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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged

My take on the Seema-Dutta confrontation.

There was a sick lurch and then then the car fell over the cliff. Baji stood up, his head still reeling after he'd been thrown out of the car forcibly, and watched in horror as the car toppled over.

Dutta tried the door, it was jammed. As it hit the rocks on its way down, all he could see was her face. Why this, why now? He had laughed in the face of death. Was this Death laughing at him? He groaned in despair as he realized that he didn't want to die, not now. He tried the lock again and uttered a guttural scream of rage as he realized he would never see her again. He hadn't loved enough, it would never be enough. That was the last thought he had before his head hit something sharp.

There was a sudden gust of wind and as the lamp flickered, Naku tried to keep it alight. She tried shielding it from the wind, but the lamp had blown out. She looked at it for a while, and then looked at Bappa, wondering what he meant by this ominous sign. Her heart hammered in her chest, and she heard Kala laugh. She turned around, as Kala brandished a toy remote in her face and asked, "Do you know where your Dutta is? I'd be very scared if I were you. Because this time, its too late to rescue him"

She wouldn't cry, she told herself. Not in front of this woman.She didn't know whom to run to, there was no Baji here. And nobody knew where saab had gone. She turned around and prayed. Her Bappa wouldn't let him come to any harm.

Seema asked her driver to stop. She'd heard the explosion, and she looked out and saw the smoke in the trees. The driver said it was dangerous to go in, but she'd seen enough danger in the last seven years. Nothing could be worse. She ran towards the sound, along with the driver. What she saw made her sick to the stomach. Among the trees lay the charred remains of a car. The driver ran to the car and told that he couldn't find anyone in it. She held her hand to her cheek, and then fanned herself. She'd started walking back when she heard the faint groan. She looked around,and saw a man covered in blood. He looked all but dead. THey rushed to him, and the driver carried him to the car. She tried not to look at the man. He wouldn't survive. But then again, she prayed. Hoped he would.

The doctors called it a miracle. She heaved a sigh of relief as she realized that the man was going to live. Someone somewhere must love him a lot, she mused, for him to have survived this deadly ordeal. It had taken three days for them to get him back. She walked into the private ward, and watched him sleep. His forehead was swathed in bandages. She couldn't see his face. She started walking away when he muttered something in his sleep. "Naku!" She stopped in her tracks. She turned around and walked towards the bed, and stood still the moment his face came into view. There was no doubt about it. Even under all the bandages, she could recognize the face of the only man who had once loved her. "Dutta", she whispered.

She sat by his side all night, reliving her past, wondering how it'd have been if she hadn't been so heartless. She would have had this man's love.His undying love. She wiped her tears and watched him sleep. He'd sometimes utter stuff, most of which was unclear to her.  She caught some phrases. One thing was clear, there was someone. A woman, she realized. A woman whom he loved a lot. She walked out, sadly.

Dutta opened his eyes and found that his vision was blurred. There was someone in front of him, a woman. "Naku" he mouthed, but his voice was stuck in his throat. He wanted to reach out to her, tell her how much he'd missed her. He held his hand out to her, but she didn't hold it. He was scared, scared that she was leaving him now. He waited for her to take his hand.

Seema watched him, the lump in her throat growing bigger by the moment. Whoever she was, he loved the woman like he'd never loved her. It hurt. But then, she had never deserved his love. She watched him go off to sleep again, and wondered what his reaction would be when he saw her. Would he care?

His head hurt like hell, but he managed to open his eyes this time. He had to find her, tell her that he loved her. He got up, tore off the tapes that bound him to the bed, and tried walking towards the door.


The nurses managed to get him back on the bed. Seema watched as he kept fighting them, telling them that he had to go to her. She was awed.

Dutta opened his eyes and found her standing by his bed. Where have you been, Nakusha?

She was quiet. As his eyes got accustomed to the light, he found that it wasn't Nakusha. It was someone else, someone he'd once known. It took him a while to recognize the woman in front of him. It was her, unmistakably her. He tried breaking free, but couldn't. He didn't want to see her face. Why was she here? Where was Nakusha? He screamed out for the nurse! She murmured, "I'm sorry, Dutta! I'm sorry. I know you don't want to see me, but I had to see you once, talk to you!"

He refused to look at her, and clenched his fists in rage. She walked away, knowing that he would never forgive her. It was night, and as he lay awake he wondered why fate had played such a cruel game. He'd heard from the nurse, that the woman had rescued him. Of all people, he had been rescued by the one person responsible for destroying his life. He remembered the day she'd turned him down, and thus created a Dutta who'd burnt down the world in his rage. He closed his eyes and relived the experience. Love. He'd once believed in love.

He opened his eyes as he realized he still believed in love. He closed it again, for he wanted to see if he'd ever loved. What he saw, left him defeated.

A lone tear slid out as he relived the journey. He had loved yes, but when he closed his eyes and made the journey there was only one face he could see. And it wasn't Seema's.

He had loved, from the moment he'd learnt to laugh, and fight and dream. He had loved with all his heart and soul. And he had loved but one woman. He couldn't hold it in any longer. It was her he saw in the darkest realms of his soul. It was her he'd waited for, in those earliest days. His journey had been towards her. He'd shed rivers of blood, walked over fire, waged countless wars, and tried to find peace. It was her he had been searching for all along. And just like that, he found that she'd obliterated every memory of hatred or pain. It was her in every corner of his heart.

He felt no hatred towards Seema, no anger towards Supriya. He didn't loathe his father for abandoning him. He didn't know how, but she'd taken all his anger, and left him defenceless. He felt it in his heart, a strange lightness. It was as if she'd stolen all his suffering and sordid past, and left him with love.

Seema walked out, she didn't want to wake him up. Then she heard him call out. "Wait" he said. Her heart soared, he'd talked to her.

He knew that Seema came everyday, stood by his bed, as if asking for his forgiveness. He acted gruff with her, but knew that he no longer hated her for what she'd done to him. If she'd sent him on the path to perdition, she had also absolved herself of the sin. For she had given him life, a life he really wanted to live. With the one woman he loved body, heart and soul.

He pointed towards the jug, and she obliged him. As she gave him the glass, he sat up without her help and drank it quietly. Her eyes filled with tears as she realized that this man, in his own way had forgiven her. Their eyes met, and Dutta took in her grateful look. She read his kind eyes, and silently blessed the woman who'd taught him to love.

 
Pardon the errors, am feeling too lazy to proofread! Sigh. Wish the CVs get over with the forgiveness chapter soon.


Edited by lizdarcy - 03 January 2011 at 6:57am

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
o m g liz da os is amazin..rli wud luv 2 c dis hapn...awhh poor naku i cnt imagin wa shel b goin thru ol da tym...X

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Beautiful LizDay DreamingIt would be soo wonderful if Dutta enacts all these emotions Day DreamingI'm in a Dream Land Now Day DreamingWaiting for it to happen the same wayyyyy!!!!

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged

liz.....

very good start .... please update soon
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
OMG!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! such beautifully written.......... Luved evry bit of it...........Funtabulous ClapStar.......
This is what all of us would like to see in epi to cum..........Plzzzzz CVs read this OS............m sure if the track goes as written.......each of us is going to like it.......the TRP will be at the best...........100% no 200% sure.Thumbs Up.............

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
OMG Liz thusi great hoh
CV's plz take note we want scenes like dis plz and quickly so D can 4give Seema and get on wid his life wid N
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
nice update...
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
its awesome........u described it really well.........hope something like this happens in serial too.......

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