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FF:: | Tere Naam | (Chap 30-PG17- 16th Feb!) (Page 2)

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Thank you girls. =]

I'm just figuring out this whole PM list thing lol. Bear with me. Just about to add another chapter anyway.

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Here's the next chapter girls. I'm still trying to figure out the whole PM list thing so bear with me. Hope you enjoy it =].

Chapter Two.

"Suniye?" she said approaching a makeshift nurses table that consisted of a table and two chairs with two nurses gossiping at it. "excuse me?!" she was starting to get frustrated with the ignorance that the workers at this Asylum were showing towards her. As soon as she raised her voice, both of the nurses looked up at her in annoyance.
 
"Ji? Kya chaahiye aapko?" one of them asked
"Haan, itni raat ko aap yahaan kyun aayen?" the second nurse asked
"Mujhe patient number teen sau paanch se milna hai"
"Abhi?" the second nurse asked
"Ji haan, abhi, issi waqt" Taani insisted
 
"Dekhiye madam ji. Aap yahaan kisise nahi milsakte. Kal aahkar milna" The first told her
"Ji nahi" she told them, getting more irritated by the minute. "mujhe unse abhi milna hai aur agar aap mujhe unse nahi milvaaye na, to main Dr. Mehta se khud complaint likwaoonghi" she was deadly serious.
"Shilpa" the second nurse whispered
"Haan?"
"Milwaade."
"Lekin.." Shilpa seemed to relent
"Lekin kuch nahi. Mujhe is naukhri ki sakht zaroorat hai. Do bachche ko paalna hai mujhe"
"Haan, haan. Acha theek hai" she replied and got up "chaliye madam ji" she told Taani courteaously.
"Shukriya" she said before following Shilpa down the dark alleyway where all she could hear was the loud and racous laughter filling the asylum and frightening her to her very core.
 
"Aaye" Shilpa stopped in front of the last door in the corridor. Taani watched as Shilpa searched for the right key from the bunch in her hand then unlocked the door and opened the small wooden door that covered the window of the room. Shilpa turned to Taani, who slowly approached the window.
 
There he was. Stood sideways as he was sat on the floor with a piece of charcoal in his hand, writing "I love Mishti" on the wall. She smiled as her eyes began to water and blur her vision. She wiped her eyes quickly and  saw that the whole room had the same writing all over it.
 
"Do saal se yeh yahaan hai. Aur yeh aisa hi karta hai. Deewar par bas yahi likhta hai" she sighed "Baghwan jaane yeh Mishti kaun hai, jiske liye yeh itna deewaana bana hai" she said as Taani watched him continue to write on the wall, happy in his own little world.
"Main hi Mishti hoon" she told the nurse.
"Aap?" she asked, confused
"Haan. Onu ke liye main sirf aur sirf Mishti hoon"
"Onu? Lekin yeh aapko kya lagte hain?"
"Pati hai yeh mera" she told her as she watched him stop to scratch his head as he looked for a space that was empty to continue to write on the wall.
"Pati?" Shilpa asked Taani.
"Ji" was all she could reply as her eyes were still fixated on her husband.
"Lekin aapko yahaan kabhi nahi dekha?"
"Mujhe aaj hi pata chala ke yeh yahaan hai to meh dori chali aayi"
"Ohh" was all that Shilpa could say.
"Kya hum andar jaasakte?" she asked turning to Shilpa.
"Ji. Aaye na" she opened the door and waited for Taani to walk into the room first.
 
Taani walked in slowly. She couldn't take her eyes off Anurag. He looked so different yet he still seemed the same to her.
 
"Jabse yeh aaya hai yahaan to na yeh bolta hai aur na kisiko sunta hai. Bas, apni duniya meh rehta hai" Shilpa said behind Taani as she slowly made her way over to him.
 
Shilpa was right. He hadn't even looked up to see who was walking into the room. Anuraag got up to write on the wall and Taani reached forward and put her hand over his, making him stop what he was doing and followed the arm to look up at Taani as she smiled down at him.
 
He studied her face carefully for a few minutes. She continued to smile warmly at him as he tried to work out in his head who she was. Who was this woman? Why did she so seem familiar to him? He didn't realise that a tear had fallen down his cheek until the woman wiped it away for him.
 
He shrugged her hand off and went back to writing on the wall.
 
"Onu?" she said and Anurag stopped writing. That voice. Again; the familiarity. The closeness. Alot of people called him that but it felt as if it was someone really close to him. But who? He looked up at the woman and she continued to smile at him. Why was she smiling when there were tears in her eyes? Why did he feel like wiping those tears away? He usually didn't care about anything but why, when this woman was crying right in front of him, did he feel the urge to stop the tears from falling from her eyes?

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
loved it
remembered the first episode plz add me in ur pm list

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Thank you Nimmy, I'm glad you like it =]
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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Nice update
waiting for d next

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
pathi hein yeh mera...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming...
lubz...good one yaar..Thumbs Up...whatever problems u have with the pm list...jaldi se theek kardo..Embarrassed...
cant wait for the next chapter..Day DreamingDay Dreaming...

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
waiting for the next chapter Day Dreaming

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paagal onu...Day Dreaming won't say waiting for next chapter coz i know how the pressure is...ROFL Wink 

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