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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 78)

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
A very touching part neelu...kashish is so deeply hurt this time...Sujal is occupied with his confusions...and just bends it on her everytime...but the part was full of emotions...but atleast kashish confessed it today...told him that she does love him a lot...ab rest is upto him to think what he wants..but he reacted like 'so ur ditching me'...kahin na kahin he accepts there was more than friendship between ladka kitna confused hai...har baar kuch aur naam deta hai unke relationship ko...but fact was...he cudnt take her words...he might have thgt...he will ask her the ditching thing...and she will give a negative answer...but kashish ne bohot acha kiya...this had to happen...kab tak bechari raste k beecho beech chalti rahegi...she had to take a side na...sujal cudnt even understand that its his possessiveness that is taking the toll...
but eventually kashish is also wrong...which man will approve of such actions...m sure even her mom will not happily approve of it...fact is ...kashish is blindly chasing her dreams...even if shez not realizing it...its not just about sudhir or this hero now...sujal is right...its about her blindly walking in the path of her ambitions...where she has blurred the line between whats right and whats wrong...even earlier when she wanted to support her family...she could have done something else for a living...instead of going 4 that sudhir to become an actress...
sujal should come to terms with his feelings...but even kashish should come back to some morals and ethics...she has lost the beautiful and innocent nature she had earlier...sujal was right...he has lost his kashish....cont soon...

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
part 47
ye Sujal har waqt aisa kyun karta hai....................hes too insecure and damn too possessive of Kashish but he will never ever confess his feelings to her..................poor Kashish always at the receiving so angry at Sujal........................cont soon.................

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
its a nice ff...add me to ur pm list......plz

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Nice part
Kashish ne sahi kiya...sujal deserved this...attitude dikhane ki bhi limit hoti hai...
continue soon

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
nice part
Piya knows Sujal too well. she is a good friend...who wants to see sujal and Kashish together.
Sujal need to learn to control his anger and broaden his thinking. Kashish ne bilkul sahi kiya...Akhir kab tak who sujal ke attitude ko sehati.
continue soon

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged


It's been a week and Sujal, Kashish haven't spoken.

Sujal was urging to speak to her, but his ego would come in between every time he would think of calling her.

He was remembering all the days when he first met her, their first dinner together, her chana party, their trip to Paris, her smile, her lovable charm.

Her memories brought smile on his face.

But his urge to meet her was increasing as the days were passing, he wanted to see her somehow.


Kashish  was shooting for her movie in the studio.

The scene was simple yet romantic. She and the hero were just supposed to walk along the woods together, but yet they had to potray complex and intense chemistry.

The scene was not happening even after several takes, director was unhappy with hero's acting. Specially he couldn't find the chemistry clicking.

Kashish was also trying her best from her side.

The shoot was going on, suddenly she halts seeing Sujal standing there with his hands inside pocket.

His gaze is directed at her, she looks down to avoid her gaze.

The director and the producer happily walk to greet Sujal.

Director-arre Sir, aap? Aaiye naa.

s-aise hi bass dekhne chala aaya

his gaze is fixed at Kashish all the whie, Kashish is trying to look away.

As the shoot is halted for a while, Kashish asks a executive producer

Ex. Pr- arre mam yehi to hain jinhone producer sir ko help kiya jab unko financial crisis ho gait hi, madam almost inke paison se hi bann rahi hai ye film , arre jo paise udhar die naa producer sir ko ussi se hi to movie bann rahi hai

k-oh !

kashish looks at sujal who is conversing with the director and producer.

s-aap shoot continue rakhie

dir-jii jii

producer-sir, aaye hain to shoot dekh ke jaiye naa

dir-haan haan sir, baithiye naa

Sujal ke lie chair aa jaati hai baithne ke lie.


Again the same scene is being re-shot

Kashish is wearing a simple white salwar kameez. She and the hero are just supposed to walk silently without words, but their silence is supposed to cnvey all the emotions; their love, their trust, emotion, pain , sacrifice and all the feelings.

After almost three unsuccessful retakes, again. The director gets up in irritation and walks towards the hero.

Dir-uffffff !!!!!! can't you understand, show subtlety, the hidden feelings. Don't you know how to express through eyes, haven't you ever been in love.

Hero-I am doing sir, but....

Dir-but what? Itna simple scene hai. Let me show you, how it should look. Suppose Sujal sir us you. [to Sujal] ek baar sir heroine ke paas wahan jaake khade ho jaiye.

Kashish looks down and shrinks a bit as Sujal slowly and hesitantly goes and walks to her.

Dir-sir, please zara close khade ho jaiye. Jaise aap apni girlfriend ke saath ho.

Sujal looks down embarrassed, puts hands inside his pocket. Kashish looks up at him.

He looks at her with corner of his eyes.

Dir-aab pass uss point se iss point tak chalke aana hai.


Sujal starts walking.

He stops after a step, looks over his shoulder to look at Kashish. She looks up at him.

She also takes a step.

They are taking slow steps hesitantly, avoiding each others gaze. But their embarrassment and emotions are mirroring in their face.

Kashish's heart skips a beat when her hand brushes with his. He looks at her from the corner of his eyes.

She looks down and wets her lips in embarrassment, trying to hide her blush.

He tries to suppress his smile as he always found the wetting of her lips cute.

The crew is silently watching them.

They just look so picture perfect that everybody is spell bound seeing them together.

Kashish takes a few quick steps to hide her embarrassment but her feet slips a bit and she loses he balance mildly.

k-ouch !

s-oh !

He holds her firmly in his arms before loses her balance.

She looks up at him, her cheeks have turned pink.

His eyes ask her that was she ok.

Her eyes look down to answer in a yes.

They look into each other's eyes for a whole minute.

'Brilliant ! Brilliant ! what a shot ! Perfect !'

The director applauds with the whole crew making Sujal and Kashish coming back to the reality, they separate from each other and give a formal smile.

Dir- you two make a perfect couple sir. Sir, aapko to acting line mein hona chahie tha . what a chemistry ! awesome ! wah ! wah !

s-emm..thank you

Dir- [to hero] tum sir ke 1 % bhi kar paaye to bohot badi baat hogi

Hero-main kya karu, heroine ka bhi to contribution hona chahie naa. She just responds to him.

Dir-oye, sir jaise intensity to le aa

Sujal was embarresed enough, so he decides to leave.

Edited by storywriter - 09 April 2011 at 1:51pm

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
lovely update....
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nice update neelu . loved it

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