Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

FF:FOREVER IN LOVE :: thread 1 (Page 52)

SimplyAparajita IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 September 2010
Posts: 3119

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Durga.. Ye bohat jyada chota tha... Tomorrow come with 5 times long update.. This is your punishment.. Hehe.. Just kidding.. Anyways.. It was short cute sweet and lovely update.. Cid dadi.. Hmmm.. She shoul be cid for her grand sons.. Awesome.. Eagerly waiting for next one..

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 16 January 2011 at 11:26pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


kahkashansakina IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 December 2010
Posts: 14443

Posted: 17 January 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


bluedreamz953 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 June 2010
Posts: 2887

Posted: 17 January 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
LOL...They sat like devdas!Bechare!!!
This was hilarious yaar
It was an awesome update
Thanks a heap yaar
Love you!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 15210

Posted: 17 January 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged
oh god maan n dev both bcome devdas hw saddddd
waiting for preet 2 propose aditi
n hw aditi is surprised 2 see geet n varshika in mumbai
n precap cid dadi waiting for tht alsoooooo
awesome updateeeeeee

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


ambbiha IF-Rockerz

Joined: 20 August 2010
Posts: 8097

Posted: 17 January 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
poor maan and dev LOLLOLLOLLOL
dadi b'came CID EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 October 2010
Posts: 8090

Posted: 17 January 2011 at 4:16am | IP Logged
poor Maan and Dev
funny update
cute and adorable

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 July 2010
Posts: 8843

Posted: 17 January 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged

Sorry for the short update guys . i hope you like it results are coming up this friday .. i dont know how it gonna be ..its an entrance need to prepare what ever the reaction might be from parents .. this week update ll be please bear with me .. so leave comments ..ig u guys dint like something ,feel free to leave your suggesstions .



Preet was so tensed and worried about aditi's response. He planned a surprise party for her with all her favourites . preet took leave for the day and only aditi attended the office . he was busy with the preparations . aditi missed hime badly . she tried calling him but he did not pick up . it was then she realized that her feelings for him was something beyond friendship . she thought about it for a while and was confused . so she left home . on reaching home , she found a gift wrapped box on her bed with a note on it , she took the note . it read ,

                 " To my love "

                         ~ preet.

She unwrapped it and found a sleeveless white top . it was beautiful and she loved it . she refreshed herself and wore the dress . she found another note in the table .

  " come down get on to the black Mercedes" ~ love :Preet:

Aditi was so thrilled , it was so much unlike preet being so romantic .for a second she thought someone was playing with her, but she decided to go with it .


Dadima was surprises and shocked to see both of her grandsons arriving so early to home . for a secong she thougth they might have come to get ready for attending some business party's . but they looked so pale . so she decided to ask them directly .

Dadi : are maan , dev you two so early ?

Maan : dadi am so tired . don't disturb me for dinner.

Dev : me too dadi .

With that they dosent give her a chance to speak more. They left to their rooms thinking about their love.

Dadi : what happened to these two ? behaving so weird !

Her  CID brain started working and she decided to call adi to know more.

Dadi : hello adi .

Adi : jjjjeee..dadima . aap kaise hai ?

Dadi : am fine beta .

Adi : kuch kaam tha dadima ?

Dadi : haan adi . how is office going ? is geet coping up with her work ?

Adi : yes dadi . the office had completely changed after geet and varshika entered . maan and dev sir , dosent shout at us often . infact he is explaining the situation dadima.

Dadi : wow !! that's a drastic change adi . by the way who is varshika ?

Adi : she is dev sir's secretory dadima .

Dadi : hmmm..that's sounds good . is geet and varshika there at the office ?

Adi : no dadima , they have taken permission for attending their friend's birthday . they ll be back office tomorrow .

Dadi : ooooo'now I get why my grand son's are so dull .

Adi : jeee???

Dadi : adi , what do you think of those two girls ?

Adi : perfect for maan and dev sir dadima .

Dadi : thanx beta . keep me updated with the office happenings then and there . I ll call you back soon .

Adi : ofcourse dadima .

She hanged up the phone and thought "ok my grown ups , you are sad because your secretaries left you alone in office !! let me see how long you hide it from me"

@ maan's room

He laid down in his bed and staired at the cealing . he remembered the time he spent with her. His life treasure .he wants his treasure to last forever . he loved geet , he realized that he cant live without her . but what about her? Is she in love with someone else ? or am I wrong in judging her before expressing my self? I need to find this out . I should let my thoughts free ..

