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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kinju100

amazing update one dear... sorry for the late comment.

i was waiting for u !!

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
nice update.....................

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ajenn IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
luved d scene btwn maaneet...
now Maaneet's pic goin to be  d talk of d town!!

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 3:16am | IP Logged
hey guys !!! updating with in one hour !Big smile

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 3:26am | IP Logged
loved the update............

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged

hey guys , sorry for the short update . if i continue after this , it ll become a very long one , so thought of giving only half .. so do leave comments and hit the like button 

Recap : The party was a grand success and hit ... the media persons covered the entire rooff.. ofcourse the sweet dance and romance dint miss their eyesWink.


Maan and geet returned to their hotel room completely lost in each other . they longed with each other . but they do knew their limits . maan kissed her forehead and hugged her and slept .

Next day morning

The sun rays slowly made the way into the room . geet stirred a bit hearing the phone call. The time was 9 a.m. . she wondered who on earth who would call her then . she took her phone and saw the name flashed . its her dad .

Geet : hello dad . good morning .

Dad : good morning .

Geet : whats the matter dad ? so early ?

Dad : hmm..nothing  geet . where are you staying now ?

Geet  sensed something wrong : why dad ? is there anything problem ?

Dad: I need  you to come home immediately .

Geet could hear a change of voice but could not figure out why : but dad , I have a meeting to attend here . anyways I ll be there in tomorrow morning na ??

Dad : cant you hear what I say ? I said come home now . I ll send brij to airport . is that clear ?

Geet was in tears now and just said : okay .

Dad : okay bye .

Before geet could reply anything phone went dead . she turned and saw maan sleeping peacefully . but the peacefulness did not last long . maan cell started ringing was only then maan opened his sleepy eyes and saw geet had woken up earlier and sitting with tears . he was shocked to as what might have happened . geet did not let him speak anything instead gestured him to attend the phone call. Maan who could not understand  anything  just did what she told .

He took the phone and it was dev .

Maan : hello .

Dev : hello bro.

Maan : whats the matter ?

Dev : bro , can you come back today ?

Maan : whats the urgency now ?

Dev : bro , I guess its not wise to stay there now ..dadima does not know wat to do ? we had been receiving calls since morning .

Maan : dev , don't talk in riddles , just spit it out .

Dev : bro , you dint see the news ?

Maan : what news ?

Dev : bro , press had taken photos of the last night party in which you and geet,,,,,,

Maan now understood what he meant and he closed his eyes feeling helpless . he now understood why geet was in tears . he said : okay , I ll be there in afternoon .

Dev : okay bro , I ll see you in the airport .

Maan kept the mobile down and turned towards geet : geet ..

Geet hugged him and wept : maan , dad ka phone aya tha . he shouted at me for no reason and he asked me to come home immediately ..i don't know why ?

Maan  just then realized she does not knew anything about the news . : geet , wo yesterdays  party pics had been published in news papers . our dance and everything . I guess that's why your dad might have called you .

Geet  saw  maan in horror : oh god !!what can we do now ? how ll I face dad ?

Maan : geet don't worry , I ll talk to dadima as soon as I reach home ..

Geet : maan , I cant stay away from you . she cried and cried ..pls do something maan .

Maan could not stand her tears but at the same time did not know what to do . maan called adi and booked his tickets . both got ready and reached the  airport. Geet's eyes were red with crying . Through out the journey  she kept saying "maan I cant live without you" . he assured her that nothing would happen .

They reached the delhi airport . geet saw brij waiting for her . she bed good bye to maan with teary eye and went towards brij while maan went with dev .

Brij silently collected the bag from her and made his towards the car . Geet too sat there silently without saying anything'

Maan on the other side was worrying like hell . he was thinking of one way or the other  to let his dadima know about it .. he thought " oh god ! what have I gotten into ? what might be her reaction  after seeing the news. .uff this press , why should they cover the party and why especially the dancing sequence ?"

Babaji has his own way up the things !! 

PART 23 :

what say guys!! I know chappals are gonna fly '.

Edited by mrk_1 - 28 April 2011 at 9:41am

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Superb update..... loved it

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