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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME update dear!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
am glad Robbie became good again😊
plzzz update soon dear😳 and thanks for the PM dear😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry girls, here's another chapter. A cute TaAnu chapter😍

Sending PMs now πŸ˜‰

Chapter Twenty Two.

"Maa, Mauli kehrahi thi ke vo dada se aaj baat karleghi"

"Acha. Aur Robbie? Usse baat kiya tumne?"

"Abhi nahi maa. Main usse kal bataadoonghi. Onu se bhi maine abhi nahin ki lekin karloonghi"

"Theek hai baba" Laboni nodded then they heard someone call for her:

"Laboni Baudi!"

"Aayi!" she called "vo samaan vaala aaya hai. Main abhi aati hoon, haan?"

"Theek hai" Taani said and her mother walked off to the back.

 

Taani gave a customer their change then looked towards the door and shook her head to see Anurag walking into the shop and approach the counter.

 

"Onu! Tu yahaan kya kara-raha hai?" she asked him "mana kiya tha na maine?"

"Tujhse milne nahi aayi hoon" he sulked at her

"To phir?" sheasked with a smile

"Maa ne bulaaya mujhe"

"Maa ne?" she asked and he nodded "theek hai, to tu vahaan jaake bayt" she said pointing to a table in the corner of the shop.

"Kyun?" he followed her hand then turned to face her "vahaan kyun?"

"Kyunke agar tu yahin baytegha to tu mujhe kaam karne nahin degha!"

"Vo to hai" he said leaning over the counter to see the wide selection of Mitaai in front of him.

"Onu!" She batted his hand away as it reached forward.

"Taani!" he complained

"Khabardaar!" she warned im "Tu inhe dekhna bhi mat!"

"Main mitaai ke dukaan pe aaya hoon aur mitaai ko na dekhoon?" he asked

"Haan" she told him wiping the surface of the counter

"To kya dekhoon?" he asked

"Jo bhi, lekin mitaai se door rahe!

"Theek hai" he said with a  smirk and sat back. Taani looked up to see he was watching her. "kya?" he asked when she raised an eyebrow

"Ab kya kar-raha hai?" she asked suspectingly

"Kuch nahi" he said innocently "tu ne abhi kaha na? Ke jo bhi dekhna hai, dekho" he teased, making her shake her head before walking off to serveanother customer.


Edited by Lubz.TaAnu - 13 years ago
Pratamesh thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one lubz this 1 came fter a long time was waiting desperately for more of taanulacious scenes^_^
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Posted: 13 years ago
bechara onu..mitaai nahi kha paya...update soon wid more such cute scenes...wil be waitin for d update..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Added another chapter. Hope you enjoy it. The next one, after this is some real of TaAnu cuteness.

Chapter Twenty Two.


"Maa?"

"Haan?" she walked out "Onu, tu aaya baba?" she smiled at Anurag, who smiled back
"Haan maa"
"Tune Onu ko yahaan kyun bulaaya?"
"Maine tere doston ko bulaaya hai yahaan, milne ke liye"
"Acha?" she smiled, turning to Anurag, who smiled too.

"Haan, vo AM aur PM hai na? Unko bulaaya maine. Sahi kiya na?"

"Bilkul sahi kiya maa" Anurag assured her
"Haan maa, bohat acha kiya" Taani smiled hugging her.
"Yeh lo, aagaye" Laboni said as AM and PM approached the counter. They exchanged greetings and hugs.

"Subodh nahin aaya?" she asked and Anurag looked up, his full attention now into the conversation as Subodh's name had been mentioned.

"Nahin, uska clinic chalraha to usne ka ke hum hi aajayen"
"Acha" Taani nodded. Anurag sat back, a victorious smile on his lips.

"Kya hua Onu?" Taani asked, noticing the smile on his face.

"Huh?" he tuned back to the conversation " ahin, kuch nahin" he said innocently "maa?" he called
"Haan baba?"
"Drinks behjdena"
"Abhi laayi" she smiled.

