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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 94)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Awesome!

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
I have started a new fic, its called BAD COUPLE. do read it and give ur analysis on it

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
awesome ending
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Till part 43

When I had read last, it was the Sujal Piya thing...Kashish ka unn dono ko dekhna and misunderstand karna...actually I shud say...pura situation hi ghalat tha...Ouch But now its gud to see Piya has changed...chalo now I dont need to murder her...hehe.

And well Sujal's Dad...donno wat to say abt him. He seems to be nice...par Sujal itna gussa ho jata hai ki mujhe darr lagta hai...hehe. Kashish ko ek achha idea diya unhone...hakk jatane ka...hehe.

And yeah...loved Sujal's scene with that superstar actor...huh!! LOL...maza aa gaya tha!!
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Till part 46

Firstly...in that party...Sujal ka dimag kharab ho jata hai kya? Uff...gussa sach me sehat ke liye buri hoti hai...he proves that to me!! Kuch bhi kehta hai...and phir sochta hai..."cant she understand?"...gosh!! Pagal hai!!

And now that director...uski to main...murder zarur karungi...thnx for giving me this new 'shikaar'...huh!!

Poor Kashish...uske gharwale naraz ho gaye...but glad that Sujal went up to her mom...and made things f9 for her!!
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Till part 49

Kaha tha na maine...Sujal ka dimag thoda khiska hua hai!! Arre ek film ke scene ko lekar bharak gaya!! Possessive ha? Its gud...but usse thoda samajhna bhi chahiye na...baat baat pe...kuch bhi kehta hai. Aur ego itna bada hai ki sorry tak nahi bola jata...phew!! Kya karu main iska!!

Anyways...the scene shot wid Sujal...hmm nice!! But usse end credits pe dikha diya...gosh!! Aise utt patang ideas kahan se ate hai logo ke dimag me...

And now Kashish is away...and Sujal...as usual drunk!! Itna hi chahta hai usse...to kehta kyun nahi?? Ajeeb hai na banda!!
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Till part 52

Ohh kashish's father died!! Thats sad...lekin uska ye fiance...chheee!! Itna ghatiya kyun hai...how did he dare to hold Sujal's collar!! Bach gaya wo idiot...Sujal bas Kashish ke liye chup raha!! But I wonder why? Chup naa bhi rehta and jawab de deta..to bhi chalta na!! But then its Sujal...uska dimag meri samjah se pare hai.

However part 51 mujhe badhiya laga...hehe. The way Sujal answered him...lolz. And Gay...hehe...achha hua...Sujal ne usse uski aukad dikha di.

And Kashish ka ro kar apni maa se baat karna...that was a really nice scene. Very well written...and expressed all her emotions regarding Sujal.


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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Hehe...finally I am done!! Waise sach me Sujal & kashish...dono hi thode pagal hai. Guess...ek dusre ke liye...Wink...and well...the last part was too gud...so much that am just gonna talk abt it. It was the sweetest proposal yaar!! I was grinning while reading...his proposal...her reply...it was just too gud!!

Lovely work Nilu...and am glad u continued wid this. Maine bich me dekha tha Topic Closed...may be u were feeling low...but aise readers ko jhatka nahi dete dear!! Dont keep anything unfinished...Ab ye fic hi dekh lo...unfinished chhor deti...to mujhe itna sweet proposal dekhne ko kaise milta?

Gr8 work dear!! Big smile

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