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FF:: | Tere Naam | (Chap 30-PG17- 16th Feb!)

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Hey everyone. This is my first fanfic on the TL forum. I've written alot of fics on other websites so I thought I'd try and write one on here.

I got the idea from reading many of Meg (IndigoBlue)'s amazing posts/poems so the credit of my inspiration goes solely to her. =]. (and TaAnu!)

I'm currently studying on a Creative Writing course at Uni and I've recently written a 10 page play (based on the TL story obviously).

FYI: some of this fanfic may sound very close to what we've already seen on TL and in hope of not getting done for copyright/plagarism I just thought I'd let you know that it's only because I've watched the first few scenes at least a hundred times and I can't get it out of my head! So I apologise in advance! Anyway, enough of that...I hope you enjoy it and do let me know what you think...



Tere Naam

Chapter One

"Chal, meh tere saath chalta hoon" Subodh said, about to get out of the car with Taani.
"Nahi Subodh" she stopped him "mujhe akele hi jaana paregha"
"Lekin Taani..."
"Subodh, please. Tumne jo mere liye kiya, main nahi bhoolsakti. Lekin abhi mujhe andar akele jaana paregha"
"Acha" he sighed "lekin milne ke baad mujhe zaroor phone karlena"
"Haan. Main karloonghi. Thanks"
"Arre Taani, itne saal se hum doni dost rahe lekin tu abhi bhi formalities karne lagi hai" he smiled, making her smile back. "ab tu jaa. Mil le"

She got out of the taxi and waved Subodh off before making her way into the gates, only to be stopped by a security guard.

"Madam, yeh aap kahaan jaarahi hain? Aapko pata hai is waqt kya time hai?"
"Mujhe pata hai lekin..."
"Lekin kuch nahi" he stopped her "aap abhi andar nahi aasakti. Jaaye yahaan se"
"Suniye, mera andar jaana bohat hi zaroori hai"
"Zaroori hai to subha aajayegha. Abhi meh aapko andar nahi jaane dehsakta"
"Dekhiye.." she tried oncemore
"Kya aapko meri baat samaj meh nahi aayi?" he began to get annoyed "Maine kaha aap yahaan se jaayen"
"Aap meri baat suniye" she refused to be defeated "Meh yahaan Dr. Prakash Mehta ke ijaazat se aayi hoon aur unno ne khud mujhse kaha ke meh andar jaoon" she told him, irritated. He looked at her for a second.
"Dr Mehta ne khud kaha?"
"Ji haan! Agar aap meri baaton par yakeen nahi karte to phir aap unse khud baat karsakte hain" she said holding her phone out to challenge him.
"Nahi nahi madam!" he relented "aapne to kaha to theek hi kaha hoga" he said "aaye na" he said stepping aside and she walked into the gates, past him.

"Aap seedha jaaye. Jo building aapko saamne nazar aayegha, vaheen aapko jaana hai"
"Theek hai. Shukriya" she said walking off.


P.S Apologies because my Hindi isn't great. Urdu is my mother tongue but I do want to try and perfect it so bear with me! =].

Edited by Lubz.TaAnu - 16 February 2011 at 1:42am

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Shocked Shocked You got inspired by moiii?? Shocked Embarrassed Embarrassed That's really sweet..no one has ever actually credited me for inspiration..unbelievable...you're being a Star 

Good start...add me to the PM list. Smile

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add me too lubz....its interesting...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.... paagal anu story...Day DreamingDancing

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You're weeelcome Indigo =] and thaank you Deeps... I think it's gonna be a while til we see the actual Paagal Onu on our screens.Day Dreaming

I'll be adding later on today =]

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Add me 2
love reading about taanu scenes

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Lovely start Lubz! Add me to the PM list! Clap

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very nice add me too Big smile

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