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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Soumya Hug.....thank u for the update and PM......Part 11 was great.....all the planning and Maan comes early. LOL.....l bet 12 wiil be awesome......Maaneet and rose petals Day Dreaming......waiting for Maan's reaction.....plz continue  Smile

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Awe cute part geet is there doing all these prep for preethi and poor maan in geet thoughts lol and so now to avoid dadi tease he goes office early creating trouble for geet and ergh the stupid watchman talking on his khatara phone lol but atleast his panic got noticed by geet but afsos her refle was shouting adi which happened to be the code to throw the petals lol anyways great update and I hope maan melts consider the situation but can't wait to read more Smile

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Awesome lovely....maan entered the dark room....he couldn't understand...how his office was so dark...he understood that something was wrong...how could it be so dark...early morning?! geet felt maan approaching her...maan also felt geet's presence...he slowed down......
both of them felt something strange...their heartbeats raised...!!
they were standing facing each other in the dark.....they could feel each others breath...
& the lights turned on! adi pulled the string to shower flowers!!
omg!! what had he done.....he almost fainted when he saw geet & maan standing there...!!waiting pls cont soon.

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged

Lool so funny how everyone is so scared of MSK. Lool the siren bell to inform everyone of maan's arrival is a great idea.ROFL

 

Nice to see the great MSK distracted by geet and cannot stop thinking about her.Day Dreaming

 

Loool watchman getting distracted by Sheila ki jawani ring tone and start talking instead of keeping watchROFL

 

Oh no maan arrives and geet tries to tell adi. But adi pulls the string and all the flowers are going to fall on maan and geet.Embarrassed

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Loved it..... Awesome

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Yeh kya itna intazar karwaya aur itna short update not fare aur wo bhi is stage pe lake rok diya ku. Its ok that u r going to update in every three day but plz plz with a long one.this update was good maan loosing himself is gr8.

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