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jodis are made in heaven- kash n sajan ff (Page 16)

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Awesome concept.I liked ur writing style.PLEASE ADD ME TO UR PM LIST

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
1st f all congo on ur new ff...
 
wowwwwwww

awsomeee updt

read all d parts 2day.. they were amazing...

continuee soonn..
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part-4
gunjan comes in her room...dia was sitting on the bed...opening a gift..gunjan came n sat beside her
g=yeh kisne diya??? aunty ne???
d=nahi..samrat bhaiya ne..
g=samrat ne??
d=hmmm...pata ha woh mujhe aur shilpa me kabhi koi farak nahi karte...jab shilpa se milne singapore me aye the..aur usse gift dia tha..aur pata chala ka ma shilpa ki best frend hu..to dusrehi din mere lie bhi ek gift leke aye.
g=thats so sweet..
d=very sweetttt....wase gunjan tumhe woh kaise lage???
g=what??
d=are baba..baat chit karke..accha hana??
g=ha..bohot accha ha...sanskari ha... intelligent ha.. manners ha..frendly ha... caring ha...accha insaan ha..aur ek accha dost bhi ha..
d=tum donoki khub jamegi...pata ha unhe bhi raatko jab neend nahi ati to bethke books parneki adat ha...
g=accha??mujhe to lagta tha ke esi stupid harkate sirf mujhe accha lagta ha..
d=itna nahi...woh bhi har sunday ko mandir jate ha...
g=nice..wase sach kahu to..mane esi qualities ek sath kabhi kisi ladkeme nahi dekha tha.
d=mane bhi..aur papa to kehrahe the...ke unhe samrat bohot acha laga...
g=mujhse bhi kaha...
shashank=gunjan..
g=papa ap??? kuch kaam tha???
shashank=beta...tumse kuch puchna tha
g=kahiyena papa...
shashank=armaan ka koi phone aya tha???
gunjan who was smiling till now..became upset..shook down her head nodded in negative
shashank=beta chinta mat karo...mujhe tumpar aur tumhari pasand par pura bharosa ha..aur sirf tumhari khushi aur safety keliye mane usse ye karneko kaha.. agar tumhe lagta ha ke mane galat kia armaan ko tumse alag karke..
g=nahi papa..apka koi kasoor nahi ha..ap apni jagah bilkul sahi ha..har pita apni beti ki khushihi chahte ha...apbhi chahte ha..to isme kya galat ha??? kuch nahi..ap fikar mat kijiye papa...agar apko mujhpar bharosa ha to bas...dekhna papa..woh ayega..apne wadeke mutabik woh zarur ayega...
shashank=hmmm..
d=ok fine..ab ye sab senti wale bate band karo na plzz......papa dekho na samrat bhai ne mujhe kitna cute sa teddy diaa....
g=cute??? tujhe kabse soft toys acche lagte ha?? woh to mere fav ha...
d=par ye kitna cute ha...isse dekar kaun cute nahi kahega..
shashank=wase ha ye accha...gunjan samrat ek acha ladka hana??? zimmedar ha... accha bhai ha.
g=ji papa..woh bohot accha ha...
shashank=accha beta ab tum dono sojao..dia kaal college ha na..chalo jao..sojao..
g=chal ja..
d=ok gud nite
shergill mansion
sh=bhai...bhaiii...
s=kya ha itni ratko chilla kyu rahiha?
sh=ap kaal kya karraheha????
s=jo har roz...hospital jaunga..kaam ha..
sh=uffo bhaii..kaise bhai ho ap???apki behen 1 saal 4 mahine ke baad wapas ayi ha..aur ap ha ke uske sath waqt bitaneke bajar kaam keliye jayenge...
s=to kya karu meri shona??
sh=plzz bhai..ap kaal sanjeevani nahi jayenge..mere sath rahenege..
s=aur kya karunga rukke????
sh=ummm....mere sath ghumne jana.shopping karne....etc etc..
s=shilpa..tu mera credit card lele...sare paise lele..par plzzz shopping pe mujhe leke mat jaa..
sh=sach?? to lao...credit cardd...
s=wallet me ha lele..
sh=oohhh....love u..thankss...
s=accha to ye sab credit card keliye tha ..hana??
sh=apko abhi samajh aya?? bhai..ap itne sidhe ha..ke apko to koi bhi ullu bana sakti ha...
s=accha ab sone ja..mujhe bhi sona ha...gud nite.
sh=gud nite...thanks..
next morning
s=mom ma sanjeevani jarahahu..
sh=har subhah to wahi jate ho...
s=par ma har din batakehi jata hu...
