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FF-M&G-**ANIMOSITY** THREAD 3- link to thread 4 (Page 74)

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still waiting.

how long 2 update?

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thanks you all…. :D
will be UPDATING any mom…
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cant believe u r updating animosity...
was just reading it...the last 4 parts again....to relive the story...
waiting for it....

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Finally ur updating
plzzzzz hurry up

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***ANIMOSITY***
part 37
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
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''''''''''''''''''Past''''''''''''''''''''
OMG i just watched Geet'. lol
they niked my dialog from animosity''
"my son will take revenge from you"
LOL
heheh except my was serious'. lol
----------USA----------

Maan & geet lands at the airport. Geet was supper exited. She started to get hyper. Clinging on to maans arm. She was scared at the same time & exited. She is at the USA airport! Actually at the airport. She was supper exited. Supper happy. She ran in from one shop to another at the airport. Maan just looked at her & smiled. Seeing his babyish wife. Who seemed like found a new toy. Both stepped in to there black limo... Geet couldn't stop talking... Her eyes widens seeing the LAs big buildings.. They arrived at night... The whole town was glowing. She was loving it...
Geet- oh this is so beautiful. I love this place...
Maan smiles & brings her in to his hug... Geet rests her head on his chest... Playing with his hand...

Both Checks in to the hotel... Same room. There body seems to give up as soon as they hit the bed.... Jet leg! Sleeping for 2whole days....

Geet woke up... Still tired..... Maan was still sleep. She Takes a long warm bath After ordering some breakfast...
Geet was playing with the soap. She still couldn't come to conclusion that she is actually in USA! She wanted to visit the whole place... But maan came here for work! She had a doubt he will be free...
Maan suddenly walks in... Geet jumps turning round instantly... Making sure she is covered with foam... Maan was lost in his wife beauty... He sat by the edge and slowly started to remove her curl....
Maan- we sleep on the same bed.... Cuddled up on one another arm.... & you still sigh.... Geet blushed with his soft words... It was so inviting... But maan slowly moves out seeing geets restlessness...
Maan_I won't touch you until you want me to... Geet looks back but by the time she does... The door was closed.

Geet took a sigh relive & quickly takes a shower before walking out. Maan was again lost. He already could feel the hardening.... Geet looks at him then quickly walks to the wardrobe to get some cloths... But maan hugs from the back... Drinking water from her cheek. Geet started to breath hard as his hand started to undue her bath rob. She stops him. Turning her self round... She knew well if he kisses her now... Both will loose it & end up doing something which they will regret later. Geet looks at him... With pleading eyes... But maan had no intention to stop... She was too Tempting... But he closes his eyes... Letting all the felling flow & frees her

It was 2 noon when both walks out. Geet was holding maans hand tight.
Maan- ka hua?
Geet- I don't know! Nervous.
Maan- bedroom me to hamesha dur dur rahiti ho! Aur ahia itni paas? Geet gives him a glare. Annoyed.
Maan smirks. Knowing exactly how to irritate her...
Geet- because there are no danger! Here not!
Maan slowly comes behind her. Hugging tight & whispers in he ear...
Maan- Maan sing khurana is very unpredictable!... & dangerous....... Anywhere........
Geet- acca... Jaisy?
Maan twists her round and gives her full mouth kiss.... In the middle of the hotel.... Everyone staring... Then clapping.... Geet looks at him with wide eyes...
Maan smirks- let's go...

Maan paid a visit to few of his new casino round LA. One of the biggest one in the town. The manager came out to great them personally.
Whole area was crowded. Milliners... Billionaires... Everyone trying there luck. Some are over joyed about the winning while someone at the point of break. Bouncer & security guards were round. Maan & geet went to the pub... Where view wasn't nice for Geet at all. There were girls poll dancing. Naked... Well if you say a bikini top and sexy nickers cover any thing... There were men just drooling over... Geet felt sick. This is not her life style at all!... This is luxury Pleasure for rich... Or for supper sick rich!
Geet looked way from those girls who had no dignity at all! Mens were paying money... Maan noticed the disgusting look on Geets face.... Maan closes his eyes... This is not her lifestyle at all. He may have seen this before but she haven't....
Geet holds maan tighter & closer to his embrace................... Like she will be sick any moment...
Maan- do you want to play.
Geet looks up in shock.................. What does he mean by play?
Maan- I mean poker!
Geet nodes. She just wanted to get out of here.
Both flows the security guards where they enter the private room.................. It was quit. With soft music................... There different mens with There respective partners!................. Were they even there wife?........ Geet asked her self questioningly................ & the most shocking was................ A 70 years old man with probably 18 years old girl. She eyed maan! Of course anyone knew him. He was a eye cone all Over the world. Geet holds maan tighter.
Geet- where are we?
Maan- don't worry..................... It's a private room for this game. geet nodes........................ It just looked so scary & dangerous. Security guards everywhere with guns................. & people............... Billionaire! They looked hideous!

