FF *~Dil Hai Tumhara~* rewriting in ghsp forum - Page 13

Originally posted by: macho_muffin

Heyy Crime Partner

 

OMGGG finally got to read this and yayyyy am commenting too!!😆

oyeee, how are you soo freaking good?....and omgg brilliant job at the characterizations!!👏....you have nailed both of their characters down perfectly!....khadoos maan and adorablee, bakbaking Geet😳

omgg their first meeting was again banging, literally!😆....so he let her leave just like that, eh?....lets see how long maan ignores his own dhak dhaking heart for Geet😉....and bring it on Geet, apne boss ko line pe lao😆

omgg i am loving this CP!!😳....can't wait for their second meeting😍....lovee how Geet never knows that whatever she does will bring her to maan anyway!😉

lovee you CP!!

 

P.S. remember to come early tonite or ur dead meat😆....and u got fb?...pm me!