sm=bye sam....
s=bye mom..bye shilpa..
sh=bye...
samrat leaves for sanjeevani..n while leaving he send a msg to gunjan... "gud morning"
sh=mom...bhai ki shadi ka kya hua?? kahi esa na ho ke..bhai ki shadi ke wajase meri shadi na ho..
sm=shilpa...
sh=mazak tha...sorry...
sm=tera bhai itna sidha ha..itna sushil..iske lie to koi acchi ladkihi lani paregi.iske jaise.. jo isse khush rakhe...samrat usse khush rakh sake...
sh=mom bhai itne acche ha...ke woh apne life partner ko bohot pyaar karenge..im suree... aur bhai apki baat nahi dalenge...mom plzz..bhai ki shadi ka kuch karoo..agar bhai par hum chodenege..to woh to zindagi bhar kuwarehi rahenege...
sm=sahi kaha...tu dhund na...teri kisi frend ki behen...ya teri nazar me aur koi ladki...
sh=ok....ma koshish karti hu..par abhi bhai ko kuch nahi kahenge...
sm=theek ha.
sh=mom...ma shopping pe jarahihu...ap chalengi???
sm=nahi beta..
sh=mom..ma akeli bore hojaungi....
sm=ek kaam kar.,.dia aur gunjan ko leke ja...
sh=great idea...ma jati hu.
bhushan house
g=diaa...jaldi kar tujhe college nahi jana???
d=aj ma college nahi jane wali..
g=kyu???
d=woh annual function ki rehersals horahihana..to sare lectures cancel..to jake kya karu???
g=tu dance me part nahi lerahiha??
d=is bar nahi..
g=accha theek ha..chal nashta karle..thanda horaha ha...ma papa ko bulati hu..
gunjan goes inside...the bell rings.
d=shilpa..tu
sh=hi...
d=andar ana...
g=are shilpa..hi....
sh=hii...
g=betho na....nahsta karo..
sh=nahi di..its ok..im fine...ma karke ayi hu..woh actually mujhe shopping pe jana tha.. to socha ke dia ko sath lejau.di ap bhi chalo na....
g=ma nahi...
d=chalo na...
g=accha theek ha..pehle nashta..tumlog betho...ma nashta lati hu...papa bethiye..
sh=hello uncle...
sha=hello beta..betho na....aur batao...sab kaise ha???
sh=sab acche ha..bhaiya hospital gaye ha aur mom gharpe ha....
d=aur bata sshilpa..sab kaisa ha??
sh=kuch theek nahi ha....
d=kyu???
sh=are ma aur mom bhai keliye ladki dhunrahe ha...aur bhai ha ke...unpe chodo to kabhi khudke bareme nahi sochenege...
d=to ladki mili?? acchi..wase samrat bhai keliye acchese acchi ladki dhundiu chahiye..best..
sha=ha bhai..sone jaisa ladka...
sh=uncle..koi acchi ladki ho to plzz..batana...mom ne kaha ha...
just then a thought came in shilpas mmind...
sh=ab uncle bura na mane to ek baat kahu???
sha=ha beta kaho na..
sh=uncle...agar bhai..aur di shadi hojay to...
dia for sometime was happy...but then seeing shashank she becamw quiet..n remembered about armaan..
sh=kya hua uncle..apko bura laga????
sha=nahi beta woh..kya hana...
d=shilpa actually...woh kya hana...ke gunjan...
sha=beta..woh kya hana..ke abhi abhi gunjan ki parhai khatam hogayi ha...aur woh shayed fashion desighning karna chahti ha..uske lie usne mujhse permission lia ha ke ek saal tak uski shadiki baat na ki jaye...aur mane usse promise kia ha..so beta plzz...hum is bareme sochenege..par abhi baat age baregi ya nahi..ye nahi kehsakte..i hope tum samajhti hoo.. samrat accha ladka ha..par abhi woh dono mile ha.hum jaldbazi nahi karsakte.. aur ye gunjan ka sawal ha..to
sh=uncle its fine..ma samajttiii...bohot time ha....its just fine..mere dimag me ye khayal aya bas...
d=shilpa..abhi samrat bhaiya se kuch mat kehna..theek ha..hum badme ahiste baat karenege..
sh=ok....
gunjan overhears all that from the kitchen....she feels sad for samrat
g=armaan plzz tum jaldise ajao...humari wajase...samrat ko kitna takleef horaha ha..bechareki kya galti ha?? kahi esa na ho ke ma apne ek accha dostko kho du..... tum jaldise ajao...plzz..armaan..im sorry samrat....im very sorry....
AFTER ONE YEAR 6 MONTHS...
gunjan n samrat became gud frends...shared everything with eachother...samrat started to like her....in heart loved her..but never told her..as gunjan told him that he was a frend to him... gunjan was waiting for armaan....thought 1 year had passed n now it was almost 2 years...
