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Mayank&Nupur:HumSafar - Last Part Page 37 (Page 38)

MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
Sajjal... frankly speaking, I never thought I would dislike Mayank (hate is too strong a word to use).. but this FF, especially the end made me do that.. even  though it was only for a couple of seconds.. Don't do this to your readers who love the characters of Mayank and Nupur so much..
You have written it beautifully, you have perfectly written Nupur's part, each and every emotion has been brought out beautifully.. but I'll try my best to forget this update/FF of yours..
Write a happy ending wala FF naa next...

Edited by .Divya. - 27 January 2011 at 5:56pm

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dbr_kmichi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:28pm | IP Logged

well i ve got no words to describe....all i can say was u wrote it down wonderfully!!


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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
princess..what have u done? Cry Cry

i never thought mayank would have done something like this..he is surely not to be forgiven,
a husband is bound to protect his wife, he was such a coward, although i was crying but only for nupur!, she was the one facing all the problems in life, she lost her dignity, her self esteem, her husband, her child, her life..everything, even in the end mayank did have his child..

nupur did the right thing, no one should be forgiven in such a state, she surely made her filth, cheap trash, what he did was not protecting, what he did was RUINING, he ruined her, teared her into fragments, how would she had felt in that full court where her husband refused to say the truth, PROTECTING his friend!, he protected his friend!..even i am taken over by this strange feeling if disgust, nupur was right, whenever he touched her, she was taken aback by the feeling of trash

and princess..i don't have words to say what a master piece u have created, it is too good for praises..

and pls don't be sorry, u take ur time..Hug

Edited by -Mehak - 27 January 2011 at 7:48pm

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:31pm | IP Logged


frankly i never thought i will end up feeling like ths for mayank..true u said even i didnt feel like forgiving him...he just changed ..even direspected the relationship..honur of husband......ths was disgusting
now i can feel why she always felt so digusting whn she herself coul'nt help loving him.....he really didnt deserve it
but than even Nupur didnt desrve to me los evrythng, khushi n even herself....maybe ths was a way she can rest in peace.....
i was reading it at my office..cant help it....i was all in tears half way whn i stopd reading it...couldnt take it....thts y late at comenting
but ths story was really .....cant say painful cant say lovely..dont know wht it holds...but it touches u right at the heart
keep up the gud work...ur an awesum writer......ClapClap.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 28 January 2011 at 1:40pm

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
i don't know what to say.....after a long time a fiction has brought tears in my eyes....
thanks for giving us this FF

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-firebird- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:55pm | IP Logged could u do thisCry..........u killed khushi nd nupur bothCry.......i can't stop myself crying....especially after reading the last heart I loved was a perfect ending

Edited by ridi_onasis - 27 January 2011 at 11:00pm

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Faria. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Sajjal i just want to say i was trying to hold my tears but at the end the last para made me cryyyyyy...
Specially the last line----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Whilst Ria sat silently watching mayank greive, she knew her father was asking forgiveness, the day she had learnt to open her eyes and stand on her two feets, she saw her father asking for forgiveness everyday of his life to one woman and that woman was her mother...
Ria closed her eyes and held her hands to together, '' Mama papa ko pleaseee maaf kardein ab woh acche insaan ban gaye hain''

saj i have no word to describe this update.

just want to say i loved ur ending - though it was heart wrenching but for the first time i really loved it

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Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
i dont know how i feel right now. i'm not fond of fairy tells and happily ever afters. but for this once i wanted there to be a fairy tell and hapily ever after .i know how it feels when you lose someone.

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