FF...I'll make you love me!! chap 9 pg 15 14 june (Page 11)

serialmaniac IF-Dazzler

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waiting 4 nxt update.....jaldi karbo

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tukun2009 Senior Member

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plllllllllllllsssssssss upadateCry.have u left the ff

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meena.. IF-Sizzlerz

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rani plz update soon waiting for next

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ya me too waitng eagerly 4 ur updateCry

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hey peeps, sry 4 da loooooong delay as usual but ive been in n out of hospital n uni so dint have da time!!! im gonna be updatin now but plz excuse me for the next 3 weeks as i have examz but after dat im gonna be updating regularly..inshAllah!! so sry a gajillion times n i have been reading ure comments and i must say im very pleasantly surprised dat u guys liked this ff so much dat u kept commentin even after dat long!! so plzzz keep up da spirit!! hope u like da much awaited update n dun 4get 2 comment!!! enjoy!!!
Chapter 5
"What will happen now?", asked a trembling Pratigya. "Don't worry, everything
will be fine. Just lay low for a while, let him simmer down. I'll get the notes for
you, avoid going out, even to the uni for a couple of days. I'm sure his obssesion
will pass over", Rolly reasoned back. They were both nervous but Rolly tried to
keep Pratigya calm and put on a brave face. They were in a rickshaw and were
going back to Pratigya's place. Pratigya held onto Rolly's hand all through the
way, she heard her heart beat so loudly that she could easily tune out the
rickshaw's noise! Rolly stayed at her place for a couple of hours and then left.
Pratigya made sure all the windows of her room were locked and she also bolted
the door as soon as Rolly left. "No, I have to be brave! I can't let some random
guy run my life around like this, I have to handle this situation carefully and get
myself out of this mess. I will not panic.." she kept assuring herself as she sat in
front of her dresser. She could'nt really sleep that night and kept tossing and
turning; while Krishna's constant messages and calls didn't help. She avoided all
his means to contact her and didn't even bother reading the messages. Her mom
came to her room in the morning and asked her why she wasn'nt dressed for uni
yet, she just made an excuse of classes being canceled for a couple of days.
"Good!" exclaimed her mom, "Now you can accompany me to the market, I have
some shopping to do." Her eyes shot wide open as she could'nt even think of
leaving the house, but her mom didn't listen to a word and she had to say yes due
to pressure. She felt her heart collide with her chest again as she took her first
step out of the house. "Mom, I really don't want to go!" she pleaded one last time
but much to her dismay the reply was the same. As they hired a richshaw, she
tried hard to cover her face by her hands, duppata, behind her mom; whatever
she could think of. They finally got off at civil lines, a very bustly market. She
ran inside the mall and was signing her mom to hurry up. "I'm coming, I'm
coming..." replied an agitated Naina jee. "Go try this on!" her mom asked Pratigya,
to which she made a face but got pushed inside the changing room. She looked at
the dress, it was pretty modern for what she usually wore. It was a hot pink
churidaar which had pretty, shiny noodle straps, a thin dupatta and was figure
hugging. Her mom always insisted she would wear bright, funky colours and
modernise a bit, and that's why she didn't like going shopping with her. She
would buy Pratigya all these fancy dresses which she dreaded. "Well here goes
nothing!" she led out as she tried on the dress. She twirled around to see how she
looked, not my style she thought.  She opened the changing room's door and was
about to call her mom when someone grabbed her by the waist, put their hand on
her mouth and pushed her back inside; pinning her to the wall. He locked the door
but still managed to hold her mouth shut with his other hand. It was none other
than Krishna. "Shshshshshsh!! not a sound!" he ordered, and her feeble attempts
of stuggles died down. "Why were'nt you anwering my calls?? I called you 296
times in the night, why were'nt you picking up? And then I messaged and you
didn't even bother reading them (both had!)! Were you trying to avoid
me?? Answer me damn it!" he said in a whispery but serious tone, which made her
goosebumps rise. She made some noises and then he realised he still had his hand
on her mouth, "I'm going to remove my hand now, and if you make a single sound
or do anything to attract attention, the people who do come are not going to find
us just standing here" he threatened. Pratigya's eyes were wide with shock again
and she quickly nodded her head up and down. He slowly removed his hands and
she looked up at him. She was feeling very embarrased as the dupatta she wore
around her neck was no more than a line and her almost strapless dress showed a
bit too much then her liking. So she scooted away a bit and tried to pull her
dupatta down, but he just pulled her back and shoved the dupatta away again.
She looked up at him wid a shocked expression and quickly tried to pull it back
down again, but he just pinned her hands to her sides. "So this is what you were
trying to do?? Oh God! I should've known you would'nt dare avoid me without a
special reason. I'm so stupid, you wanted to surprise me with this new look of
yours and I....well forget it, and I must say I like what I see! I knew you were
beautiful from the day I saw you but you amaze me everytime I set my eyes on
you!" he ranted on. He slowly took her wrists in his hands and brought them
closer to his face and   gently kissed her delicate fingers. She tried to pull back
her arms but he just smilingly watched her struggle. Then he suddenly let go, and
as soon as he did; she tried to move back again and this time he let her move
away. But as soon as she tried to grag her real dupatta he jerked her back against
the wall. "Wha..." she was about to question him but he cut her off by placing his
index finger on her lips. She was too scared to do or say anything so her eyes
just followed  his stare whuch was guided by his finger moving on her face. He
sensualy and slowly circled her lips, enjoying every bit of the sensation.
Pratigya's breathing quickened as he moved towards her neck, all the while his
eyes following his touch. Krishna slightly pulled the dupatta away from her neck,
as it hindered his path, and she closed her eyes in fear of what was about to
happen next. He moved towards her shoulder and pushed the strap almost off it
when he saw her panting and scared. He was completely in awe of her innocense,
she looked like an angel from heaven with her eyes shut and a worried expression
on her face. He pulled the strap and her dupatta back in place but could'nt help
himself from placing a kiss on her peachy cheeks. She immidiately opened her
eyes and pushed him back, while he just stood there smiling. Pratigya almost got
through the door when he held her wrist once again and said, "Thanks for meeting
me here! I knew you would'nt refuse me and my request!" then let her go. All the
while she was out she kept thinking about the incident and his supposed request,
"What was he talking about?" she kept thinking. Finally when she came back she
went through all his messages and was shocked out of her wits when she read

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tukun2009 Senior Member

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged

amazing updateClapall the best for ur exam and pls update soon

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sizzlingDiva Senior Member

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:42am | IP Logged
That was a lovely update. Thumbs Up .
Plz include sm trio scenes of K-T-C as well. And as soon as the next epi is ready pm me.
I'll be waiting for it.
And all the best for your xams.

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Eden_luvsKriya IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Amazing chaps rosh-star........jus love ur writing....update soon n All d best 4 ur exams....

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