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FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
do reread ... if you have forgotten everything ... lol sorry

Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

part 39
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
Thanks you' thank you' thank you'.
PLS so press the like button' nd pls do commentEmbarrassed
PLEASE you don't address me as
keyama... pls adress me as
Fire... or safire...
no more of that nic name... & yes that's not my real name..


Dark gloomy night. A man with black shoe walks out of his black Mercedes. House that laid in front of him looked hunted... Unfurnished. He knocks... It's shiv... He could barely look at maan! His eyes was burning red in anger! In animosity... He could kill him on the spot... But of course no harm could be done with the tight security!
Shiv- are you scared that you have brought security guards with you! ... Maan smiles... He was to sharp that his mere word could damage his ego... In fact he knew to well how to play with him...
Maan- I have good news... My wife is expecting again. A daughter this time... My son was egaring to know where I was heading to... He smiles... Now! Now... I couldn't tell my son that I am going to see one your distance uncle...who is Broke in every possible way. Helpless...
Shive looks at him angrily...
Maan- aww... He still wondered round his broken house... Looking & grading it...- broken chair... No fire! Aren't you cold? He points t the fire place. Very lovely house I must say... He spines round... From far security guards was keeping eyes on shiv...
Shiv- you haven't answered me! Are you scared that you have brought this many security?
Maan laugs- no! No! I just don't want a filth like you touching me... I mean look at you! Worlds greatest ... Was! A casino owner & now you don't even have a peny! He laughs... Scared why would I be? I made you like this... I have the power to even end your last breath! & scared? Are you sure? He smirks... Remember... This is maan sing khurana. The maan sing khurana. He walks round shiv... Do you know why I am here? He smiles...
Shiv- you b*****! Shive holds his collar tight. Security guards runs in but maan stops them with his hand! ... Maan smirks...
Shive- I will kill you! His ange spoke...
Maan holds his hand tight... Ceasing it under his weight- now... Now.. Mr Shive... This much anger is not good for health. Learn to control... Now this little anger gives your enemy the target to attack! Don't you want to know the rule of the fight? I am sure you want to be ahead of them... Unlike when you lost with me...
Shive- I will destroy you... He wisp eared between his teeth...
Maan gives him a historic laugh! Destroy & me! He just laughs his way out leaving fuming shiv!
Maan turns round- I will defiantly send you invitation for my daughter birthday!
Shive- I will kill that b**** of your! You son of a b****!

Maan clenches his fist instantly... No one dare talk about his wife & child! No one dare... He jerks back & punches right on his mouth! Don't you dare talk about my wife & child! Don't you dare... He kicks & punches him few time which was enough to kill him! But he kept him alive!
Maan- how dare talk about my children? How dare you?
Shive laughs- every man have weakness!
Maan punches him again- I no have weakness! They are my life. My world! & I will do anything to protect them! They are my strength! You just seen glimpse of my power.. Just a fraction! He smirks... So imagine what I could do for my wife & child! Just imagine... Your one mistake have brought you here! One mistake... Now think what I will do to you now... Maan was holding his head to look back at his eyes... To show him his anger... To show him the place this Shive belongs to under his feet... Maan pushes him to the floor and stands in his wound... Pressing it hard... Maan enjoyed as Shive screamed in agony...

He comes back home after 2 hours... All cleaned... Blood was gone from his hand... Wearing new cloths... Ranb came ran across the hallway & jumps on maans arm...
Ranb- god pappa! How long do you take? Me & Mamma was waiting all day!
Geet walks out of the kitchen drying her hand- when did you change cloths?
Maan gives both a peck- are you done with your detivtivness on me?
Ranbir looks at his shoe- maama dadda even changed his shoe! Look... & he smell like he just came out of shower!... Maan rolled his eyes... There could be escaping from anyone but not from his wife & son!...
Maan- I thought you are on my side?
Geet- when did this side thing came up?
Ranbir- of course pappa! But I love maama to...
Maan- not more then me! He demands!
Geet- shut up! Tum bhi iski sath baco jaise harqT karti ho! You suppose to take us out today!
Maan- oh yes! Busy at work!
Geet- we came here for holiday! Not work!
Maan- ha baba! But... He became lost for few minute! I have many unfinished business...
Geet looks at him... Bit worried... Understanding exactly what he meant by unfinished business!


Shive walks in... Comes straight to maan & Geet... Who was dancing passionately...'maan was lost in her while Geet wanted to run out with every passing second!
Shive- hello mr khurana. He smirks...
Maan- hello! He hands out his hand...
The surrounding was dark & gloomy. Dangerous. Shive looks at maan from far... With great concentration. What exactly was special about him! There was people round him... Going along with his words but dare not reply back in fear! There was press! Taking picture but dare not have the gut to publish without his permission! There was the MP! Mayor!  minister... With there dirt girls... Dirty thought... But they dare not to go on maans bad list! What power exactly maan held here! My casino! Was! But the shiver of his presence still there! What exactly about him that feared the powerful people! Shive quickly takes some more sips... A girl walks in...
Girl- hi darling...
Shive- anuska... He brings her close & starts kissing her passionately...
Anu- very naughty!...
Shive- why?
Anu- making out in public... She was drunk... A bit... Her hand and legs was already over him...
Shiv- so...
Anu- so!... Not with your best friends wife! She smirks...
Shive smiles- do you see that girl with maan! Anuska looks at them instantly. Maan! The man of power... A mere girl have stole his heart!
Anuska- a girl! & with maan!... That's a surprise... I have to see her!
Shive- I offer you model meriag... Number one modle of USA! Hollywood... I offer him if you could create misunderstanding between them!
Anuska- what about maan him self!
Shive smiles & takes a seep.
Shive- maan! He laughs... Just a small misunderstanding. Not a big one! Because I want to create a avalanche with a small noise. Make sure you convince Geet you are lying...
Anuska- of course I will be lying!...
Shive- well make sure she knows you are lying!
Anuska- alright...

She walks up to them. She knew maan very well. She her self have lost count on how many time she tried to sleep with him! But it's typical maan! She even tried her best to trap him to marry her! But... Seems like maan is way to sharp...
Maan- hello!... Geet smiles...
Anu- how are you hunny! She holds one of maans hand... Maan instantly jerked bringing Geet close...
Maan- this is anuska. Mrs anuska moant. She is a little b**** type. Both Geet & Anu looked at maan. Shocked. Geet just holds maan closer. Engulfing her self in maan. Anu was shocked. Ashamed. Embarrassed. She slowly drifts way...

next- a day out with the family...Embarrassed
Thanks for all the love & support
hope you all liking this' 
pls do leave me some comments'

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love-water Goldie

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
am i dreamming... very very long update please

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TinkJia Senior Member

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
u r updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally, YES!!!!!!!!!!Thumbs Up
i'm up!

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komlika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Do I need eye check up... Yah phir...Im dreaming... Your updating Shocked ... Me waiting Day Dreaming

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ramahesh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
me waiting ...Day Dreaming

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Dilsay IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

almost over over a month...
lets see how far i can type...
will give very long update

a day out with family...

Hey babe ji me Shocked 
The sun has come out from the wrong direction todayLOL
Me waiting Hug Hug Hug

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XXaquafireXX Goldie

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Wow Your updating this finally! WOOT! Dancing
Today must be my lucky day, I get to read updates from Muskaan, Liz and now yours! YAYAYAYAAY!!! I adore this FF so much, will be waiting!!!!Hug

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