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An Ode to SAAVAN...... A collection of Poems!!!! (Page 6)

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged

This is another poem for Geethu's wonderful AV..We all can vividly recall that Kul Devi mandir scene, where the whole Saavan family assembled..So here are my few lines, for that scene, from Saavan point of view.. 

 

A Treasured gift-Saavan Family
 
A cherished gift we have
Our family's love
A gift bestowed on us
From the Almighty above

Embraces our  precious life
With open arms and warmth
We feel so honored and proud
Our family, our strength
 
You make me feel
Like I belong
A strange emotion
Once thought gone
 
Am always there for you
From now till eternity
You are safe and sound
In my Family's love and care
 
Our family's trust and belief
we'll always keep and uphold
Saavan family's love and affection
Is always to be treasured and cherished



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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
Siiiiiiimply wonderful, Maris!!!!!!!!
Excellent!!!!!
Thanx!!!

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Splendid, Splendid, Splendid!!!!! ClapClapClapClapClap

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:49am | IP Logged
                                                           
 
Baat hamrai Pakki Hai
Saavan ka Pyaar ki ye ek kahani hai
 
Holi ka Gulaal aur Rang badalthi odani
Jaisa rang bhi rangi kahani yeh
 
Hum dono Ram milaye jodi hain
Mein Tere liye aur thum mere liye
 
Yeh rishta kya kehlata hai
Kahani ghar ghar ki hogi hai
 
Thumari Sapnon se bhare naina mujhe
Hamesha Zor ka jhatka detha hai
 
Hamara is Pavitra ristha mujhe
Bahut Maryada detha hai
 
Mere Ghar pe thum ek Choti bahu hai
Yeh Saas bina saruraal nahi hai
 
  Is ghar mein Sasuraal genda phool hai
Yahan Hamari devrani pyaari hai
 
Hamara Kismat hai ki hum dono ki
Beech mein Kitani mohabbat hai
 
Doondh legi manzil hamein
Kya karna hai is dhuniya mein
 
Uttaran nahi hai mere paas
Par Pratigya liya meine zaroor
 
Dil se liya vachan ko
Zindhagi bhar nibhaunga mein
 
Gunahon ka devta nahi hai aap
Sab ki jodi wohi banaata Bhagyavidaata
 
Tere mere sapne ek hai Shravan ji
 Hamara Pyaar mein twist khabi nahi
 
Choti si zindhagi hai hamara
Par usme Yeh pyaar na hoga kum
 
Bandhini hai yeh rista hamara
Rakt sambandh hoga baccha hamara
 
Baat hamari pakki hogai
Saath vachan se badkhar
 
Aathvan vachan nibha rahein hum
Saathiya hogai is zindhagi mein hum
 
Entertainment ke liye hum kuch bhi karegen
Indian idols bangaya hum dodno
 
Saavan ke Pyaar ka bandhan agni ki sakshi hai
Is kahani shuru with love guru(Ram ji)
 
Hamara Jodi kamaal ki hai
Hamara yeh Yatra hamesha chal sake
 
~~~~~~~~~~The end~~~~~~~
 
siggie courtesy Geethu and Niru.




Edited by maris08 - 12 April 2011 at 2:20am

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
love ur collections of poems!!
esp. the one you wrote with the show names, very creative!!Clap

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Very Very Innovative, Maris!!! You are a real asset to this forum....

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
Lost in your eyes
 
 Seeing those eyes staring at me
Showing such tenderness and devotion
 
Longing to swim in the sea of emotions
Beauty that warms my heart;ignites my passion
 
Lost in your serene eyes binding us forever
Lost within your sparkling eyes dazzling me forever
 
Your hearts love invites to travel into your soul
To that Paradise of Love existing within us
 
Enveloped within our love and passion
Every single moment forever an eternity
 
Lost in your eyes, Lost within your eyes
Am blessed to see them everyday in my life
 


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another beautiful poem written by you!!Clap
the poem matches the siggy so well!!

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