh=ap khush hana??? apne jo faisla kia ha..usse???
g=aagar khush nahi hotiii..to kabhbi samrat par akh band karke bharosa nahi karpatiii.,.
sh=bhabiii..uska naam kya thaa?? jisne apkoo..
sm=gunjan...
g=ji????
sm=ye lo..beta...
g=mummy itne sare mithaii?? hum to sirf lunch pe jaraheha...
sm=to kya huaa?? kehdena mane bheja ha..
g=theek ha...
sh=lo.bhai agayee...horn derahahe..
g=ok..ma chalti huu...
sh=bye bhabii..
g=byee...
gunjan came out n sat in the car...n they started for bhushan house..
g=kafi late hogaya aneme????
s=ha woh...bohot dinoke baad gaya tha na..to patients...ko handle karna mushkil hogaya tha...kaise karke sambhalke aya huu...bachke...bapre..agar aj lunch nahi hota...to shayed mujhe aneme booht late hojataa...
g=doctor honeka yehi ek problem ha...kab kaunsi immergancy ajay pata nahi chaltaa..
s=ur ritee...par jab used to hojaooo..to accha lagta ha..logoki madat karna..jaan bachana.. its something different..pata ha..dad humesha chahte the ka ma doctor banuu..aur mujhe aj iss position me dekke im sure...dad jaaha bhi ha..bohot proud feel karrahehonge,...
g=samrat ek baat kahuu??
s=hmm..kahoo...
g=tum na...bohot acche ho...kitne achce ho..shayed tum khud kabhi samajh nahi saktee...
s=welll..ab to shayed ma sachme accha honga..
g=esa kyu??
s=tum kabhi kuch galat nahi kehtiii..to..ye kaise galat hogaa???
gunjan smiles..hearing his wordss..they reached bhushan house...
d=gunjan...hii!!!
dia hugs her..gunjan also hugss her...
d=wooohh..tum to saree me kitni pyaari lagrahihooo..
g=thanks..ye mummy ne dia ha...
d=manna paregaa...meri behen ko kisiki nazar na lagee.
s=well..mujhe to lagraha ha..ke tumhi meri biwi ko nazar laga dogii..
d=how mean jijuuu!! apki ikloti sali huu..aur appp...
sha=are sari bate yehi karogii??? inhe andaar to ane dooo..
d=ha sorryy...ajaooo...
sajan comes inside...samrat sits with shashank in the hall..dia drags gunjan in the kitchen..
g=kya preparation kia ha lunch kaa??
d=sab accha ha..tumhari training se hi kia ha..
g=phir to acchahhi hogaa..
gunjan sees the dishes of lunchh..
g=dia..sab theek ha..par...meethe me kya ha???
d=meetheme...tera favourite...rasmalaii..
g=rasmalaii????
d=hmmm...kyu tujhe accha nahi lagtaa??
g=dekhh..its finee...mera fav ha..par samrat ko accha nahi lagta...ek kaam kar..ghar me gajar hana??
d=ha ...
g=leke aaa...ma jaldise gajar ka halwa bana deti huu...halwa uska fav ha...
d=itni jaldiii??
g=tu jayegi kyaa????? tere bak bak karnetakkk ban bhi jayegaa..
d=abhhi layii..
samrat saw this...from outside..n smiledd..gunjan was making the halwa...dia asked her..
d=tu khush hana???
g=matlabb??
d=samrat ke sathhh..
g=ofcourse im happpyy...isiliye to itna bara faisla kia tha...atleast samrat ke sath jab rehti hu..to woh mujhe har takleef aur ghamse door rakhta ha..usse pata ha..ka kaise woh mujhe khush rakhsakta ha..uske sath jab rehti huu..to sirf hasti hu..aur khush rehtiii huu...
dia saw love in gunjans eyes..for him...gunjan was smiling telling about samrat..
d(in mind)=yess...i knew it...gunjan ko finally jiju se pyar horaha ha...actually hochuka ha..bass usse samajhneme waqt lagraha ha...par jo mane socha tha...woh horaha ha..thank u goddd!!
suddenly gunjan realized that the halwa was burningg...
g=shittt!!
she quickly switched the gas off..
g=dia..bata nahi sakti thiii????
d=sorryyy...
g=hogaya..chal...bahar chalte ha..
gunjan n dia served the lunch...n caled shashank n samrat...
s=dia..itna sab bananeki kya zarurat thii??
d=kaise nahi thiii?? akhir pehli baar mere jiju aye haa...to acchese khatirdari to karni paregi na...accha abhi bataooo..khana kaisa bana ha...
samrat ate some...n then looked at her...
s=sach kahu ya jhutt???
d=ummm...jjhut hi kehdooo..
s=ekdam bakwasss!!!
d=i knew..it...ud love itt..
s=bohot tastyy ha...
sha=gunjan beta.,.tum bhi betho na..
g=ji papap...
s=tumhara platee??dia..jiju ke chakkar me.behen ko plate dena bhul gayii??
d=are..tumhara plate ha na...new married couple...humesha ekhi plate me khana share karte ha...rite dadd??
sha=ritee...
sajan looked at eachother...samrat tried to avoid the situation..
s=ab dia...esa kaisee??? ye ..
sha=beta...sharma kyu rahehooo???
d=ha jiju..come on...meri behen bohot bhuki ha..plzz plzz...khilao naa...
dia served some more food on the plate...n made gunjan sit beside him...samrat had no other choice...he had to feed her..gunjan also couldnt do anything...
