Thanks to all who had commented on my FF. I'm sorry I haven't been able to respond back to each one of you individually but plz accept my apology. I would surely respond to u all one day...hopefully!
Anyways Here's an update for the weekend for this FF. Will update Innocent Vixen later...
Also I have new FF that I am working on so will start posting that one after I finish one of these...
Part 5B
This is love (Kismat Konnection)
Kissa
Tera Teri Dastaan
Chera
Tera Khud Karen Bayaan
Kisi
Se Pyar Tumhe Ho Gayaa
Tu
Maan Ja Haan Maan Ja
Kahin
Na Ab Laage Mann,
Kya
Hai Yeh Sunaapan
Mujhe
Tum Bathaado,
Koi Tho Wajaah Do
Har
Ghadi Ab Khayaalon Mein
Keh Rahaan Hai Koi
Har
Ghadi Mere Khwabon Mein
Aa
Rahaan Hai Koi
Is
This Love….
Mein
Ne Na Jaana…
Is
This Love..
Yun
Hi Bathaana
This
Is Love…This Is Love…
Mein
Ne Chuna Ishq Ka Raastha,
Humsafar
Is Safar Mein Doondtha Hai Kyun
Haan
Baath Yeh Maan Bhi Le Zara,
Toot Kar Ab Kisi Ko Chaahatha Hai Tu
Raat
Din Mere Neendhon Mein
Jag
Rahaan Hai Koi,
Raat
Din Mere Aankhon Mein
Bas
Rahaan Hai Koi
Is
This Love….
Mein
Ne Na Jaana…
Is
This Love..
Yun
Hi Bathaana
Tu
Ne Tera Dil Kisi Ko Diya,
Baath
Yeh Sach Agar Tu Maan Le Ise
Dil
Ka Sukoon Tu Ne Hi Kho Diya
Ab
Haqeekath Hai Yeh Tu Jaan Le Ise
Aaj
Kal Mere Chaahon Mein
Ddal
Rahaan Hai Koi
Aaj
Kal Mere Saanson Mein
Chal
Rahaan Hai Koi
Is
This Love….
Mein
Ne Na Jaana…
Is
This Love..
Yun
Hi Bathaana
Kahin
Na Ab Laage Mann,
Kya
Hai Yeh Sunaapan
Har
Ghadi Ab Khayaalon Mein
Keh
Rahaan Hai Koi
Har
Ghadi Mere Khwabon Mein
Aa
Rahaan Hai Koi
Is
This Love….
Mein
Ne Na Jaana…
Is
This Love..
Yun
Hi Bathaana
It went on for another few seconds and then at last Khanak
was called in. Both of them broke apart as soon as they heard Gopi calling for
Khanak. It was an awkward moment for them. They were out of breath. Khanak was
really embarrassed by her behavior towards him and so was Shaan. They were
supposed to be fighting but what has just happened, they both wondered. Khanak,
who was still holding on to Shaan due to the weakness in knees that she was
feeling all of a sudden, immediately let go of him and without looking at him
she left him standing. She didn't know what she was feeling. She should've been
angry at him but she did the opposite, a complete compulsive moment from her
side. Shaan stood there and watched her moving away from him back to the party.
He saw her walking inside and he wanted to call out to her but nothing came
out. He didn't know either what was going with him. He didn't know what caused
him to kiss her like that and he thought he would expect something like a slap
after that kiss but he didn't expect a kiss. Without giving another thought, Khanak
found Gopi and left the party.
They didn't see each other for more than a month but
there was not a day that they didn't think about that night or each other. That
one small, sweet moment has changed their life forever. They tried to deny it
as much they wanted but they could never do it. They couldn't forget that taste
that smell, that sweetness, that passion, that desire, that eagerness, that
longing which was missing for a long time. Where ever they went, both saw or imagined
the other. No matter how many times they tried to forget each other or that
night, they just couldn't. At times, both would get angry at others for no
reason and would do something out of their character. It was making their
night endless and restless. Both couldn't understand what was happening to
them. A storm was building in both of their minds and hearts. It kept both of them
awake at night and grouchy during the day.
A Month later at a coffee shop in the
morning…
Shaan and
Akshay entered the shop to see a long line. As it was, he was already late for
office and now this. Today wasn't his day, it seems. He waited patiently for 2
minutes but then gave up and decided to see what was taking so long for the
line to move. He tapped the guy in front of him to find out what was going on.
The guy informed him that a girl was making a huge scene with the cashier in
the front for the last five minutes. He looked at his watch, it read 10:19,
"Oh God I'm getting late," he turned to Akshay, " Akshay, you
stand here while I go in the front and find out what is happening up there and
maybe try to sort out things."
Ever since that night, Shaan had changed himself. Instead of being the
aloof, arrogant, egotistical man like he was, he became aware of the people
around him more than ever now. That night had left a huge impact on him.
As Shaan approached
the counter, he looked at the back of the girl and tried to make out who she
was. He couldn't see her properly but he was sure he has met her before. He
went behind her and interrupted them, "Excuse me, bhai-saab, what seems to
be a problem here?"
Khanak, who was arguing with the cashier (about ripping
her off with someone else's order and then amount of money she was asked to
pay), didn't look back to see who was behind her and rudely dismissed Shaan.
