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Tu Jaane Na - Maaneet FF UPDATED PART 1 PG 8 (Page 15)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
hiiiii
awesome start
loved it
love da concept
different
loved geet with ishaan
sooooo cute
cant wait 4 more
what happened 4 maan
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
 

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
sorrryy for the late respondd! Tongue
i lOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD geet's child Ishaan LOLLOLLOL cutie pie LOLLOLLOL 
veryyyy GREATTT updattee! seriusly loved ittt! updatee sooonnn Embarrassed


Edited by Shehnaazz - 09 January 2011 at 8:39pm

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by natashu

Edit*

Sorry for the late reply! Have been a little busy, what with winter smstr kick-starting tomorrow =\
Ahh well.
 
Back to your story LOL
Well, I'm liking what I see here..Embarrassed
 
Although, I do have some questions. So, Geet is 19-20 you said? And Ishan is 5?
How does all of that work?
Geet had Ishaan when she was 14-15?!Shocked
 
I also like the fact that you colour-coded diff. characters..but it can be a bit hard on the eye.
 
You have Maan paralyzed in this, which is really sad. =[
Geet is cute as usual.
Dev-Naintara sure are diff. from the serial. But that is a breath of fresh air for me..
Big smile
 
Ishaan is one cheeky kid. LMAO.
One suggestion though - you sometimes add your own comment to the story in brackets. That kind of takes away from the story for the reader. It's sort of distracting.
 
But, like I said, I'm loving the plot here! =D
 
P.S. I like both Arjun-Arohi & Mayank-Nupur. Either works for moi. =D

heyy thnx and no i mentioned on the CS that geet is 25 so is maan. haila u thought she had ishaan when she was 15 or something? haww Shocked though it does gimme and ideaLOL lolz and i just thought the colors wud make it a little nice mayb i shud just color code ishaan maan and geet? and for everybody else use black? and Dev NT well u see they r eveil almost everywhere and i really like NT's pretend nice self lolz. and about my comment hey it's not fair that u guys get to comment on the part and i don't! is it? lolz just ignore the parts in red if it distracts u lolz. and well there seems to b a lot of ppl wanting Arjuhi so I'll probz use them lolz
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiiii
awesome start
loved it
love da concept
different
loved geet with ishaan
sooooo cute
cant wait 4 more
what happened 4 maan
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
 

thnxx Smile

Originally posted by Shehnaazz

sorrryy for the late respondd! Tongue
i lOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD geet's child Ishaan LOLLOLLOL cutie pie LOLLOLLOL 
veryyyy GREATTT updattee! seriusly loved ittt! updatee sooonnn Embarrassed

it's ok don't worry about it :D and thnx for the commentSmile
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by loveangle_4ever

Originally posted by natashu

Edit*

Sorry for the late reply! Have been a little busy, what with winter smstr kick-starting tomorrow =\
Ahh well.
 
Back to your story LOL
Well, I'm liking what I see here..Embarrassed
 
Although, I do have some questions. So, Geet is 19-20 you said? And Ishan is 5?
How does all of that work?
Geet had Ishaan when she was 14-15?!Shocked
 
I also like the fact that you colour-coded diff. characters..but it can be a bit hard on the eye.
 
You have Maan paralyzed in this, which is really sad. =[
Geet is cute as usual.
Dev-Naintara sure are diff. from the serial. But that is a breath of fresh air for me..
Big smile
 
Ishaan is one cheeky kid. LMAO.
One suggestion though - you sometimes add your own comment to the story in brackets. That kind of takes away from the story for the reader. It's sort of distracting.
 
But, like I said, I'm loving the plot here! =D
 
P.S. I like both Arjun-Arohi & Mayank-Nupur. Either works for moi. =D

heyy thnx and no i mentioned on the CS that geet is 25 so is maan. haila u thought she had ishaan when she was 15 or something? haww Shocked though it does gimme and ideaLOL lolz and i just thought the colors wud make it a little nice mayb i shud just color code ishaan maan and geet? and for everybody else use black? and Dev NT well u see they r eveil almost everywhere and i really like NT's pretend nice self lolz. and about my comment hey it's not fair that u guys get to comment on the part and i don't! is it? lolz just ignore the parts in red if it distracts u lolz. and well there seems to b a lot of ppl wanting Arjuhi so I'll probz use them lolz
 
I checked w/ your CS.
 
..but in part 1, this line threw me off..[it's bolded in black]
A beautiful lady that looked about 19-20 was standing with her hands clasped together in front of the statue of the gods.
 
And, it's totally cool for you to comment. But it would be better if you do so after finishing the part by rounding it up as an author's note...just a suggestion! (:

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by natashu

I checked w/ your CS.
 
..but in part 1, this line threw me off..[it's bolded in black]
A beautiful lady that looked about 19-20 was standing with her hands clasped together in front of the statue of the gods.
 
And, it's totally cool for you to comment. But it would be better if you do so after finishing the part by rounding it up as an author's note...just a suggestion! (:

haww!! i did that??? for reals? damn it and nobody pointed it out??? i'm soo sorryCry i'm so dumb. Cry ima go and edit it right away! i'm so stupidCryEmbarrassed and about the comments i'll try to control myself
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by loveangle_4ever

haww!! i did that??? for reals? damn it and nobody pointed it out??? i'm soo sorryCry i'm so dumb. Cry ima go and edit it right away! i'm so stupidCryEmbarrassed and about the comments i'll try to control myself
LOL!
You sound just like Geet. It's alright. We're allowed to make such teeny tiny mistakes! =]
Rest of it Priya, I'm loving it! =D

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