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FF:-Ek Baar Phir updated CH03/PG05 (Page 4)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Great one!!!Thumbs Up
 
Yeh dil maange more!!!!!!!!

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Originally posted by Akashspartan

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 Hey Diya,

Enjoyed reading your FF .You are doing a good job Thumbs Up Eagerly awaiting for the next partTongue
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 Hey Diya,

Enjoyed reading your FF .You are doing a good job Thumbs Up Eagerly awaiting for the next partTongue
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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged

Hi frnzzzz............
Sorry to make this post so late.....Iwas really busy.....
Here the fresh new chapter....

                        



Manav came to his room and sat on the bed.

Manav:Patha nahi mujhe uss samay kya hua tha.Uss samay toh mujhe.....
Archana:Manav..!!

He turned and saw her.

Manav:Haan andar avo..
Archana:Nahi mein ja rahi hoon
Manav:Acha ...
Archna:I'm sorry voh Priya insist ki isliye
Manav:Tum voh dhal bhi toh sakthi thi na
Archana:I'm sorry.Par mein aapkeliye bahauth kush hoon akhir aap ne apna manzil pa hi liya.
Manav:Thanks
Archana:Bas ithna hi..?
Manav:Haan...tumhe kahan jana hain batha so mein chot detha hoon
Archana:Koi zaroorath nahi kyun mujhe khud nahi patha mein raath thak kahan rukhne wali hoon.

Manav looked at her.

Archana:Chalthi hoon
Manav:Rukho mein kuch kartha hoon
Archana:Nahi mujhe .... chalthi hoon

She tried to go by the time Priya came in.

Priya:Manav patha hain papa ke company ek staff ki zaroorath thi mein ne Archana ka naam sugest ki hain
Archana:Nahi mein kaise...mathlab
Priya:No problem

Manav and Archana looked at eachother.

Priya:Archana toh tu yahan kyun nahi reh sakthi
Mein bhi yahi keh rahi thi:-Savitha yelled behind.
Archana:Nahi..
Savitha:Kyun...?
Archana:Yahan ab sakhai hone wali hain na toh yahan rahega toh ab logon ko...
Savitha:Hum kush honge shaadi mein jithna haath uthna kam hain
Priya:Please...
Archana:Nahi please mujhe jana hoga.

She went out.

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At night....Priya came Manav's room.

Priya:Manav 
Manav:Haan...
Priya:Tum soye nahi
Manav:Nahi kuch kaam tha..? 
Priya:Tere paas Archana ki number hain
Manav:Nahi kyun..?
Priya:Patha nahi voh ab kahan hain
Manav:Toh..?
Priya:Agar ho sake toh tum...
Manav:I'm sorry mein nahi ja saktha
Priya:Mere liye plssssssss.....dosth tumhare aur fikr mujhe ho rahi hain
Manav:Teek hain

He went out

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In garden.....Manav arrived there saw Archana sitting alone on the bench and he went and sit beside.

Manav:Voh.... Priya ko fikr ho rahi thi teri
Archana:Aur aapko..?

He looked at her.

RING...!!!RING...!!!:Manav's mobile rang.

Manav:Haan Priya
Priya:Tu Archana ko leker ghar aa javo uski aaj nahi hogi voh railway track koi problem hain

Manav:Pehle mein usse mil toh loo

Manav(to archana):Teri train..

She stood up as well as he.

Archana:Mere yahan aana kiski zaroorath tha  uskeliye mein yahan se ja rahi hoon
Manav:Mein kaise... tu aake meri taakath ban jah

She turn tears fallen from her eyes.
Rain stated to shower on them.He put his on her shuolder but she shrugged her shuolder.He put his sround and dragged her.She leaned on his chest.

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Next morning.....Priya applying mehandi on her hand.The door bell.

Priya:Archana...

Archana came.

Peiya:Please dekho na kaun hain
Archana:Haan

Archana opened the door and saw Sathish.Both were shocked seeing eachother.

Sathish:Tu yahan..?

Manav came from behind.

Manav:Arre Sathish....Aa andar aa

Sathish came dragged Manav to his room.

Sathish:Yeh sab kya hain

He stood mum.

Sathish:Jawab do...
Manav:Sathish pls voh yahan se kal chala jayega
Sathish:Irada kya hain tera
Manav:Kuch nahi hain
Sathish:Jis ladki ne tere saath chota hain tum usko sahara dena chahtha hain
Manav:Haan...mein usko sahara dena chahtha hoon
Sathish:Kyun..?
Manav:Kyun ki voh meri patni thi.

Precap:

Archana went away Manav exchanging his ring

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Very well written, a really lovely update

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Originally posted by Akashspartan

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thnx fr commenting........keep reading.........Smile

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