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Mayank&Nupur:HumSafar - Last Part Page 37 (Page 36)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
very awesome update...
plz end it on happy note..not on sad one...
thnx for the pm..

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
sajjal i loved it...........
i guess first happy updateEmbarrassedLOL
loved mayu in this.......finally they were happy forgettin their past.........
n abt d endin.......as far as possible plz keep it happy but it also depends on d suspense thing.......if mayuz mistake is not forgivable.....then sad wil also do......Embarrassedwill wait to read it.........
but its endin......it feels sad but then its  a ss..!!
thnx for d pm!
do cont soonEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Obviously we want a happy ending

it was such a cute update

reallllllyyyy loved it

cont soon

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged

First of all, sorry for being late with the comments. Uni has started again and I've been sick for the last two weeks...

Part 3  - Awesome!

Mayank saying sorry at the beginning was touching'but what happened b/w them? I'm so eager to find out.

Father-Daughter meeting was beautifully written!!! Mayank being scared of how she would react and feeling bad for abandoning them'and Khushi was just adorable! It's so sad when she said she wanted to be a doctor when she grew up'she is little that she doesn't understand the severity of her disease and is hopeful about the future. It was very realistic.

Yay, Nupur is Pregnant'but again there is a twist. Her decision, to go ahead with this pregnancy eve when she knows it's dangerous for her, shows the mother in her'who is ready to fight even death for her little baby.


"do you know how dirty I feel Mayank, no matter how many showers or baths I take, I feel like some filth off the roads and its all because of you" 'Again' I want to know what happened in the past'

 Part 4

Another great part! Mayank thought of society and not his wife? Not her fault? I'm really curious as to what the specific reason behind their separation'It seems Mayank does regret what he had done and I hope Nupur forgives him.

Nice song! So apt for their situation.

Aww'Mayank made pancakes for Nupur. So sweet and how she related the summersault in her stomach to baby throwing tantrums..that was so cute!        Nupur is a tough cookie! She opted for the apple even though she craved for the pancake. Glad she did eat it at the end! Otherwise, Mayank's efforts would've gone to waste.

Omg, Nupur collapsed..

 

Mayank may not have been a good husband in the past but he is a great father now! Loved how he brought in the laptop for Khushi so she can see her Mama and loved how he watched the two talk'so sweet!! I really hope this family gets their happy ending!

Will try to comment on the rest of the parts soon.


Edited by Ishita16 - 23 January 2011 at 9:08pm

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
superb update
luved their dance....soooo romantic
bt why nupur hates mayank soooo much dat she feels disgusted by him touching her...want 2know the truth
plzzzzzz happy ending only n cont soon

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
amazing update sajjal.........it was fab .....loved every bit of it lots.......nd ofcourse we want a happy ending ..........do continue soon eagerly waiting for next part............

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 8:40am | IP Logged
awesome update

thx alot for the pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
hey wonderful update  :) but the last bit,.aww thats so sad..I m curious..what happened? :(
Loved the way mayank made her feel loved..it was beautifully written!! :)

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