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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 89)

NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged


Its evening, Sujal comes to pick them up.

Ma-aao beta

s-namaste aunty

ma-namaste-wahan sab saamaan set kar liya, hotel mein?


ma-beta, main Kashish ke bartaav ke lie bohot sharminda...

s-nahi aunty, I can understand, mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga . main jaanta hoon wo bohot pareshaan hai. Khair, chalein hum log?

Ma-haan chalte hain, main Kashish ko bulake laati hoon. Kiran !


Ma-paani ...vaani to puchle


Kiran comes with a tray



kiran-waise bhaiya


Kiran-meri di se shaadi aap hi karna

S smiles.

s-wo to main karunga hi [he gives a slight wink to her]

Kashish comes with maa wearing a white salwar kameez with a grave expression.


he says directing the question to her but she doesn't reply him neither glance at him.

Kiran-haan chalie naa, bhaiya !


They reach the restaurant.

Four of them occupy their seats.

Sujal has chosen a nice place with calming ambience.

Kashish is sitting gravely, lost in her thoughts.

She is looking at the faces of all the happy people who are smiling, chuckling and celebrating but she doesn't find any reason to smile herself.

'Kashish ! Kashish !'


She is jerked out of her thoughts as she hears someone call her name.

She looks at Sujal who was calling her name.

s-Kya khaogi?

k-kuch bhi [she murmers]

She doesn't have the appetite or wish to eat anything.

She just wants to get away from all the happy people of the world.

Sujal orders something.


Considerable moments pass in silence.

Sujal indulges in light conversation with Kashish' mother and sister but Kashish is sitting silently, lost in her own world.

s-aunty !

ma-haan beta

s-aunty, mujhe nahi pata kaise kahun, I know mera ye kehna bohot ajeeb hai par main..main...[he is fumbling]

ma-bolo beta

s-aap se kuch maangu to dengi aap?

Ma-zarura beta, kaho naa kya chahie?

s- Kashish

Ma ans Kiran's eyes light up with happiness

s-main Kashish se shaadi karna chahta hoon

Ma smiles happily and moves her hand on his head with motherly affection.

s-Kashish, kyat um mujhse shadai karogi?

Kashish is lost in her thoughts.

s-kashish ! Kashish !

k-huh? Haan? Kya?

Ma-Kashish Sujal tujhse kuch kehna chahta hai

k-huh? Kya?

s-Kashish, will you marry me?

She crinkles her eyebrows in a frown.

k-what? No ! shut up !

Sujal is taken aback by her reaction, but he knows her position and understands her. So he chooses not to say anything.

Ma-Kashish, aise baat karte hain kya? Sujal tumse itne pyaar se puch raha hai aur...tu hai ki...

Sujal gets up and walks to her and bends on his knees, every person there is looking at him.

 He looks into her eyes.

He holds the rose in his hand that was placed on the small vase kept on the table.

s-I love you a lot...a lot...a lot. [every bottled up feeling in his heart for him is oozing out with his every uttered word].

She is looking down at him with a blank expression.

s-Ms Kashish Sinha, will you marry me?


Edited by storywriter - 06 May 2011 at 12:39pm

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
awesome part..
loved it..
waiting 4 d next part..
cont soon...
thnx 4 d pm
hinal60 Senior Member

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
good u continue
ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
so finally u up
so without much adu lets talk about the up
its was really nice
sujal took kashish and her whole family for dinner
and there he tried to talk with kashihs but she was cold
anyways sujal finally proposed her
will be waiting eagerly for the next up
so plz cont soon and pm me
i hope u will like the comment
bd670816 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
amazing part neelu. loved it very much !!
thanx for the pm
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 6:23pm | IP Logged
finally u r here dear...
thank u for updating...

part 53
nice part...
Sujal has proposed Kashish...
only her reply is yet to be given...
cont soon dear...
dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
superb part
Finally Sujal proposes to Kashish and confesses his love for her. Both Kashish's mom and Kira are overjoyed. But Kashish just refuses him
continue soon 
FULTUSI Senior Member

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
awesomeee awesomeee...
plzzz continue soon

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