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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Super update----That guy thought Geet was smiling at him LOL Tongue Wink

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 9:46am | IP Logged
nice update....

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Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
wow... cute update.....

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
love it..

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ramahesh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
update durga...continue soon pls

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
thnx a ton for your lovable comments guys ..loved it ... i never ever expected this much responce... i ll update the next part soon .. have a good day !!!Smile

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saumiee IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear............

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged

Hey guys am up with the next updateSmile . its quite longer . i wont be able to update tomorrow and the day after that . i thought of giving you guys a break from my updates Wink.. do leave comments and hit the like button .


A week passed . maan and geet were too involved in their respective works that they had forgotten to think about the other . The day was extremely busy for both . Maan asked adi to accept the internship applications and submit  to him soon . Geet and her friends as per dadi's advice applied for the internship unaware of Maan . Adi who was sorting out the applications was very happy to find geets application . He immediately called pinky and let her know the news .

Adi : hey pinky , see this .

Pinky :wow adi sir !! geet gonna join here ? am so happy. we both ll go to cafeteria together and ofcourse to the newly opened restaurant.

Adi :Stop thinking about food . We need to come up with a plan to approve this application .

Pinky :Adi sir , see there are three more applications from the same college. I guess they have applied together.

Adi : oh but I guess we need only 6 interns here.

Pinky : Sir as far as she talked to me that day , we need to accommodate these four together or else they will seek some other company so they can work together .

Adi : Okay let me think of something .

Pinky : Don't think too much adi sir .

Adi : Alright let me suggest maan sir to transfer other two applicants to our Mumbai branch so we can accommodate all these four here .

Pinky : Ok sir . By the way am feeling hungry . Let me go and get something to eat. Are you coming ?

Adi (gave her a bewildered look ) : No thnx ,I mean you carry on .



Dadi : Nakul arrange these flowers properly.

Nakul : Jee mam .

Dadi : Aur haan have you checked with the dinner ? the guests will be arriving soon . so everything be kept ready before that .

Nakul : yes mam everything is ready . panditji is calling you .

Dadi  : ok . I ll go and check on to him .

Dadi moved towards panditji with the taal in her hand .

Dadi : panditji is everything ready ?

Panditji : yes madam ji . sab teek hai . We can start the pooja in half an hour .

Dadi : okay . I ll look on to the guest .

Just then rano and geet arrived . They moved towards dadi and geet took her blessings from her. Geet was wearing a red sari and looked like an angel in the evening . Some of the dadi's friends were invited for the pooja. It was long since savitri devi met two of her grand sons at the same time . if one is there at home other will be at the business trip and vice versa. But that day both of them were present so she decided to arrange a pooja for their well being .

Dadi : you are looking very beautiful in this saree beta .

Geet : thanks dadi . how are you dadi?

Dadi : am perfectly fine beta .

Rano : ma where are your grandsons ? Am very eager to see them .

Dadi : my first grand son hasent arrived from office yet and other one just returned india  in the morning . its very rare to see them together . That's why I arranged for the pooja .

Rano : very nice ma .

Just then geet got a call from varshika and excused herself to attend it . Dadi introduced dev to rano and they kept talking for sometime .Geet made her way to the garden and stood mesmerized by the beauty of the flowers . She looked like the angel standing in the midst of flowers from the heaven .

Maan arrived from the office and stood there watching the scene . He could not take his eyes of her. She looked even more divine that saree . Least he knew that  his brother, dadi and rano was watching the both . They understood what that look meant and thought of speaking to the other soon . Maan stood there still watching her.

Maan (self talk ) : Maan what happened to you ? your imaginations are going far day by day . First in office and now at home . This girl will make me mental . Tomorrow I need to go for the check up for sure.

He came out of his dream land after his brother literally shaked him twice . Maan who was kind of embrassed dosent want to show it to his brother and so decided to show his fake anger .

Maan : what dev ? why are you shouting ? I was thinking about one of my project .

Dev (suppressing his smile ): oh my bro ! I don't know that the project is walking in our garden .

Maan : wat ?

Dev : nothing bro . dadima is waiting for you .

Having said that both of them made their way inside . Dadi introduced maan to rano and asked him to change and come down soon to attend the pooja. Maan had no interest in attending the poojas . But for the sake of his dadi , he never spoke against her beliefs. After some time , geet came in and stood beside her mother .

Dadi introduced dev to geet . They just got together and started their non-stop chit chat .

Dev : geet what are you doing ? I mean studies '

Geet : Am doing my architecture and ofcourse  applied for internship in your bros company .

Dev (shocked ) : do you know him ?

Geet : No yaar. Dadi only told to apply . I haven't seen him yet. I hope I would get to today .

Dev (selftalk ) : oh wow dadi , what a plan ?? you are too fast.. she is perfect for my bro ' I hope everything goes perfect .

Geet (waved her hands before him ) : hey hello ?? are you there ?

Dev (coming out of the trance ) : oh yea .. sure you will get there .. congrats in advance .

Geet : oh yea , thanks but for what ?

Dev : you will know that soon .

Geet stood there confused but dint ask to him and decided to leave it.

On the other hand maan came descending the stairs wearing a beautiful black sherwani . He looked dashing and every girl present there cannot keep their eyes of him . He stood their looking for his dadi while geet and dev made their way inside looking for dadi . Dadi came towards geet and started talking to her . Maan spotted dadi and moved to greet her. Dadi moved to introduce geet to maan .

