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Mayank&Nupur:HumSafar - Last Part Page 37 (Page 11)

cutiepie12 Goldie

Joined: 15 March 2010
Posts: 2461

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
oh GOD sajjal Smile
dis is da most innovative part i had ever ever read.....
i knw nupur ws right bt after all wht mayank did ws for deir daughter....
loved da way u portrayed it n ofcourse its ur own concept...i cn never doubt ur intentions or concept...
u left me speechless wid dis part.....awesum..simply mindblowingClap

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preitygal99 Senior Member

Joined: 16 April 2010
Posts: 547

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Hey Sajjal,
That was amazing
The story is moving fast and that is what keeps readers glued to this.
I was little worried that how will u show them togather again but the way u wrote it was wonderful
Her dilemma.....His decision....His note were all just Fab
Waiting for ur next update

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munni_sheela Goldie

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Posts: 1439

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
awesome part
ur story rocks dear
not to be sad
thnx for pm

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MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 30 October 2009
Posts: 15940

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Sajjal... don't be embarassed.... so wht if the basic ingridient is the same.. the recipe will turn out to be different... so, just continue with the updates..
And that was a very beautifully one...

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 3583

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Amazing part dear
I can understand the Mayur position and pain
Hope every thing will be fine soon
And dear we really believe U

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.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

Joined: 31 March 2009
Posts: 7662

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
Reserved... will unres in the weekend... second res in one week... gr8... LOL
Okay i'm relly curious now... What happened in the past that Nupur hate shim so much? I mean killing a child is awful and very painful but with Khushi some of the pain must have healed right? so it can be the sole reason she hates him.... Okay Sajjal ur keeping me in suspence.. i soo wanna know...But i feel awful for Nupur poor thing... First she kills he rown child, then he does something and she leaves him alone with a child in her womb.... She must have suffered alot and now Khushi... I'm on the verge of crying....Ouch
For Mayank i feel his sorry for what he did. Bu what did he do? and is it forgiveable? Ermm 'But mayank put a tablet in her drink Shocked but hew as wronmg but right too.... It was now or nver and Nupur would never allow  him so... I'm happy at least he did something right... i hope everything will be alrite with Khushi...especially with Nupur... If she loses her... i can't even imagine... Stern SmileOuch
Once again Sajjal a brilliant update... U left me with tears...

Edited by princez_94 - 16 January 2011 at 8:21am

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tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9121

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
awwwesome prt
Thanxxxxxx for d pm

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Nirvrithi Goldie

Joined: 29 June 2010
Posts: 1831

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
Hey Sajjal -
You don't have to be sorry or embarassed at all Smile  Only the basic concept is same.. And especially with this update, you prove your story is entirely different..
I loved this part too much. In any other situation ,I wouldnt have supported what Mayank did.. but his intention was pure ,he didnt want Nupur to regret later.. and Nupur also didnt find anything wrong there.
I loved the way you handled the whole partThumbs Up
Just worried that what Mayank would have done in past.. No,no- I dont want to hear extra marital affair.. In that case, I will never ever want Nupur to forgive himConfused So..pls..find some other reason, yet valid and convincing.  But as u said, if its based on true story u wish.. Smile

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