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FF:-Ek Baar Phir updated CH03/PG05 (Page 3)

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rose4yew

Hiii
My first post in PR forum...
Good Start..Clap
Pls continue.....Smile

hii..thank u keep readin..Smile

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Originally posted by nikitagmc

Very nice. Do continue soon.

thank u ...keep readin...Smile

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Originally posted by vikhyat123

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keep going Tongue

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hafsa.10

Very nice FF
Realy loved this part, It is very intresting as well as well told!!!
The beging was mindblowing, so plz do continue
Will be waiting very eagly for the second part so plz update quickly
All the best
Hafsa
 

thnk u so much........nxt chapter will posted soonSmile

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Hi all...

I hope u all liked one shot.Thnx to my silent readers.

                               

CHAPTER 01

This chapter starts from where it had stopped.



Manav:Archana mujhe...mujhe viwas nahi ho raha ki tum capas iss shehar mein aagayi
Archana:Kaise nahi aathey ..?

He smiled.

Manav:Mere saath chalogey
Archana:Kahan..?
Manav:Ek coffee keliye
Archana:Haan...




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In resturant...

Manav:Toh bathavo sab kaisi chal rahi hain
Archana:Achi
Manav:Phir..

RING...!!! RANG...!!!

Manav:Ek minute

He attended call...

Manav:Priya tum coffee shop ajavo
Archana:Acha toh tum ab kya kar rahe ho
Manav:Mein vahi kaam kar raha hoon
Archana:Acha...
Manav:Tum Satish se kab mili
Archana:Nahi mein toh nahi mili..kyun...?kya hua..?
Manav:Kuch nahi .,, usne tumhe dekha hain Archana
Archana:Acha...agar dekha toh kya hotha
Manav:Mujhe bhi iss baath ka dar tha
Archana:Mujhe bhi...
Manav:Hmmm...
Archana:Muhe ek zaroori baath kahna tha
Manav:Haan..bathavo na

Maanv..!!!!!!:Priya called from back.
Manav:Arre Priya..aavo

She came and took a seat.

Manav:Priya yeh Archana hain meri...meri friend
Priya:Hai..
Archana:Hai..
Manav:Archana yeh Priya meri mankethar

Archana was shocked.

Manav:Tum mujhe kehna chahthi thi
Archana:Kuch nahi Manav
Manav:Arre bathavo na...
Archana:Aise koi khas baath nahi hain
Manav:Acha
Archana:Ab mujhe jana hoga
Priya:Kyun..?
Archana:Kuch kaam hain
Manav:Acha teek hain I won't force you
Archana:Bye

She went way.

Archana:Ab toh sab kuch kadam hogaya.Sab kuch.


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She entered into a garden and sat on a bench.

RING..!!!RING...!!!:Her mobile rang.She attended the call.

Archana:Hello aai...
Sulochana:Koi kaam milgaya kya
First drop of tear fallen from her eyes.

Archana:Voh nahi mil
Sulochana:Tab thak tu kahan raogey
Archana:Fikr math karo aai mein rakhthi hoon
Sulochana:Haan..Teek hain

Coincidentally Manav and Priya came there.
Priya:Archana...

Manav turned and saw Archana.They both went near to here


Manav:Tum yahan
Archana:Voh bas aise

He felt some strange in her answer.
Priya:Tum kahan rehthi ho..?
Archana:Voh mein actually yahan nahi rahthi.Baas ek kaam ke silsile mein aaya tha
Priya:Joh bhi ho mein yahan new mahal peeche rahthi hoon
Archana:Manav ne bathaya ki tum uski mankethar ho
Priya:Hone wali...
Archana:Acha...
Priya:Tum yahan kab thak rahogi
Archana:Mein aaj raath vapas ja rahi hoon
Priya:Tumhara kaam hogaya...?
Archana:Nahi
Priya:Kya tu meri ek kaam karsakthi hain
Archana:Kya..?
Priya:Mujhe yahan koi friends nahi toh mujhe shopping keliye madad chahiye

Archana kept looking at Manav but his eyes were on the ground.

Archana:Nahi mujhe...
Priya:Dont say no pls...
Archana:Teek hain

Manav looked at her.




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After finishing the shopping.They reached Priya's house.

Priya:Aavo Archana
Archana:Mein yahan teek aur mein jaa rahi hoon
Priya:Oooho come on Archana.Tumhe ana hi padega

She dragged her.Savitha opened the door.She was shocked to Arcahna wit bot of them.

Priya:Aai yeh Archana hain Manav ki dosth.

Savitha gave a fake smile .

Priya:Ander aavo

Hold her hand she took Archana to her room.While Manav was trying to get in Savitha held his hand.

Savitha:Voh ladki vapas kyun hain yahan
Manav:Aai pls voh jaanpauch nahi aayi hain




Precap:

Satish:Jis ladki ne tere saath chota hain tum usko sahara dena chahtha hain

Manav:Haan...mein usko sahara dena chahtha hoon


Expecting ur comments,lyk button...

diya




Edited by DIYA- - 23 July 2011 at 1:28pm

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
very nice update...thx for the pm
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
i realy liked this part, it sounded very real!!!
To me it looked like i was watching it not reading it!!!
anywayz very well done n all the best for the next part!!!
keep up ur hard work n thnx a ton for the pm
hafsa
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very nice update...thx for the pm

THNXSmile KEEP READIN


Edited by Diya1991 - 24 January 2011 at 12:13pm

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