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Faria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Sajjal i just want to say i was trying to hold my tears but at the end the last para made me cryyyyyy...
Specially the last line----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Whilst Ria sat silently watching mayank greive, she knew her father was asking forgiveness, the day she had learnt to open her eyes and stand on her two feets, she saw her father asking for forgiveness everyday of his life to one woman and that woman was her mother...
Ria closed her eyes and held her hands to together, '' Mama papa ko pleaseee maaf kardein ab woh acche insaan ban gaye hain''

saj i have no word to describe this update.

just want to say i loved ur ending - though it was heart wrenching but for the first time i really loved it

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Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
i dont know how i feel right now. i'm not fond of fairy tells and happily ever afters. but for this once i wanted there to be a fairy tell and hapily ever after .i know how it feels when you lose someone.

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shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:11pm | IP Logged

hey !

what a update!
it literally bring tears in my eyesCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
very emotional .
i am sorry but after readibg this i do not have the stamine to write

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daniella05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
beautifully written!!!
but a sad endingCry
anyway u wrote it very nicely....
thanks 4 the pm

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stuti123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:45am | IP Logged
sajjal....... i am too  numb to write anything now..........this was surely not the kind of ending i had expected .............but after reading the whole update i realised wat nupur did was right..........watever mayank did with her in the past could never be forgiven ...............he was never a good husband .........poor nupur my heart goes out to her.......but i cried alot while reading the ending ......both nupur and khushi died was indeed very painful to read it .........but the FF was very very beautifully writen has to be one of the best FF's i have ever read ................please do write another one soon sajjal but this time mayur should get a happy ending .........reading sad endings on them gives a lot of pain ............nevertheless the ff was an amazing one................loved each nd every bit of it lots...........

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:34am | IP Logged
after reading this i am crying...
even i dnt want to forgive mayank...
but i really really feel bad for nupur and khushi..

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sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Awww man

I had tears

both nupur n khushi died

even after reading this I can't forget mayank

he was such a coward

nice ending

cont soon

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myownarea IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged

Saad!! It was tragic !! But u know I m not sure I wudnt have forgiven Mayank in such a position.. Meaning to say, Nupur chose a certain thing and Mayank another,, there can be no definite way of stating either as wrong. I would say Nupur was as wrong for not forgiving Mayank as much as he tried as he was wrong in trying to protect her in such a manner. Is life worth giving and is it worth ruining anyone;s life for the sake of one's principles. I dont know, its a difficult decision.

Gr8 story !! very interesting to read:)

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