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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 92)

monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
awesome why she doing this now ...he is being good and she is become nasty not good bring them together please awesome part thank you for pm 

cute_samrah Goldie

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
awesome part...
dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Nice part
Sujal does not approve of Kashish's friendship with Sophie and Ricky,
Kashish finally confronts Sujal about his ignorance and attitude. She wants him to realise that he needs to prove his love to her.
Sujal wants to express his feelings but Kashish wants to talk about their let out her anger and frustration
please continue soon

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Aamnakideewani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
wowww aweseom ff just like always yaar full of emotions,a complete belnd of emotions loved teh way u tells the story kashish's past was always disturbing for sujal but she had her own reason to do such a thing but i also thinks it wasn't teh right way for her to fulfill her desires i dnt think so and sujal he always loved her  and when all taht issues came into media  he was unable to see kashish and her family duffering by all that  but in his heart he was not clear whether he is ok with her pastr or not and when he saw teh movie where the hero kisses her it was  enough to boil his  hidden anger again actutally its his love he can;'t even imagine soem other touches her no matter  its a film or reality he jsut can't and kashish when he misunderstood him that girl's case then hwo can she ask for trust and faith to him?ohhh too much incidents to cover but over all and one more thign teh last scene i am confuse y she left leaving him liek that?
NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged

PART 55 (Last Part)

Next day-

Kashish was preparing to go for her shoot.

Darwaza khola hi hota hai ki, media wale usko jakad lete hain.

They are hounding around her.

Sabke zabaan par ek hi sawaal hai

'sujal garewal se aapka kya rishta hai?'

'are you in a relationship?'

'kya aap dono shaadi karne wale hain?'

Kab se jaanti hai aap unhe?'

Aise tamaam sawalon ne kashish ko gher liya hai.

She is completely baffled and bewildered by their sudden throw of questions.

Wo naa Kashish ko jaane de rahe hain, naa raasta chod rae hain.

Kashish ko samajh nahi aa raha, wok are bhi to kya kare.

She  is tongue tied.

Tabhi saamne ek badi si gadai aake rukti hai aur uss gaadi se nikalte hai Sujal.

His removes his glares and looks at the hounding media.

Wo media wale jaake Sujal ko bhi gher lete hain, uspe bhi sawaalo ki bauchaar kar dete hain.

He ignores all those people royally, and walks to Kashish.

He takes her hand in his.

She is just looking at him in a daze.

He walks her into his car pushing away all the media, and makes her sit.

He whispers in a low tone to Kashish.

s-tumhe driver chod dega.

Now he turns to the media.

s-she has some urgent appointments. I will answer all your questions.

The driver drives off taking Kashish before she could throw her fits of anger on him and accuse him of divulging the media about their relationship.

She knew he wouldn't pick up the phone in front of the media, so she smses him.

k-wht is ths?

s-wht is wht?

He replies

k-abt d media?

s-dunno. Ur mom clld me up syin ur in trbl. Ask ur dear frnds !

k-wht do u mean?

s-they tld d media tmrw, 4 money

k-i dnt blv this !!!!

s-i cnt hlp it ! btw, I hv made thm to go


s-i jst did. I hv my own wys !

k-k, thx anywys

s-ur wlcm

Their texted conversation ends there.


Kashish goes to her shooting.

As she was shooting, she sees Sujal there. Conversing with the producer.

She texts him

k-y r u here?

s-had a meeting wid d producer


she completes her shoot.

She guessed it had been something very important, as producer took Sujal into some secluded place, Sujal was not even near the vicinity she was shooting; and some part of her heart thought he had come there because of her.

She texts him.

k-whr r u?

he replies aft 15 minutes


k-still in the studio?


k-will u come in my vanity van if u hv time aft meeting?

But sujal doesn't reply to that.

She presumes he must be busy.


Sujal enters her vanity van after he is free.

But  the place is empty

s-kashish ?


She answers from the washroom.

k-bathroom mein hoon !!!!! tum baitho !


some minutes pass by

kashish calls his name from inside.

k-sujaaal, suno !


k-wardrobe khole ke dekho, ek peach coloured dress hogi wo nikaal ke de do, please.

He gets up and finds the dress amongst her clothes.


she takes out her wet hand from the slightly open bathroom door and takes the dress from him.


She comes out in 5 minutes wearing the dress.

She looks glowing after taking a shower.

s-tumhara spot boy aaya tha kehne ki director ne tumhe scene ke lie bulaya hai

k-scene? Kaisa scene? Pack up to haya hai

s- mujhe kya pata [she shrugs his shoulders]

k-hmm [she makes a dishearted face]. Chalo phir.

She walkes out of her van and he follows her.