one night bhushan house..
gunjan was crying seeing her n armaans pic...shashank n dia comes
sha=gunjan
gunjan wipes her tears....n hides the pic
g=ji papa....
d=gunjan..ek saalse zyada hogaya ha...2 saal honeko ha..aur armaan ne apna wada nahi nibhaya....
gunjan closed her eyes
d=na ek phone..na letter..na koi khabar..ye ha uska wada?? ya wada nahi nibha paya to tumhe chodke chala gaya????
g=.....................................
d=ye shayed ab tumhe bhi samajh araha ha ke armaan ne apna wada nahi nibha paya shayed woh nahi karpaya..to aj tumhare samne nahi araha ha..tumhe bhul gaya...aur tum hoke...
sha=dia...
d=nahi papa..kehne dijiye..ye meri behen ha..aur ye apni life ek ese insaan keliye waist karrahiha jisko iski kadar nahi ha..wada karke mukar gaya?? chodgaya isse???? aur ye aj bhi us bewafa keliye asoo behti rehti ha?? gunjan..apni akhe khol...hosh me aa.....
sha=bass karo diaaa!!
g=nahi papa...usse kehne dijiye..dia sahi kehrahiha..shayed ma..na mahi galat thi..uske pyaar me itni andhii...ke kabhi nahi sochaa....usne mere pyaarke bareme nahi socha..mujhe bhul gaya... ek call nahi kia..ek letter nahi...apse..mujhse wada kia....mane uska din raat intezaar kia..papa...apse mane jhagda kia tha na...usiki saza ha..im sorry papa....
sha=gunjan...beta esa nahi ha...dekho beta...tumhe ehsaas hua yehi mere lie kafi ha... tumhe ye samajh aya ke pyaar se zindagi nahi guzari jati ha... vishwas bhi zaruri ha..jo tumne uspe kia tha..aur usne tod diaa..
g=ek pal me hi usne toddd diyaa....mere bareme ek baar nahi socha??? agar usse koi pareshani thi..to woh mujhse kehnahi sakta tha kya??? ek baar phone to karta..agar usse aur waqt chahiye tha..to kehta..papa apne uspar itna bharosa kia..aur...
sha=beta..shant hojaoo...chup hojaoo..jo hua usse bhul jao..ek bura sapna theek ha???? rona nahi betaa..
d=gunjan plzz...calm downnnn...plzz...rona band karooo..plzz..ok??? sab theek hojayegaa...
g=ab kya theek hoga???? pyaar to mane usse kia tha..usne mujhse nahi..isiliye ab takleef bhi mujhehi hogiii..
gunjan goes out of the room....dia was going to stop her..shashank stops her
sha=dia..usse akele rehne do...dhoka mila ha usse pyaar ke badle..takleef milegi..
d=i wanna kill armaann...mujhe yakeen nahi horaaha ha..ke woh apne wadese mukar gayal.. itni asanise?? kaise papa?? aur ap kyu itni chup ha??
sha=mujhe sirf gunjan ki fikar ha....kaise usse sambhalungaa..
d=usse agar is waqt koi acchese sambhal sakta ha to woh ha ek saccha dost...samrat
shashank looked at dia
d=ha papa.....shilpa ne jo baat kaha tha..apne usse kaha tha...ke abhi nahi..
sha=gunjan aur samrat ki..
d=shadi...tabhi gunjan khush reh payegaii..kyuki armaan ke baad ek samrat ha jo gunjan ko acchese janta ha..aur usse sambhal sakta ha....usse janta ha...gunjan uske sath khush rehti ha..dono acche dost ha..aur shilpa ne mujhse kaha tha..ke samrat gunjan ko pasand bhi karta ha..papa..i no..ke ye sab jaldi ha..par gunjan ko is dhokese bahar lanekeliye..usse khush rehna hogaa....jo usse samrat karsakta ha....
sha=theek ha..ma gunjan se baat karunga...par ha uspe dawav nahi dalungaa...
d=ok...
PRECAP:WHATS GUNJANS ANSWER TO MARRIGE???
YES OR NO???
 
 

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
wow amazing update
totally loved it
do continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Hey dear awsm updt yar,superb.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged
superb
lovely update Smile
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Fabulous Part.Clap1 &1/2yrs. Leap is good 4 story line. I M really waiting 4 Gunjan's answer.Please,Update soon....and Thanx 4 PM.

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