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FF:-Ek Baar Phir updated CH03/PG05 (Page 5)

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
nice work

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Originally posted by 0711rokxoxo

Very well written, a really lovely update


thank u.... keep reading...Smile
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Originally posted by nycsweetie

nice work

thank u ... keep reading....
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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Hi all...
Plz don't throw eggs sandal etc on to me fr nt updating for years... 
well frm here on wards thre will b a regular update

Story til dated...

>Manav gets a call from Sathish saying that he saw Archana But Manav ignored.
>Manav and Archana meet in babzar.He invited her for cup of coffe where he introduce in would be Priya to her.
> Priya takes Archana to her house
> At night Manav meets Archana in a garden and tell her to be his strength.
>Sathish meet Archana in Manav's house.He ask Manav why is been  she sheltered there.
>Manav says se was his wife 

The nxt update...



Archana entered ..

Sathish:Jahan thak mujhe patha hain Manav tum dono ki shaadi kabhi hui nahi 
thi phir kaise  tum usse patni ka darja de rahe hain

Manav:Shaadi toh dilon mein hothi hain...
Sathish:Mathlab tum Priya ko dhokha de rahe ho...
Archana:Sathish yahan koi kisi ko dhokha nahi de raha hain aur mein yahan issliye 
rukhi hoon kyunki yeh meri majbhoori hain

Sathish:Kaunsi majbhoori..?
Archana:Bas ek din ki toh baath hain
Sathish:Manav don't ever tust her 

Manav bowed his head.Sathish angrily went out.

Archana:Aapko  neeche aai bula rahi hain

She tried to but he held her hand.

Manav:Archana mein ...

She herself left  the holding and went away.

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
All were ready for engagement ceremony.Savitha gave  Manav ndPriya the wedding 
rings.

Savitha:Priya pehnadoo beta

Manav made Priya wear the ring .Archana sadly looked at it.Then it was priya's 
turna.Archana couldn't bare when Priya make Manav wear the wedding ring.She 
ran in.

RING..!!:Archana's mobile rang.She immediately take the phone.

Sulochana:Archu kal jaake Varshu ki shaadi ka date pakki karna
Archana:Haan tu fikr math kar.Mein phone ragthi hoon aai

She hung the call.Damodar came.

Damodar:Beta yahan vapas kyun aayi hain...?
Archana:Voh mein ...
Damodar:Ek waqt tha jab mein dil se chahtha tha ki tu iss ghar mein aaye lekin 
ab...

Archana:Mein yahan se ja rahi hoon

She went towards Manav and Priya

Archana:Priya...

Priya turned.

Priya:Hann...

Archana:Voh ab mein chalthi hoon

Manav looked at her.

Priya:Ab agle hafte shaadi hain aur tum ja rahe ho..?
Archana:Mujh bauhath sara kaam niptana hain
Priya:Chalo teek lekin Shaadi pe zaroor aana
Archana:Hmmm

She went towards Savitha.But Savitha went away.She left the house.Manav kept 

looking at her.

*************************************

Late at night  Archana climbed the step of a mandir.

Archana:Ek baar phir mein aapki chokat par aayi hoon lekin iss baar bhi mein ussi 
insaan keliye aayi hoon.Usse voh har kushi dene joh mein ne unse cheena hain

Archana...!!!:A male voice yelled.

She turned and saw Manav.

Archana:Aap yahan

He walked towards her.

Archana:Aapko yahan nahi aana chahiye tha.
Manav:Kya kabhi bhi mere siwai uss mandir mein aayi hain kya .? phir aaj kaise..?
Archana:Ab toh sab kuch badal gayay hain aur mein apni adath ki bhi badalne ki 

koshish karthi hoon
Manav:Adath...???

She looked at him.

Archana:Haan adath
Manav:Vaise tum iss waqt kaunsi train pakadne ja rahe ho...?
Archana:voh mein...mein...
Manav:Tum...

She looked at him as didn't have any answer.

Manav:Mein Varsha ko phone ueh soch ke ki tum pohnch gaye honge
Archana:Kya..?!!!
Manav:Aur usne mujhe sab kuch batha diya.Tum toh mujhse kehthi hi nahi na pehle na ab
Archana:Tab ki ab ki vajah toh same
Manav:Vajah isrf yehi Archana tu ne kabhi samaj nahi paya ki meri duniya mein tereliye kya jagah hain

Manav:Khare voh sab choto

He took a key from his pocket.

Manav:Yeh humare ghar ka key hain
Archana:Humare ghar...? voh toh basne pehle hi toot gaya tha mein ne khud thoda 

tha ghar ko bhi kisi ki sapne ko bhi

Manav:Bas..!! bas karo ab tumhe nahi patha mujhe kithni thakleef ho raha hain 
kyunki mein ne tumhe kabhi samaj hi nahi paya...

He looked at her with tear full eyes.

Manav:Ab behas math chalo...

She ignore that and she went with him.


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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
My My Diya i came across this FF todayShocked

Hmm 3chapters over all right?? i think i can read all that today..
glad u updated late and i can catch ur FF story soon Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
finally u updated...i luved d update..ek hafte baad shaadi hmmm...waiting for yr next update

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ankifan

My My Diya i came across this FF todayShocked

Hmm 3chapters over all right?? i think i can read all that today..
glad u updated late and i can catch ur FF story soon Embarrassed

hope 'll catch soon...Smile
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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita_David

finally u updated...i luved d update..ek hafte baad shaadi hmmm...waiting for yr next update

thnx fr comnting...Smile

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