She walks to the director.

k-sir, ab kaunsa scene hai? Pack up to ho gaya naa

director-nahi ek bohot important scene hai, turning pont type wo karna hi hai

k-aapko abhi yaad aa raha hai? Ab make up bhi karo, costume bhi

director-nahi nahi, it's a natural scene and you are looking fine aise hi kar lete hain

k-aise hi?

Director-haan haan, chalo kashish jaldi karo

k-hmm ok.

She is made to stand where she would be shot.

k-par hero..? aur lines?

director-aa raha hai, aa raha hai. Sab ho jayega, start to karo

the lights dim down.

Spotlight falls on her.

The assistant director prompts her the line.

Ad-madam, kahie; tum mujhe kuch kehna chahte ho naa, ye aapko hero ko kehna hai

k-ok..par, hero..kahan?

director-arre kaho to

she speaks up with all acting abilities.

k-tum mujhse kuch kehna chahte ho naa

'haan Kashish !'

Replies a manly passion filled voice, the voice which is familiar o her.

She looks here there.

Another spotlight falls on Sujal, who is standing at a corner with a red rose in his hand.

Her eyebrows crinkle with astonishment.

Why is he here? Where is the hero? Why did he answer?

These questions are going around in her mind.

Sujal walks towards her.

He looks into her beautiful eyes with his passion filled dark eyes.

She looks up at him

s-haan , haan main tumse bohot kuch kehna chahta hoon. Wo sab kehna chahto hoon jo pehle nahi keh paaya, jo pehle keh dena chahe tha. Apni dil ki baat kehna chahta hoon.  Kehna chahta hoon ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon, kehna chahtoo hoon ki tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakta, kehna chahta hoon ki tumhara saath zindagi bhar ke liye chahta hoon, har janam mein chahta hoon.

Before she could react, he bends down on his knees, with the red rose in his hand.

s-Kashish, Voulez-vous m\'epouser? Kashish, Vorresti sposarmi? Kashish, queres casar comigo? Kashish,Te quieres casar conmigo?Kashish, Vil du gifte dig med mig? Kashish, Wil je met me trouwen?Kashish, Willst du mich heiraten? Kashish, kyat um mujhse shaadi karogi? Kashish, will you marry me?

He looks up into her eyes with his eyes which are overflowing with emotions for her. sab kya tha? [she looks confused hearing he just said]

s-[he smiles] proposal. I proposed you in French, italian, portugues, Spanish, Danish, dutch, german, hindi and English.

He can't help but smile, that he made it an effort to learn so many languages.

Some moments of silence pass by.

Everybody out there is curious to know her answer, what will she say. Everyone is praying for her to say yes.

s-i know, mera aise publically propose karna bevkuffi hai, tum naa bhi keh sakti ho. Par...main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon, mujhe parvah nahi log mere bare mein kya sochte hain, main bass tumse kehna chahta tha; kyunki kahin naa kahin tumhari haan ki umeed hai. Waise, tum naa bhi keh sakti ho, tumhara hakk hai, tumhara faisla hai. Waise, befkoof to main hoon ki aaj tak dil ki baat zubaan tak laa nahi paya, tumhe bata hi nahi paaya. Bohot darr gaya hoon main Kashish...ek baar bass khone hi wala tha...ab khona nahi chahta..islie...I promise, main tumhe bohot pyaar karunga, zindagi bhar pyaar karunga, har pal pyaar karunga

his eyes are swimming in emotions

he sighs

s-naa bhi keh rahi ho to, ye phool rakhlo. Tumhare liye laaya tha.

He gets up with a sorrow laden, dejected face.

He just puts the rose near her feet.

He felt so defeated and hopeless, as if his whole life has become aimless.

The pain of his heart piercing him with every passing second.

He turns to go.

'har bhaasha mein will you marry me, bol sakte ho. Dil ki bhashaa nahi samajh sakte kya?'

He stops hearing her voice.

She quivers.

k-maine to dil ki bhaasha mein kab ka tumhe jawab de diya hai.

He turns to look at her, her eyes also have similar emotions as his.

k-ab hindi mein haan aur English mein yes I will marry you, aisa bhi kehna padega kya? Itne budhdhu ho kya?

His heart jumps hearing her.

As if his feet had conjured mind of their own, they take them to her and his arms embrace her into the most passionate hug.

The whole set breaks in an applause, some people are hooting and whisteling happily.

He cant help a tear from dropping.

s-i love you , Kashish !

her eyes are also filled with tears of joy

k-i love you too, Sujal ! love you a lot !

she closes her eyes and lets her drift into his warm embrace.


                         THE END


Edited by storywriter - 27 May 2011 at 3:34pm

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
superb Ending
hinal60 Senior Member

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
extremely beautiful ending
please write another fic soon
pinky901 Goldie

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
nice ending
well u show ekdum filmy type ending in filmy story
the way he propose is cuten unique. .hmm its gud finally without ne more questions and conflict they confess,nice story..well u hav maintain the film background till the end is gud..
thank u for the story...

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