s=dia...khana to yummy tha...abhi sweet dishhh...
d=abhi layiii...apki fav gajar ka halwa...
samrat looked at gunjan..who was smilingg...
g=kya hua???? has kyu rahheoo??
s=thanks..mere lie..tumne halwa banayaa...
gunjan looked at dia...dia looked at gunjan..
g=tumhe kaisee????
s=iss halwakeki khusbusehi mujhe pata chalgaya ke...ke ye tumne mere lie banaya ha...
d=wohh jijuu...im impresseddd!!!
s=thankss...par ma tumhe bhi hurt nahi karsakta...to tumne jo mere lie pyaarse rasmalai banai ha..woh bhi leaaooo..
g=par tumhe tooo...
s=ma kisiko hurt nahi karsaktaa...isiliye..donokahi taste karungaa..
gunjan was very happyy..samrat was very nicee...dia bought rasmalai alsoo..n samrat ate both...gunjan was very happpyy...
after lunchh...sajan started for there homee...
s=aj lunch booht accha tha..kuch zyadahi khalia manee...
g=tumhe sachme rasmalai aj acchi lagiii???
s=ofcourse...tumhari choice ha,too...best hi hogaa...
gunjan smiledd...
g=-tumhe meri har baat sahi lagti haa????
s=koi shakkk???
g=nahiii...
shopping malll..
shilpa came with some of her frendss...
girl1=shilpa..tune to shopping ki ha..phir ajj??
sh=ma thori din baad wapas jarahihuuu...to usiliye shopping karne ayi hu..accha tumlogg na food court me jaooo...ma abhi wahase ayii..
all=ok...
shilpa went to the fortune teller..she came to the mall to meet her...
sh=hello..mam...plzz...batayiye..na..apne usdin jo kaha tha..woh...mera mr perfect kab ayegaa...kafi din hogayee..
ft=shilpa...tum shayed booht excited ho..hana apne mr perfect se milne keliyee???
sh=jii..
ft=then let me tell u...woh kab ayega...kaise ayega...kaha ayega..ye koi nahi janta..aur mane tumhe jaisa kaha tha...ke jab tumlogoki pehli mulakat hogii..to tumhe aur usse pata bhi nahi chalega..ke tum donoki jodi uparse banke ayi ha..
sh=phirr:??? ma usse badme kaisee????
ft=ye tum...kismaat pe choddooo..agar woh sachme tumhara mr perfect ha..to kismathi tumhe barbar usse jorke rakhegiii...
sh(in mind)=i just hopee...ke woh mujhe jaldi mil jayee...
at night..sajan werre in there room...samrat was talking on the phone..gunjan was sitting infront of the mirror..
s=gunjan...
g=hmm..
s=mujhe kal savere hospitalme jana ha...to ma jaldi uth jaungaa.
gunjan smiledd...n stood up..
g=dont worry ma kaal subhah uth jaungii..
s=are nahii..mane isiliye kaah taki tum utheneke baad mujhe dhundne na lagoo..accha raat kafi hochuka ha..tum sojaooo..gud nitee...
samrat took the pillow n was going to lie down on the sofa...
g=samratt..
s=hmmm...
gunjan came to him...
g=ek baat puchuu????
s=ha pucho na...
g=sach sach jawab dogee???
s=tumse jhut kyu kahungaa????
g=kya tum mujhse pyaar karte ho?????
samrat was shockedd...why was she asking thatt..
s=gunjan tum???
g=sach kehnaa..kya tum mujhe chahte hoo?????
samrat looked to the other side.,..trying to avoid her eye contact...
s=gunjan tum..
g=tumhari nazre saaf kehrrahiha...tum mujhse pyaar karte hooo..hanaa????
samrat wasnt saying anythingg...
s=gunjan raat kafi hochuki ha..tum sojaaoo.hum kaal baat karenege..
samrat lied down on the sofa...gunjan sat on the bed...
g(to herself)=ma janti hu..ke tum mujhe chahte hoo..par yeh jante hue ke mane tumse time manga ha...tum apne apko mujhse door rakhrahehooo...apne pyaar ko samne nahi ane dete..par pyaar chupay nahi chupta samrat...ma puri koshish karungii..ke armaan ke pyaarko bhulasakuu...im sorry samrat...!! plzz mujhe maaf kardenaa!!
precap:..more sajan scenes...
 


Edited by ArShSaJan - 26 August 2011 at 2:15am

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Awesomeeeeeeeeeee
Do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 3:35am | IP Logged
wah yaar maisha, dil khush kr dia tune apne update se..........just luvd it!!!!
waise maine pehli baar aise halwa dkha jo itni jaldi ban gya warna jab mai banati hu tab kamsekam 1.5 hours to lagte hi h........LOL

samrat is sooooooooo swt & caring........just luv him.....aisa hubby sabko mile.......luv him 2 much.........Embarrassed......thoda romantic scenes add kr yaar.......ab itni bhi kya kanjusi?!......plzzzzzzzz........

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GT 2 PM ME........Smile

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged
sooo sweet
lovely update
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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Cont soon. Thanks for pm

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