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OS#6: Gopi's Second Experience... (pg 11)

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I Want You Back Now!- Page 1
When Gopi Made A Fuss - Page 2
Aham Gets A Chance To Massage!- Page 4
Badmaash Ahamji Finally Enlightened Part 1. - Page 5
Badmaash Ahamji Finally Enlightened Part 2. - Page 7
Stop Acting, I Know You Love Me - Page 10
Gopi's Second Experience...The Kheer Helped! - Page 11


I Want You Back Now!

Here is a oneshot on GoHam. so the situation is such that somehow Kinjal is not pregnant and Gopi managed to pacify the Mehtas and so Elesh and Kinjal get married. Gopi has told Kokila and her Mama all her plans of leaving MM after Kinjal's bidaai.

It was already 11.30 and the daughter of the house, Kinjal has left to start her new life. Gopi waited for everyone to retire to their rooms then she went to Kokila's room. Gopi stayed strong and tried not to shed any tears however seeing her strong willed MIL's eyes tearing up, she too broke down. Gopi gave Kokila her mangalsutra and they shared an emotional moment. Kokila reluctantly walked with Gopi down to the main door, she did not want to see Gopi's face as it would be too painful. Gopi left with nothing but the gift Panna gave her. Tears streamed down her face continuously. This was her last few moments in this house. She had flashbacks of the sweet moments she shared with Baa, Hetal Kaki, Jigar, Papaji, Maaji, Chirag Kaka and Rashi. Then she thought about Aham. She tried so hard but she failed to win his heart. No, he loved Anita, but after that Umang episode he got to know Anita was bad so... No, she couldn't. She remembered what Kokila told her. She was one in a million. Aham, it was Aham who was just too arrogant. She found her Mama waiting outside and went to hug him. The tears just wouldn't stop. Soon they were driving back to their house in one of the cars Kokila insisted they took.

Meanwhile in Aham's room, Aham was unable to sleep. After the Umang episode he found out that he never really loved Anita. She just looked and sounded good. He thought of all the times she asked for expensive things, the type of filthy people she hanged out with and finally after the Umang episode her true colours finally came to light. Then he thought of Gopi. That innocent girl. How terrified she would get at a little shout, how she saved the family name by getting Kinjal married. How little glimpses of her would soothe him. The day he was hypnotised by her beauty when she wore the green sari. The day her face winced when his hand was hurting as if she could feel his pain. Her pain? She did not care. There was so much strength in that delicate girl that her burnt hand could not deter her from her responsibilities, she had so much strength that his rude remarks never decreased her sincerity. Today, today she was looking breathtakingly beautiful. But there was a kind of sadness in her innocent eyes. Suddenly he felt a sensation go through his body. He was having a bad feeling. But he soon dismissed it as he felt asleep after the long day of running about.

The next day after eating Aham left for the office. Funny, he did not see Gopi anywhere and everyone's mood was glum probably due to Kinjal's bidaai he thought. But Gopi, where the hell was she?! But the Modi's mood was glum because 2 daughters have left and one of them has left them for good. Baa couldn't digest this and sat alone in her room reading her holy books. As for Gopi, she was back to the young girl wearing salwar-kameez. She had cried herself to sleep the night before but she has also made a decision. She would always be strong and never ever trust any guy ever. She had enough. Yes she missed the other members but if Aham hated her, there was nothing left. No link of her and that house.

Aham returned from office just in time for dinner. Again, no Gopi. When he couldn't contain his curiousity any longer he asked Maani about Gopi and found out that shr had left. He was having mixed feelings. Shocked, scared, worried and of course furious at everyone. How could they let her go? That too without telling him? Her husband? Didn't he have a right? Without doing anything else or telling anyone he left the house in anger and drove straight to Gopi's maayka. All the way muttering to himself angrily. How dare she leave, he thought.

