Rang Badalti Odhani


Rang Badalti Odhani
Rang Badalti Odhani

FF:Presntn Tinda & Karela-Weird Dastaan:Pt 7D p33 (Page 3)

rafia 24 IF-Dazzler
rafia 24
rafia 24

Joined: 28 July 2005
Posts: 2661

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
o oh shaan's in for it now. wow akshay likes gopi thats new. loved it Clap

Yasharanrocks IF-Rockerz

Joined: 01 September 2010
Posts: 5016

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
rooj awsme.enjoyd readng it.plzzzzz cont soon........

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


destinylove IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 August 2010
Posts: 7616

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
WOW rooj kya naam socha hain tinda aur karela...suuuuuperb...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


saaaz IF-Dazzler

Joined: 30 November 2010
Posts: 4210

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
OMG this is hilarious....continue soon...Big smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


tvrasika IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 April 2009
Posts: 7258

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Tinda hit Karela's car? Ooops....LOL
rooj-i IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 January 2007
Posts: 13493

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tvrasika

Tinda hit Karela's car? Ooops....LOL

did u like the name i gave Shaan's Car? lmao

and thanks Guys will respond separately soon
rooj-i IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 January 2007
Posts: 13493

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
so here's another part!!!

this one is even better!

enjoy and leave comments!



Part 2B

Gopi and Akshay, who came out of their respective cars the same time Shaan and Khanak did, waited for another round of tennis match with bated breath.

Akshay got out of the car to meet Gopi of course and Gopi got out to catch Shaan 's attention. Both were about to greet each other when the sound of bang stopped them from doing so. They huddled closer like scarred puppies and Akshay addressed Gopi, "I think we are about to witness another round of Tinda-Karela Tennis match."

Gopi asked enthusiastically, "Do you want to keep the scores or should I?"

Akshay looked at Gopi amusedly, "Does it matter?" Gopi looked him in the eye and just shrugged with half smile on her face.

Akshay faced Shaan and Khanak again just in time to see Shaan jumping backwards and clutching his heart like you do when you are about to have an heart attack and commented, "It seems that your sister might take the first serve and take the first set as well."

"Nah, I think it might be your friend who will win this one," Gopi responded trying to be in Shaan's good books.

As Akshay and Gopi made themselves comfortable against their cars, Shaan and Khanak were ready to play another match.

Back to Shaan and Khanak:

Khanak put up a fake smile when Shaan faced her and, "So Mr. Tinda, we meet again and this time with a bigger blunder. Your Tinda-mobile has hurt my car," Khanak continued in her sugary sweet voice, "which belonged to my late mother. What would you like to say on your behalf?"

Shaan who was still clutching the place where his heart is was now trying to calm him down at the same time was checking the girl out. But as soon as he heard her referring to him as Tinda and his car as Tinda-mobile, his blood rose up again. Oh the nerve of this girl! He thought to himself and decided to retort back but then he remembered his plan and again put a fake smile to address her.

"Oh I'm sorry you must be mistaken because I didn't hurt your Karela-juice over there, you hurt it yourself along with my car, Ms. Karela. This car was my baby because it belonged to my late dad."

Khanak gave her sugary laugh and took one look at the car and then turned back to Shaan again and addressed, "Haha, you must be joking right? I mean this doesn't look like that it belonged to your late dad. In fact it looks like you just bought it in this century."

Shaan lost control of his anger again and, "How Dare You! Tumhari himat kaisey hui ke meri dad ki memory ki insult karo and that too by insulting my car," he took a step toward her, "first you call me names, then you can't drive and now you are blaming all this on me!"

"Oye Tinda, thand rakh! I called you names only because you pushed me and called me a name," Khanak stepped forward equally, "I insulted your car only because you insulted mine, and I stopped because the cars in front of me stopped and I was slowing down but you didn't pay attention and banged into my car. Also I know what you just said under your breath back there about how making me feel guilty and getting away with all this. Well Tinda I got news for you I'm not your average girl who will back down without a fight."

Shaan just couldn't speak anymore. Color rose on his face due to half shame and half anger.

While Akshay commented to Gopi, "See I told you, your sister will get the first round. That was serve and a set"

Shaan recovered just as quickly, "Listen Miss Karela, In the last five minutes I didn't call you Karela as many times as you have called me Tinda. But now I think it is time to settle some scores. Your car is already messed up that if you make another hole into it, it won't make a difference."

Khanak was left gaping at his arrogance. She opened her mouth to retort but was cut off by Shaan, "But then again when the malik of this car is messed up and kadvi and a Karela then the car just reflect the malik's personality. I don't know how you drive this car or who sees something in this car or you to notice that its rear side is messed up."

Gopi commented to Akshay, "I think your friend won this set."

Khanak was fuming like a volcano which was about to erupt.

Shaan continued, "I don't know why I am even talking to a girl like you, you have no decency in you or anything to find out who you are talking to. You are talking t---"

"Save it!" Khanak held up her hand, "I don't want to know who I am talking to because that would be an insult to your late father to know that he didn't teach his son something so due to respect to your father I don't want to find out who you are. I have never seen such a rude, ignorant, arrogant, childish, selfish'and all the other things'kind of man in my life. I hope who ever marries you will be able to answer you back with equal standards like you do. You are a disgrace to male spices. I pitty the girl who would be interested in you"

Shaan just ignored her, "I don't need your opinion because I know for a fact that that one girl won't be you. You are such a Karela that anyone would want to run away from you. Now you wanted money for your car then here is my card and come to my place tomorrow and I will give you the money."

"Just forget it! Come on Gopi and lets go! Hmph!"

Khanak stomped her feet and turned on her heels and got in the car and waited for Gopi.

Shaan starred after her retreat and then just stuck his tongue out. He went back in his car and waited for Akshay. As soon as Akshay got in he drove away.

Edited by rooj-i - 03 January 2011 at 11:37pm

The following 22 member(s) liked the above post:

christmasshonaisangitasenguptacandy84k.krithikasweetsuteroadsidejunkeyangel_9-shamima-saaaziluvmanar-Ray-rafia 24MFRanjinipurvi08PhoenixRadarFanaahadventure_gurlThe_May_Rosebones88-Deepali-shanakyasharan

priya_cool_123 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 01 October 2010
Posts: 7621

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
lol...... yeh tennis match nahin... boxing match tha... loved it dear.........when will i hear the lines " ladthe ladthe kab yeh nafrat pyaar mein badhal gaya mein nahin jaanti"........ loving it dear......

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Saawariya Act - weird.


Author: mariaa.xo   Replies: 12   Views: 1299

mariaa.xo 12 1299 21 August 2010 at 3:07pm by isomers
quite good but pretty weird !!

Author: _Neetu_   Replies: 5   Views: 823

_Neetu_ 5 823 31 July 2010 at 9:02pm by srk_kadz

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Rang Badalti Odhani Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index