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FF:-Ek Baar Phir updated CH03/PG05

DIYA- Goldie
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Hi all...I'm watching PR when it had begun.Its mainly Bcz of Sushant.Well its true Sushant and Ankitha together make a great pair.I do mostly as silent member.After reunion of ArMan.I thought I'll be an active member always.So i thought a good ff for ArMan.I need all your support my frndz.If u support it would be my 4th ff.

                            


CONCEPT:-
As name suggests this is story of poeple who badly wanted to meet once again in life.

Main Lead 
Archana and Manav

Others:
Sathish
Varsha
Savitha
Damodar
Sulochana


The characters posses same human qualities.They have better of living.More characters may add later.

A Glimpse...

Morning...At temple.Manav praying in front of bappa's idol.

Manav:Bappa tum mujhe voh sakthi do jo tu ne ab tak mujhe diya nahi.

He climb down the stairs.

RING...!!! R ING...!!!:-His mobile rang.He attended the phone.

Manav:Haan Satish bolo
Satish:Are you busy..?
Manav:Nahi toh
Satish:Well mujhe tujhse milna hain
Manav:Kya hua..?

Satish:Mein ne aaj kisi ko dekha
Manav:Kisko..?

He was curious.

Satish:Archna ko...

Manav started to sweat,he throat became dry and filled tears in his eyes.He cleared his throat.

Manav:Acha
Satish:Kithni asaan hain na

Manav kept mum.

Manav:Mein baath mein phone karoonga

Satish:Nahi dekhogey usse

Manav:Mein kyun dekhoon uski koi zaroorath nahi hain.

He cut the phone and left the place.


*********************

A busy market...Archana looking to a far distance as she was waiting someone.Manav arrived there.He was doing the same.Finally they saw eachother.They walked towards eachother.Stopped leaving a certain distance between them.

Manav:Archana tum kaisi ho
Archana:Teek hoon aur aap
Manav:Haan teek hoon
Archana:Aur bakki sab..?
Manav:Haan sab teek hain

A greate silence came between them.To breake silence Mnave spoke.

Manav:Bas ek baar milna chahtha tha

She bowed her head.

Archana:Mein bhi...

Pls press like button if u like it.Do comment also.


Edited by DIYA- - 24 July 2011 at 7:01am

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged
welcome........to pr forum.....
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
nice start
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Great start i hope u continue writing the series as it unfoldsThumbs UpApproveApprove
 
Welcome to the land of Pavitra Rishta!!!!!!!!Party
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
the begining is superb! Loved it. Please continue.

Btw, welcome to pr forum.
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Nice start loved it.
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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Hiii
My first post in PR forum...
Good Start..Clap
Pls continue.....Smile
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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Very nice. Do continue soon.

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