Mayank&Nupur:HumSafar - Last Part Page 37 - Page 29

hi

princess..what have u done? 😭 😭

i never thought mayank would have done something like this..he is surely not to be forgiven,
a husband is bound to protect his wife, he was such a coward, although i was crying but only for nupur!, she was the one facing all the problems in life, she lost her dignity, her self esteem, her husband, her child, her life..everything, even in the end mayank did have his child..

nupur did the right thing, no one should be forgiven in such a state, she surely made her filth, cheap trash, what he did was not protecting, what he did was RUINING, he ruined her, teared her into fragments, how would she had felt in that full court where her husband refused to say the truth, PROTECTING his friend!, he protected his friend!..even i am taken over by this strange feeling if disgust, nupur was right, whenever he touched her, she was taken aback by the feeling of trash

and princess..i don't have words to say what a master piece u have created, it is too good for praises..

and pls don't be sorry, u take ur time..🤗
Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago

HEY DEAR

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

i don't know what to say.....after a long time a fiction has brought tears in my eyes....

sajjal.......how could u do this😭..........u killed khushi nd nupur both😭.......i can't stop myself crying....especially after reading the last line......so heart wrenching...........bt I loved it......it was a perfect ending Edited by ridi_onasis - 13 years ago

Sajjal i just want to say i was trying to hold my tears but at the end the last para made me cryyyyyy...
Specially the last line----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

i dont know how i feel right now. i'm not fond of fairy tells and happily ever afters. but for this once i wanted there to be a fairy tell and hapily ever after .i know how it feels when you lose someone.

hey !

beautifully written!!!
but a sad ending😭

sajjal....... i am too  numb to write anything now..........this was surely not the kind of ending i had expected .............but after reading the whole update i realised wat nupur did was right..........watever mayank did with her in the past could never be forgiven ...............he was never a good husband .........poor nupur my heart goes out to her.......but i cried alot while reading the ending ......both nupur and khushi died ........it was indeed very painful to read it .........but the FF was very very beautifully writen ..........it has to be one of the best FF's i have ever read ................please do write another one soon sajjal but this time mayur should get a happy ending .........reading sad endings on them gives a lot of pain ............nevertheless the ff was an amazing one................loved each nd every bit of it lots...........