"Tum dono ko mere ghar aana paregha. Hum sab dost milne vaale hai" PM told them

"Haan" AM agreed
"Mujhe.." Anurag began, ready to protest.
"Hum aayenghe" Taani replied
"Taani?" Anurag complained
"Kya? Hum kuch aur to nahi kar-rahe hain na?"
"Nahin, lekin.."
"To hum jaayenghe, theek hai?"
"Haan, chal na Onu, sab dost milrahe. Bas sivaai Mauli aur Subodh"
"Acha? To hum aayenghe" He said suddenly
"Kya?" Taani said confused
"Chalte hai na Taani, mazaa aayegha" He was the one who was now convincing her.
"Theek hai" she sighed then smiled.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good one lubz Onu is stil bothered abt subodh n the way he first refused but when he came 2 know k subodh is nt coming immediately changed his stand was really cute.
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy lubz....nice yaar...πŸ‘πŸΌ
achaa...janaab is still jealous of subodh...πŸ˜†
waiting for a romantic taanu scene...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Lubz nice update...so onu is still jealous of subodh..liked d way he started convincing taani to go once he came to knw dat subodh is nt coming...waiting for d next updates wid more TaAnu scenes..update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry giirls. I can't PM using my phone but here you go.

Chapter Twenty Three.

"Maa, hum ghar chalte hai" Taani said grabbing her bag after her friends left.
"Theek hai. Main thodi dehr main aoonghi" She told them
"Theek hai maa" Anurag said and they left.

"Kitna acha tha na, AM aur PM ko dekhna?"
"Haan" Anurag nodded and turned away to mutter. "shukhar paro ke vo Subodh nahin aaya" he said
"Kya?" Taani asked and he turned to her.
"Nahin, kuch nahin" he lied "Maine kaha ke lagta hai baarish hoga"
"Jaldi char phir" she pulled his arm to speed up.

They walked past a few shops and heard a song blasting out from one of them. Anurag stopped but Taani continued walking a few paces until she noticed he wasn't with her and turned to see him stood there.

"Onu? Kya hua?" she said walking upto him.
"Taani" Anurag gave her a look when she looked at him. She understood when she heard a song blasting out.
"Onu, tu jo bhi sochraha hai, mat soch!" She pulled his arm to walk off but it was too late, he freed himself and she turned to face him.

"Onu!" she complained but he smiled and heldout his hand for her to take it but she shook her head, folding her arms, smiling as she looked to see people walking around them because they were stood in the middle of the path.

Anurag began to walk around her and sang as Taani tried to hide her face in her hands.

Pehli Nazarmain kaisa jadoo kardiya.
Tera ban bayte hai mera jiya.


She looked up to see him as he took her hand in his and swayed with her. Jaane kya hoga, kya hoga kya pata.

He twirled her a few times. Is pal ko aah jeele zara.

Main hoon yahaan. tu hai yahaan Anurag pushed her away and held her there.

He pulled her to him, making her smile as he wrapped her arms around her comfortably. Meri baahon main aa, bhooljaa.

O jaane jaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon main bhooljaa. O jaane jaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon main bhooljaa

"Onu, bas" she told him smiling, about to release herself but he strengthened his grip on her.
"Mera ghaana khatam nahi hua" he said child-like, making her smile.
"Onu.." she whispered, looking around "log dekhrahe hai" she said, trying once more to free herself but he wouldn't let her.
"To dekhne de" he shrugged
"Onu!" she complained, laughing "chor mujhe" she told him and he let go. "ab chal, ghar chalna hai" she told him walking off, smiling gleefully to herself.

Anurag joined her and she looked up to see him watching her as the song continued in the background.Har Dua Main Shaamil Tera Pyaar Hai,
Bin Tere Jeena Bhi Dushvaar Hai,
Dharkhano pe tujhpe Darvaar Hai


Taani looked away but she couldn't help herself and looked back at him to see he was still watching her.

Tujhse Hai Raahatein,
Tujhse Hai Chaahatein.


Tu Jo Mili, Ek Din Mujhe,
Main Kahin Hogaya Laapata
he looked at her and she looked away, smiling.

O jaane jaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon main bhooljaa he pulled her to him and she laughed as she came crashing into his shoulder, making her smile before following her into the house.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lubz thanks for such a cute update..luved each and every part of it..i could actually imagine TaAnu's dance while reading ur update...keep updating wid more such scenes...😊