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Mayank&Nupur:HumSafar - Last Part Page 37 (Page 41)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Sajjal...
it was so touching...Nupur and Khushi died...CryCry...Feeling bad for Mayank even though he did an unforgivable mistake...


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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
dont know what to say
beautifully written
have tears reading it
perfect end

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Sajjal, I have no words to convey you, what I am feeling right now ... I cannot say anything apart from one thing that this was my favourite part of the story and that Nupur's character was perfect and I absolutely support what she did - I feel disgusted of Mayank - though he is repenting .... But, urghh ... It hurts so much ... You are one of my favourite writers because you have the strength to bring me to tears and make my heart feel the pain and agony and everything else ... Hats Off To You and this story is one of my favourites ... Brilliant job!!

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
i m satisfied with the ending!
what Mayank did was unforgivable
but plz from now on no more sad ending....i can't see mayur apart Cry
nd i want u to continue ur SS ''The Not So Happily After''
the prologue was realy interesting
i want to read further..................plz continue that story!
 
 
 


Edited by Favouriteofall - 28 January 2011 at 11:34am

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
I know this ending is perfect
But what can I do Because this dil always manga Mayur happy ending
Thanks for pm 
And really a fab FF
waiting foe your next Mayur creation
But plz plz this time no sad one.


Edited by DhanakZ - 28 January 2011 at 11:54am

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
UPDATE MY POST AT PG 38 Smile

Edited by drfizaahmed - 28 January 2011 at 1:42pm

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 12:13am | IP Logged
I've updated my post on p37. thanks.

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
omg omg sajjal.......
khushi diedCryCryCry .....she shudnt hav.......anyways nupz died too.....oh god poor soul.......had suffered so much.....betrayal of trust by her husband,the loneliness n then agn lost her daughter too......
ohhhh god........thank god u didnt keep a happy ending! seriously if aftr knwin wat mayank did wid nupur nupur had forgivven him.......not done........
may b hez a changed man but then....he shud hav thought in past.........
 
n seriously u write amazingly well!
 
i really liked this ff too.......a diff one........n d way u wrote was awesome!
thnx for d pm dear!
keep writin n sharing!Embarrassed

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