Dadi : maan this is geet .

Maan and geet who were facing their back turned towards each other : tum ?? (in union )

Dadi , dev and rano stood their confused as to how they both came to know each other.

Maan : tum ? what are you doing here ?

Geet : you criminal ? what are you doing here ?

Dev , dadi and rano : criminal ?????

Geet : haan mama I told you na ? One criminal tried to kill my sweetu ? Its him only . He also shouted at me mama .

Dev and dadi : sweetu ? who is it ?

Geet : my pyari car .

Dev : car ? you named your car ?

Geet : haan its my sweetu . I love it very much and he ' he tried to kill my car ..(in angry tone ).

Maan stood there without knowing wat to do with her ' he started thinking " wow !! awesome .. now everyone will start addressing me as "criminal" . god ! what will I do with this girl ?" he stood there rubbing his temple ..

Dadi enjoyed the sight and gave a slight smile and winked at dev . She was convinced and determined that she choose the right girl for maan . Only she can manage and change him .

Geet (to maan ) : you criminal , why are you standing still ? say something .

Maan fumed with anger : Chup ! bilkul chup .

Geet : why should I ? you only dashed my car and more than that you only shouted at me .

Maan : "what me ? dashed your car ? if you dint speak on phone and drive , the accident would not have happened ."

Geet : "oh then what about you ? what where you doing ? did you not talk in phone that time ? what did you say that time ? yea I remember "just shut up" only na ? and one more thing its you who came in over speed not me ."

Maan : "oh yea did you come and see at what speed I was driving in my car ?"

Geet : "Even a blind person can say that you were driving on over speed."

Dadi , dev and rano stood there shocked not knowing what to do . dev and dadi were even more shocked that it was very much unlike to maan to argue so much and that too with a girl . It was dadi who came out of the trance first and decided to stop the fight . she sensed that if she dint stop it now then no one could ever stop it .

Dadi : "bus !! bohot ho gaya . stop it right now ."

Maan who was about to answer geet , stood shocked at seeing dadi . geet also stood still , seeing dadi .

Dadi (to geet ) : beta , did you know maan before ?

Geet : haan dadima . actually he hit my sweet and I fought  with him .

Rano : geet , say sorry to maan .

Dadi : maan say sorry to her.

Geet and maan : Noooooooo'.

Rano : geet I said at once .

Dadi : maan you too.

Geet and maan looked at each other fuming with anger and said : sorry .

Both turned to opposite direction and left the place .

Dev was still in shock and said to dadi : dadi ? what is this ? is this a dream ? was it my bro ?

Dadi : yea am also confused but I know one thing . This is not a dream . I cant believe that he was fighting with her just to prove that fault is not his ..Its never like him.

Rano : am sorry ma . geet should not have talked like this . I ll talk to her. Its totally unlike her to shout at someone . She dosent get angry this easily but I don't know what happened to her '.

Dadi : don't worry beta . I ll talk to maan too'. I need to talk about an important thing to you but I guess its not the right time now ' I ll come to your home later.

Rano : ok ma . I guess its getting very late . I ll take the leave for now . See you soon ma .

Dadi : ok beta . ask geet to visit home  often .

Rano : teek hai ma .

With that rano got her blessings and left for home with geet .

After the pooja got over dev and dadi sat in the dinning table waiting for maan . He came towards the table totally annoyed with the todays incident . Nakul served them the dinner and they started having their food . dadi decided to start her conversation .

Dadi : maan beta ?

Maan : haan dadima .

Dadi : if I ask you a favour , will you do it ?

Maan who was eating his food gave her a look and said : not again dadi .

Dadi : not about you marriage .

Maan : go ahead .

Dadi : I want four of my friends sons and daughters to have their internship in your company .

Dev who was silently watching the conversation tried hard not to laugh at him . Maan looked at him and narrowed his eyed questioning "Wat ?". dev noded as if saying saying nothing bro .

Maan : okay dadi . ask them to forward the applications . I ll have a look on to it . If they are capable they ll be given the required post.

Dadi : they have already submitted it . just have a glance to it .

Maan : okay dadi .

Dadi : Maan ,geet is so sweet na ?

Maan : wat ? geet ? she is a complete chatter box dadi ..did you know how she shouted at me that day ? she called me a criminal . more than that she came to my office and scolded me giving names..dhusht dhanav and what not .. seriously no one ever dared to talk to Maan singh khuranna like that ..Have you ever see someone giving those weird names to their cars ? you can see that exclusively here.. she ll make me go mad ' and he went on and on till he heard dev broke into laugher.

Dev who was till now silently hearing this , broke into laugher not able to hold anymore. He excused himself and left the table sensing his brothers anger . Maan just then realized that he himself gave all the extra information about her. He gave an annoying look to dadi and left the table .

Dadi was silently listening to his confession . Now she was double confirmed that geet will be the one and only bade bahu of khuranna khandan . she smiled to herself and said " maan I am your grand mother .now let me see maan singh khuranna , how you escape from marriage this time . I ll make sure all the ways are blocked for you except confessing it to geet.."

precap :  "you are so sweet ."

             " you are impossible."

part 6 :

Thank you so much for your support guys ... I hope you guys ll like it . please do leave suggestions .


Edited by mrk_1 - 17 January 2011 at 6:08am

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