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OS: A Smile In The Rain (Page 3)

bhanu_rekhag IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
so sweet n beautiful
very nicely written

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
nice os.. really liked it..

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
woowww. such a cute and beautiful os...

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Yeh kuch zayada chota nhai tha..cont na..come on make them meet and end it..one more part..we would love that..waise i forgot this was GOOD..but not very good..na..i loved the emotional ones..isme something was missing..might be their meeting..but YUP i loved geet here..

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
really cute and so sweet
there should def be a next part where they should meet!

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
loved it jaz...it was simple yet beautiful...and ur writing is always a treat to read :)

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
yayyyyyy an OS and that too on one of the many lovess of my life, RAIN!!LOL
 
see right now i would have been cursing at maan nonstop but since he loved it at the end, i will spare himLOL.....ohh ya, i FORCE my frenz to like and appreciate rain....my bff hates me for thatLOL....not my fault i am like Geet and lovee dancing/getting wet in the rain....yup, never too oldWink
 
omggg twinnnie....ignoring the fact that this was shortAngry and only a one part OSAngry, i heart lovedd it!!....first, cuz it reminded me of well, meLOL.....dude i still do this....the whole playing and making faces at whoever tries to drag me off....soo i could clearly picture all this in my head!....you know what i really really love about your writing.....well i lovee everything but i will just name one right nowLOL.....you don't try to write fancy shmancy....you are just you when you write and i think the beauty of your writing is in its simplicity and just the overall aura you always manage build in your storiesEmbarrassed....the ending was simply A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E!!!....i lovedd the whole meaning behind this!....i have always loved how sometimes strangers manage to change our lives in such a beautiful way!Embarrassed
 
ohhh no missy, i am still bringing my bulldozer in this OS too....how could you be soo cruel and not show their meeting.....i know it would have broken the flow in the story and all that but still, let me just yell anyway cuz all my logic disppears when something is maaneet related!LOL
omgg you got soo many after you right now....do mail me your address soon so i can kindly deliver them to you haha
 
loved it twin!
lovee you!

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Memory holds foreva..
why dont u cont dis.. it sounds really nice.. 'ey should meet..

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