The house was dark, everyone had fallen asleep. But he wanted his wife back right now. Thinking that he strode to the front door and knocked the door. Mamaji opened it and found furious Aham standing there in his kurta. Aham was as polite as possible and just said, I have came to take Gopi. Mamaji then replied, but son you... and let his sentence trail as he watched Aham get angrier. She is sleeping right now, tomorrow morning I will bring her, said mamaji after thinking twice. No, just tell me her room and i will take her myself, Aham said. The helpless mamaji just pointed towards Gopi's room and Aham, not thinking twice walked briskly towards it and opened the door which such force that Urmila sleeping in the other room, too woke up. Gopi was shocked to find Aham there at his angriest. Ahamji you... Gopi said as Aham walked towards her angrily. He held both her shoulders and literally carried her out of bed. "Tumhari himmat kaisi huwi mujhe chorne ki?!?!" Aham shouted. Gopi just stared at him. He was angry because i left him?!? Despite the angry look she was getting, Gopi felt happy. Panna then got up and stood between them thinking that Aham was hurting her Gopiben. Aham looked down at the child and controlled himself. He kneeled in front of Panna who was hugging Gopi's leg and said, " mein aap ka jiju hun na? Aur ab aap ki Gopi meri ho gayi hai na? To mein isse lene aaya hun. Aap bhi humare ghar apni Gopiben se milne aajaana theek hai?" Panna was pacified by his soft and gentle tone and nodded, leaving Gopi's leg. All this was witnessed by Gopi, Urmila and Mamaji. He looked up at Gopi who looked away. He said, "chalo" to which Gopi replied,"nahi". He looked at her, his eyes wide with shock and anger. Mamaji intervened and got Urmila to bring Aham out and give him water. while going out, Aham looked at Gopi still angry and said, "tujhe dekh lun ga" Gopi stared right back at him then looked away.

Mamaji started explaining to Gopi but Gopi remained adamant. However deep down she wanted to know if Aham would succeed in taking her away despite her saying no and if he really wanted her back. She still loved him but she too needed love back. After getting impatient Aham came back into the room, folded his hands in front of mamaji and grabbed Gopi's arm. He dragged her into the car against her resistance closely followed by mamaji and urmila. He then turned, still holding on to Gopi and assured Mamaji that he will protect his daughter and fulfill all his responsibilities towards her. He then kissed Panna on her cheek gave her a smile and placed Gopi in the car. Once both were settled, Gopi who was quiet from the time Aham dragged her got angry and started shouting at Aham about his actions towards her and in between kept on telling him to stop the car, to no avail. However Aham's silence gave Gopi strength and she continued complaining but didn't cry because she was happy inside. if Aham did not want her he would have never taken the trouble to drive all the way here at night. Moreover there was no pressure from his family either. Aham just listened to Gopi's shouts carefully. He noted her every complaint and vowed to make up for it no matter how long it took. He couldn't help but think of how Gopi sounded like a child making fuss. He found her cute and amusing but he was going to take her seriously today. Aham finally stopped the car at a secluded area and gave Gopi his full attention. Gopi too stopped talking after Aham started staring at her. She got out of the car when she couldn't take Aham's stare anymore. Basically she did not know what to feel. Angry or happy?

To yahaan se shuru Gopi ka rusna aur nakhra aur Aham ka manana aur patana.


Haven't been able to update my 100% Ishq so couldn't stop myself from writing this. Hope you guys like it! Do comment and enjoy!


Edited by khansk - 20 January 2011 at 10:30am

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That was beautiful!! Please make it into a SS..

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Great OS Sarah! Clap Can you continue this?

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Really good OS!! Thanks!

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@ Fiza & Bee: thx babes will definitely try. m still writing itna kaafi nahin. Do read that too! Loves & Hugs!!!
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Originally posted by desisrock

Really good OS!! Thanks!


Glad u enjoyed! Cheers!
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aww that was sweet :) i hope you do turn this into an SS....would love to see Aham trying to win over his wife LOL

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awesome OS!! please continue.

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