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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
ending was awesome
simply hilariousLOLLOLLOLLOL
do continue soon
thanks 4 pm


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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maaneet_ayla

hello...
thnk u so much for liking part 6...here is part 7...hope u all will lyk it....(i'm relly sry for delaying...)
                          ~DIL HAI TUMHARA PART 7~
the day passes by vry quickly as geet is busy preparing her designs while maan is busy scolding others and attending meetings....
finally...when geet finishes her designs...
GEET:thnk god...ye sab tym pe complete ho gaya nahi toh woh devil dracula mujhe kachcha chaba jata....chalo ab sir ko dikha k aati hu....(looks above) babaji plz raksha karna....

in maan's cabin....maan too busy in his laptop....geet knocks...
MAAN: come in...!!
geet (vry scared for the first time): sirr...woh....designs...
maan: (looks at his watch & has a satisfying yet stern look): hmmmm...gud u r on time...
geet: th..thank u sir...
maan takes the file & looks at the designs.....he liked them but he did not want to show his satisfaction....coz he wanted her to go...!!!
he surely thought that d designs were vry gud...inspite of geet being a novice...he had a soothing expression surprisingly...but he quickly changed it to a stern & cold one again...
geet thinks.....hey babaji....ye to kuch bol hi nhi rahe...achcha hai ya bura kuch toh bolo plzzzzz.....
maan sees geet's weird expressions & that she is looking above..
maan: ms. geet tum kaha dekh rahi ho??? kaun hai upar...
geet (suddenly realizes her action): no no nothing sir....
maan: ok...ur designs r just ok.....they can b improved i think....(points out abt 10 mistakes)
geet thinks...ankhein hain ya magnifying glass.....itni galti kaise dikh gayi....
geet: sry sir, i'll not do it again...
maan: hmmm.... ms. geet i want u to give me a summary of all the past meetings in last month....and all the meetings which r due this month...
i want to know how many aims have been achieved & what r our aims now...i also want the details of profits in past 1 month... 
& 1 more thing i want the summary by tommorow morning...
geet: but sir....there r abt 50 files i'll have to go through thoroughly before giving the summary... & how can i give it tom morning???!!!
maan: Ms geet u r an employee & u should do what u r asked to...& if u r not able to follow my instructions....it is clear that u r inefficient for the job...u may go now!!!
geet amazed by her boss' rude & dominating nature....goes out of the cabin really angry....
she imitates maan's accent & stern voice....
bade aye....u may go now..!!! 
ab mai kya karu...????
she goes to her cabin and starts working.....preeti & adi come to the room after abt two hours....
preeti: oye geet...!! itna kaam first day itself....baap re baap..bhagwan bachaye DD se....
GEET: (starts shouting in anger): PREETI TU JANTI NAHI HAI MUJHE KITNA GUSSA AA RAHA HAI...KISI ME ITNA DUM NHI K WOH GEET PAR HUKUM CHALA SAKE....HAD HOTI HAI YAAR....WOH DUSHT DANAV...
adi: dheere geet...maan sir ka cabin paas me h yaad rakh...
geet shuts her mouth...
but....unfortunately...her voice had already reached maan's ears...& disturbed the workaholic hunk....!!!!!
TO BE CONTINUED....
PRECAP: what happened next?? will maan scold geet or will he leave her again..
and maan admiring geet!!!


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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Geet ne toh apne pair par khuladi marliLOLLOLLOL
She is dead
Maan heard her calling dusht danavLOLLOLLOL
Man she is so dead
Maan was faltu ka being so rude to Geet
He shuld forget all thgs but nahi dono ko yudh karna hai
Lets c kya hota hai
Update soon longer part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
wow!!!

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:23am | IP Logged
i just re read all the updates again and thoroughly enjoyed it... fab job girlll..
 
jaldi jaldi continue kero .. cant wait... yeah yeah i know Greedy me LOL
 
love
 
Sana

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Awe maan is being to harsh on her is it to take revenge for what happens in the party and awe I hope he doesn't shout at her anyways great update and haye maan admiring her can't wait Smile

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Great  love it yaar.....Thumbs Up

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