@ dev's room

Dev was in deep thought . he encountered the moments he saw that day "take care sweetie" whom does she called sweetie ? may be a friend ? I cant imagine my life without her .i need to win her back . she does not know anything about my feelings . I must let her know . oh my god !! why are forcing me to such situations ? I had never been after a girl like this before . may be its time to change myself .

Dadi carefully watched her grandsons who are in ready to turn devdas stage . she decided to have a talk with geet's mom next morning .

Geet and varshika reached Mumbai airport on time . they got a cab and reached the venue that preet had told them .the place was beautifully decorated . they met with preet and had a chat till aditi arrived . they decided to give her even more surprise . so they hide behind the curtains .as soon as aditi reached the middle of the hall , soft music began to play and lights were lit on slowly one by one . she stood dumbstuck with the arrangements . preet walked towards aditi , he was blown down totally by her beauty . he bend down on his knees and said

  " aditi , this whole universe beauty is nothing infront you . you look like  an  angel from the heaven . I want to spend the rest of my life with you . so will you marry me ?

Aditi was totally shocked but at the same time very happy . he could not say anything . she stood silently for some time . she walked towards preet and hugged him tightly and blured out a "yes". Preet was in cloud nine . he was so happy . he totally forgot that two other persons are standing behind them .

Geet and varshika made their way towards aditi  and hugged her . aditi was so surprised and had tears in her eyes .

Aditi : am so happy .. how come you guys are here? You dint say me before?

Varshika : if we say it before, then whats the points of surprise ?

Geet : am so happy that you accepted preet .

Aditi blushed and shied . geet and varshika gave their gifts . they had dinner together and talked for some time . they need to leave early since they had their office the next day ' the two friends bid good bye to aditi and preet and left for the airport while the two love birds started romancing .

PRECAP : party time SmileSmile

part 12 :

Edited by mrk_1 - 19 January 2011 at 6:06am

The following 91 member(s) liked the above post:

ssssmarsnehag10pyarisaheliharikashiva25dpurvainlwgeetnehavashisunitasth1maaneet_mansikathrina7176sweetmelonasmi123gagsykasturi11Paingeljuhi_ansaribhakbhartifanalu5123mmishra1Kawaljeet1mons_mbshruthiruchsneha512dh_riticutemishtis-o-m-m-i-eNav2010TishuuBe.edgynan_10shivangi783abina03amalu123bobbydolldoosheekadreamy4everheermeherstorytellermputh-shamima-maanujaanuSimplyAparajitabluedreamz9539staroneserialscyum321ninavipreetymaaneetpayal.gupta177devishreegangesegbPLKG90-SmexySmile-jeyanthi123Maaneet4evesimi91basicquestion1ramaheshsmj1977.shrutikhushi_4eversaumiee-Veritaserum-Vintagepeachsanu3108ajenn--Saavi--punjabi.princeskomlikacharmed ones*Dakoo_Minzy*-afsha-namita25sweet scorpioSahSahkooliiot_areeb..hinal..shah10--aarthi--rsroopalimaansee6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6Sabmeratu.preethiajasraj123kahkashansakinamaaneetsangeldewdropredfelicitysmoak.JanakivallavkhwaishfanDonnaa

ramahesh IF-Rockerz

Joined: 05 October 2010
Posts: 5703

Posted: 17 January 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
loved it ...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
love love love(ar,rm,aa)part 5 pg 21updt

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 22 23

Author: mithilalovesksg   Replies: 179   Views: 112513

mithilalovesksg 179 112513 07 December 2013 at 10:24am by ksgandjsg21
Arranged ya Love {AIMEE's love story in AR's way}

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

Author: arshluver_15   Replies: 65   Views: 39169

arshluver_15 65 39169 26 February 2012 at 5:27am by Reckless.Beauty
FF: Hate Or Love 2: P49: True Love: Pg 4

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11

Author: -Jwalamukhi-   Replies: 86   Views: 47811

-Jwalamukhi- 86 47811 07 September 2009 at 7:06am by amazingneira
FFTo love or not to love.pt20 pg 22 31/10

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 21 22

Author: KC294   Replies: 172   Views: 40566

KC294 172 40566 04 November 2008 at 6:06am by sweet cherry
Love Blind Betrayed Love

2 3

Author: x_Roxy_x   Replies: 21   Views: 14280

x_Roxy_x 21 14280 10 September 2006 at 2:50pm by mannat.urwish

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index