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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:26am | IP Logged
hey guys me up with the next update after a long time !! caught up with tests all the days Cry... hope you would enjoy this one . do leave ur comments and hit the like button .Smile


Maan was waiting for her ..minutes seems hours ..each passing second he felt that his heart would explode with the tension building up . he knew he loved geet and geet too loved him . but he want to make it special for her . he hired a full hall and decorated with beautuiful red and white roses .. roses ??he thought to himself ...the flower once i hate , the smell i felt it disgusted . now everything changes ..only for her !!for my angel ... he could help but smile . yes today gonna be the most important day for me afraid ! yes Maan singh khuranna is afraid .. he waited for those three words ... his train of thoughts came to an abrubt end when he saw geet on a beautiful white saree he presented ..his heart missed beats ...

geet entered the was pitch dark..she was afraid of darkness...but today she wasnt...she knew her saviour is here...she could feel it ..she was equally tensed ... she never knew maan could plan a surprise for her ... her ached to hear those words...she made her way inside ..she could see anything ..she softle called out ""maan ??? "" was more of loving tone ..

maan was totally blown of with her beauty ... he forgot everything ..he stood there mesmerised ... he never thought geet would be this beautiful in saree..he made a mental note to buy her more sarees...then he heard her calling out his name ... " wow !!my name sounds more beautiful from her mouth "he thought ..... he could see a slight frown on her face even in the darkness ...he smiled and made his way towards her ...

as maan made his way towards her , slowly the lights were lit on ... geet could see roses every where ... the place was so beautiful... she could also see some pictures of her and maan .... then she saw him ...their eyes locked...they forgot everything ..... their hearts ready to capture the moment to relish it life long..they made their way towards each other...

they could feel the tension building inside them ....they stood in silence for sometime was then maan spoke to her .

Maan :  geet are looking beautiful.

Geet blushed . Her cheeks grew dark shade of pink..she could say anything but pass a dashing smile at him ..maan was clean bold with it ... just then a slow music started in the background ...

Maan extended his hand with his cute charming smile ..geet held on to it and they started dancing . it was slow romantic music .. time passed but none realised ..geet rested her head on maan's shoulder while his hand on her waist ..they had a very contended look on their faces . he rested his head on her head .. they could stay like that forever ...

maan directed geet to the dinner table... it was filled with geet's favourite dishes . it was a small table for two perfectly decorated with a silver sheets and rose petals and candle lit on in the middle .. maan helped her with the chair and sat opposite to her comfortably ...geet loved the food and they started enjoying not only their food but their closeness ... now the dinner was finished and maan could feel his heart beats raising ... he knew now its time to let his feeling out ... he took her in the side  of the hall where there was  mini- garden set up.. he looked at her eyes . knelt on to his knees totally to geet's surprise...he held to her hand and looked at her ..

  " geet ! i was trying to come for a conclusion for a long time .. and today i had come up with it . i could not concentrated on anything since the day i saw you . i fought with myself . i did not like the change in myself . till i saw you , i thought these love are not true and people loves others only for money but you proved me wrong . i felt myself getting drowned in your selfless love and care . i could not conclude whether its love or not till that day in the Mr.Khanns party ..but it was then i realised that i had fallen in love with yo ...i could not see u with anyone made my blood boil . i felt jealous .. i could share you with anyone else.."

by this time geet felt very happy that maan loved her unconditionally and had tears in her eyes . seeing her he just continue .
 " yes geet !! the mere thought of loosing you makes me mad .. i dont know where you had been since long ? i feel i will go mad if i stay away from you changed me geet made me smile and brought the colours to my black and white life...yes geet , i want you in my life forever .... i want to make you mine and cherish this life forever... i am madly in love with you Geet handa !!! so will marry me and become as Mrs. Geet maan singh khuranna ??? "

geet could not hold back her tears and instantly hugged maan and cried her heart out .. no one had ever told like this .. she felt very special ... she was on cloud nine ..maan could not comprehend anything but hugged her back...still some where the fear geet rejecting him was there .... but geet like understood his plight lifted her face and looked his face and said " yes Mr.Maan singh khuranna !! i love you and am ready to become Mrs.Geet maan singh khuranna "...

This was the thing that maan had been dying to hear for .. he gave her million dollar smile and closed the gap between them . the kiss was so passionate.. their hearts felt light and they could not help but let out their bottled up emotions ... it was a long one and they eventually stopped to catch breath ..maan rested his head on her forehead..

yes, this was the most happiest day of his life .. he admitted that love does exist ..just then he took out a ring from his pocket and slid in to her finger was beautiful platinum ring and geet loved ..she hugged him...they stayed there for sometime...they spoke about their likes and dislikes for some time after which maan dropped her home ...awaiting for the dawn to bring more happiness in their life... the next day geet would be his  official and personal and wat not girl friend !!!!!

PRECAP :: office romance !!WinkWink

PART  19   :

so guys i hope you would like this update ... am not good in the romance part so rotten tomatoes are welcome with open hand !!

Durga ..

Edited by mrk_1 - 08 April 2011 at 6:47am

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
loved it to the core
awesome updateSmile

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged

Beautiful proposal.................loved it!!!!

waiting for office romance!!!!

wonderful update!!!

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maaneetkimeet Goldie

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
lovley update dear 

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007jindal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Oh grt part

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Awesome part!!
Thanks for the pM..
Continue soon..

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smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
office romanceLOL

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awsome update.

love it.
cant wait for the office romance.

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