Caller- good evening everyone. It's a great honer that Mr & Mrs khurana the owner of xyz casino will be playing with us.
Manager- how much money shall I bring sir? He asked kindly...
Maan- 150 million.
Geet looks at maan instantly. What was he talking about? 1...1...150 millions!
Manager- yes sir!
Everyone settled down. The 18 years old girl sat next to maan while Geet on the other side........................ Maans hand round her waist. She was petrified & maan realized that well.
Girl- hello sir. She smiled at maan... Geet could kill her out of annoyance! Her half boob was out....................... Now leaning towards maan. Geet gave maan a nudge who barely noticed the girl.
Maan- ka hua?
Geet points at the girl.
Maan looks at the girl & back to Geet...
Maan- what happen.
Geet- change place!
Maan- why?
Geet- I don't like anyone drooling over you.
Maan smiles. He was loving his wife possessiveness . They swap place...................the girl didn't like it......................... Geet ignores.
The game was long & maan was winning. No surprise there...

At the end of the game maan told the manager to put the money back in to the casino... They were about to leave when the girl stops them again...
Girl- I am marisa.
Maan looks at her! Impressed................... She had the gut to introduce her self.................. And that to In-front of his wife.................... With 20 odd security guards!
Maan- maan khurana. He shakes her hand & my wife mrs Geet khurana.
Marisa- impressive. This my husband mr nishab.
Maan looks at him. Recognizing the name.
Geet who was there silent.. Started to get irritate!- oh!
Maan looks at her.................... That's the first sound she made!
Geet- I thought that's your grand pa!
Maan nearly burst out in laugh! Of course this was a private place. & everyone is someway special! Here people will play with words... But not blunt! But this was his wife. He smiled... & that's why he loved her. She had the gut to face anyone! No matter who they are.
The girl was offended.
Geet- sorry... But a 70 years old men! & 18 years old girl! I mean... You really need to open your eye! Unless you don't have any dignity left!
Geet gives her a glare. Knowing exactly with what intention she was talking to maan.................. Both walks off. Leaving the marisa with her grandpa husband!

Geet snapped at maans every word after that! She hated this environment. It's so fake.


'''''''''..present''''''''''..


Maan knew well.................... A big no to paying visit the casino!
Ranbir went out for the day... It's been a week... Maan & Geet barely had any quality time together. He went out with nanny and 8 security guards to the throps park...

Maan & Geet were in the sitting room... Making out... Even after spending half day making love... They couldn't get enough. They were on sofa... Covered by the same spread while there cloths scattered all over the floor... Maan kissed geets stomach... Talking to his daughter....
Maan- I think my daughter is hungry...
Geet- acca... She smiles...
Maan- yes.... Complaining. Like her mom!
Geet was offended... He pulls his hair up so she can see his face...
Geet- I complained? She asked angrily!
Maan slowly comes back to her lips... Playing with geet curve....
Maan- shall I remind you... He smirks... Before she could even say another word........... It became another love making out session....

A week have passed. Geet was cooking while Ranbir playing... & maan talking to someone over the phone about shiv. Everything under Shives name have been transferred to maan! He have nothing! Maan have put him in a situation where there was no return. He wanted to see him on the road. Plead! He won't forgive him this easily! Specially after what he have done! & that Dev! He will just beg for his death!

Geet finished cooking... Nanny came in and helped Ranbir to take a shower & change... While geet prepared for the dinner!
Nanny left round about 7! She was haired! As geet couldn't look-after him! Back at India she have 6 nanny! But here! Of course she wanted to do everything by her self! & they wanted some alone time to spend.

Maan gives her a kiss before all three sat down to have dinner'..









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  part 38


sorr for late update''
well' i will try to update another 2mx'.
i kinda gt bc to the animosity zone'
but won't promise'.
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 March 2011 at 12:28pm

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 3:37pm | IP Logged

great update

it was amazing
wen geet sed i thought it was ur grand pa
doc ontinue
can u make it more longer
i love reading dis ff
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