Once again Shaan asked,
"I'm sorry, but ma'am you are holding up the whole line and all of us have
been waiting here for a long time. Even we have to go somewhere so please let
me help you so that all of us can get going. Tell me, what seems to be the
problem here?"
Khanak dismissed Shaan again
but Shaan was adamant and was growing impatient by the
second; and he tapped her again. Khanak never liked to be interrupted
when she is trying to sort out things and this man didn't seem to get that she
didn't want his help. She abruptly turned around, "Look Mister, I said I
DON'T NEED YO--", she left mid-sentence when she came face to face with
the object of her many restless nights.
At first she was shocked and scarred like she has just
seen a ghost, but after the initial shock subsided she came around.
"Tum!?!?" she nearly shouted. She didn't know how to react to him.
Shaan was
as shocked as her and didn't know what to say. He reacted almost the same way
as her but he was more confused than her. For a little while, both just stood
there trying to overcome each other's meeting. Shaan was the first one to come out of shock, while
Khanak just stood there starring at him. In all this Khanak had forgotten why
she was having an argument with the cashier, while Shaan sorted the matter with the cashier and led Khanak
away from him to a table. Cashier was relieved when he saw them leaving and was
more than happy to get rid of the Khanak -museebat.
As soon as they sat down, it became awkward for both of
them. Both wanted to say something to each other but didn't know how to start.
It was like as if all the words in their vocabulary have taken a day off. Akshay
came to their rescue by asking them both what they wanted to get.
"I'm sorry for…" Both said it at the same time
and stopped as they realized that other was saying the same thing. Both burst
out laughing.
Shaan let
Khanak go first, "I'm so sorry Mr. Tinda for holding up the line."
"It is ok Ms. Karela," Shaan replied with his trademark smile.
Both just looked at each other and then started laughing
again.
"Mr. Tinda…" Khanak said it half-laughingly.
"Ms. Karela…" Shaan said it the same way.
Both laughed more. From there, their conversation went
smoothly for five minutes straight until they got to a conversation regarding
what happened last time they both met.
"And I'm really sorry for what happened last time I
met you. I don't know what happened to me then," Khanak explaining to Shaan, "but I guess I wasn't really to blame.
I mean, you were the one who kissed me."
Shaan gave
a little laugh, "Actually Khanak it was your fault to begin with. You
instigated me."
"Hehe, no Shaan it
was you who came on to me like that," Khanak looked up to Shaan with a half-smile.
Shaan became
a little serious this time, "No Khanak, remember you left me inside like
that in front of everyone and then you called me names later one instead of
apologizing to me?"
" Shaan,
it was you who dragged me to the dance floor it wasn't my fault that I left
you. You embarrassed me there," Khanak was getting irritated now.
"No, you embarrassed me," Shaan repeated.
"No, you embarrassed me so it is your fault," Khanak
did the same.
"Miss Karela, you were the one to leave off like
that and then insulted me further which led to that kiss," Shaan was getting angry now.
"Mister Tinda, as far as I remember you are the one
to blame the most since you started the whole act which led to that kiss. Why
don't you ever take responsibilities of your actions?" Khanak slammed her
fist on the table.
Shaan stood
up, "Look Karela, don't tell me what to do here. Mujhe achi tarah se
maloom hai ke mera kya kasoor hai lekin shayed appko nahi."
Khanak stood up as well, "Mr. Tinda, I'm not some
stupid Barbie doll, who will do what others make her do. So how dare you blame
me for something you did?"
"Oh-ho-ho," Shaan gave a sarcastic laugh, "Sure I am the
one at fault. Blame it all on me, the Guy."
Khanak gave a smile, "So it is settled then, you even
admit it that you are the one at fault. We can go back to our coffee."
Shaan gave her the you're-unbelievable-look, "Excuse Me!
I never said that I am at fault! You are seriously one nut-shell Karela!
Kadwahat toh khatam hi nahi hoti!"
Khanak was shocked look and sucked in her breath in
shock. As she was about to give back to Shaan, Akshay interfered between them, "Arre
yeh kya? Aap dono abhi toh ache ache doston ki tarah baatein kar rahe the aur
ab yeh kya hai? Bhai you really need to lighten up and let go. Beside it is only
a kiss, not something big, it doesn't matter who started it but what matters is
what you felt from it."
Khanak and Shaan gave Akshay daggers with their eyes and
avoided each other's eyes on this last piece of information. Neither one wanted
to say something to the other on how they really felt. The awkward silence that
followed each of the people present there seemed to have stretched longer.
Khanak finally thought she was done, plus she couldn't
stay in Shaan's presence anymore due to the rising temperature of the shop, or
just her, she couldn't decide. She just knew she had to get out of there.
Before leaving the place she turned back and gave one
stare at Shaan, who was intensely look back at her and she saw something and
immediately turned the other way. She was fidgeting with her bag now and she
wanted to get out of there right away but she knew it would be rude to leave
just like that. She turned back after composing herself and bid them good bye.
Akshay saw her out and Shaan didn't bother getting up
from his seat, he only gave a nod and didn't say anything at all.
Akshay thought it was time to take things in his own
hand. He invited Khanak and Gopi over to their house to celebrate his birthday
next week. Before leaving, Akshay realized the situation and decided to work it
out with Gopi.
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I'm not happy with this update but I hope you liked it!
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