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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 77)

NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged


Sujal is in office, working. He is feeling extremely tired and sleepy.

He had drived the whole night and hadn't rested for even a minute, & here he was working again.

Piya enters.

P-Hi Sujal !

s-Hi ! [yawns]

P-you look tired, what happened?


P-aaj dopahar ko bhi office mein nahi the, bahar pucha to unhone kaha kit um abhi sham ko office aaye ho.

s-was travelling.


s-aise hi. Zaruri kaam aa gaya tha, I drove then I drove back so, aane mein sham ho gai.

p-haan,  Kashish ke ghar jaane ke 10 ghante aane ke 10 ghante.

He looks at her.

She smiles.

p-wahin gaye the naa?

s-jaanti ho to, puchti kyun ho?

p-guess karna bhi to obvious tha naa. She is feeling fine now?

s-i hope.

p-mile nahi?

s-nahi, sidha office aa gaya

p-tum bhi naa. Jiske liye itna kiya, use mile bhi nahi. Phone to kar lete.

s-mil lunga.


s-aaj aur kab?

p-kab? Raat ke barah baje?

S-nahi 9 baje, uski nayi movie ka premiere hai

p-badiya, par by the way apni ghadi dekho abhi 9 hi baj rahe hai.

s- what????? Oh shit ! I should better rush !

he almost runs out of the cabin.



Jab tak wo pohonchta hai, press and all the guests have already occupied their seats in the dark theatre.

Sujal occupies the last seat.

He can see Kashish, who is sittong in the front row.

The movie starts.

It's a different kind of movie.

It's a kind of artistic and non-commercial movie.

Kashish was first time working in such type of movie.

It was a test of her acting skills, he was happy that she was fairing good.

His eyes stuck on the screen, his pupils dilate.

His forehead creases in a frown.

His throat dries up, his jaw clenches automatically.

Anger starts rising.

It was a kissing scene between Kashish and the hero in the movie.

The scene ends, but Sujal couldn't take it out of his mind.

He couldn't concentrate in rest of the movie.

He walks out of the hall as soon as the movie ends.

He stands at a secluded corner in the parking area with his cigarette.


Kashish is busy with all the people.

She is happy getting appreciation for her work.

As everybody leaves she also starts to walk towards her car.

She feels a fierce pull n her arm & finds herself facing a rage filled Sujal.

She is surprised and taken aback seeinhim.


 She couldn't help smiling seeing him there. She was happy that he had helped him when she needed him the most and also today, he had come to see her movie. Even if she hadn't invited him.

He is tightly holding her arm and his eyes are piercing into her.


She is taken aback by his sudden shouting at her.


s-How dare you kiss him?

k-its just a movie, script ki demand thi to maine....

s-kiski ijaazat se???????

k-kiski ijaazat chahie mujhe.

His jaw gets more clenched. His grip on her arm gets tighter.

k-aaaaaaah ! dard ho raha hai mujhe. Sujal, know naa script demanded was just a....

s-you can do anything for fame. Huh? Kuch bhi kar sakti ho naa !


s-sahi tha Sudhir, sahi thi tumhari maa, galat tha main ! Tum jaisi are not worth...tum jaise ye model-vodel..kabhi achchi ho hi nahi sakti...aaj iske saath to kal naajaane kis kiske saath.

k-kya? Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya keh rahe ho?

s-sahi hai, tab Sudhir ko pakda ab iss hero ke saath chumma le liya, haan beech mein all-time lifeline main to hoon hi. Chalu...vey chalu !

k-chiiiiiii !!!!!!!!!! chiiiiiii !!!!!! tum aisi ghinauni baat soch sakte ho, maine kabhi.....[her eyes are brimming with tears]

s-tum kar sakti ho, main soch bhi nahi sakta !!!!!!!!!!!

k-kya kiya hai maine??????? Kya mera rishta hai uske saath? Nahi naa. I know mujhe tumhe batana tha, iske bare mein par tab haalat aise the ki...

s-kya pata, kya kya hai kiske saath

she is hurt beyond words.

She is still for a moment hearing him.

k-tum...mujhe ..aise...[she can't hold her tears] are a hopeless man...galti to maine jo main...tumse...why did I even expect that you will understand? ...when you never

s-what?????? Huh??????? You don't deserve Sujal Garewal ! can a small town model and actress, a middle class girl deserve the tycoon and sophisticated Sujal Garewal...yes, I know I am not worth you....galti...meri hi hai jo maine tumse bohot pyaar kiya...[her eyes overflow with tears]...ab jab galti merit hi to sazza bhi main bhugtungi naa....I hope you will find someone worth you, sorry that you had to waste your time with me.

s-what do you mean? You are ditching me?

k-who am I to ditch you. I don't want myself to exist for you any more, neither you will exist for me anymore. It's better that way.

She slowly crawls into her car & leaves.

Leaving a dazed Sujal behind.


Edited by storywriter - 07 April 2011 at 2:04pm

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged

ye dono har waqt fight he kyon karte hai?????????

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
the up is good
so sujal goes to attend kashish premier but when he saw that kashish is kissing a hero he got angry
ab pata nahin kya hoga
plz cont soon and pm me

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
gosh ladai kabhi khatam hi nahi hogi

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
dono kabhi nahi sudhar sakte eak sudhrega tog doosra gaya kaam se ....ab bhagwaan ya tum bacahoo inko thank you for this part and pm dono ko dimaag kab aayega 

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Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
superb update....

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
part 46
lovely part ClapClap............ must say a good step by sujal EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..........was not expecting him to be using brains LOLLOLLOLLOL............ it was thotful of him to make kashish's mom to understand Big smileBig smileBig smile........ thanku to him Embarrassed Embarrassed............
mom daughter re union was emotional CryCry.............. poor girl had felt so lonely earlier OuchOuch......... thanks to sujal he made everything good Big smileBig smileBig smile.............

Part 47
Shocked Shocked......can i kick sujal LOLLOLLOL................ he seriously needs brains LOLLOLLOL....poor guy got jealous just by seeing on screen kiss LOLLOLLOL...wanna ask him why he got jealous TongueTongue .....does he have answer LOLLOLLOL
felt bad for kashish OuchOuchOuch........... i wonder if sujal paid attention to her confesion WinkWinkWink.......

wait to see what he does next LOLLOL........

continue soon Big smileBig smile

Edited by -purnima- - 08 April 2011 at 10:00pm

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nice update. wht a story yaar, whn I was thinking tht now they will come close they again fought. why r they always fighting. lets see how long the fight continues. conitnue soon.......

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