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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 75)

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
what damn! that director...Angry   sick!!!!  he doesnt have any morals himself...and he may openly say whoever he slept with...why d hell has he to name people...kahish didnt enjoy doing al that...but a lesson for her too...that such people can never be trusted...its not jus about getting a first chance...its about living up with that secret and the consequences for the rest of your life...and that damn media...they have nothing better to do....bas hot news chahiye....please do justice to this neelu...i dont know real life me kitna possible hai...but atleast for the fic...i wud luvvvvv to see you teaching that director a lesson...by sujal ...in whatever way he thinks is best...and he is powerful enough to do that....ya kahsish...to gain her lost self respect....pata nahi what about kashish now...how will she face the world again...Cry .....and waiting to see what role sujal plays here...if any...pata nahi whats wrong with his good side these days...continue very soon...luv yaaaWink

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
part 45
OMG that man....how can he say such things to media? poor Kashish.................now shes really alone in the cruel world....................cont soon.................
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
OMG...yeh kya ho gaya...
Kashish has been left alone...even her family is not willing to support her.
Why is sujal not going to help and comfort her.
continue soon
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged

PART 46

Its early morning.

Kashish's mom wakes up hearing the sound of the door bell.

She wonders  who must be it so early in the morning.

She opens the door and finds Sujal standing in front of him.

Mom-emm...tum....? [she is surprised seein him that too at this hour]....andar aao.

Sujal walks a few steps inside.

Mom-baitho

s-wo..aunty...mujhse kuch kehna tha....

she looks away from him.

Mom-agar baat Kashish ke baare mein hai to, mujhe kuch nahi sunna uske baare mein. Wo marr chuki hai hamare liye, aisi beti hone se achcha hota ki wo marr jaati !

s-nahi  aunty, aisa mat kahiye. Kashish ne jo kiya wo aap sab ke lie kiya.

Mom-dekho agar Kashish ne tumhe apni wakalat karne ke lie bheja hai to, tum yahan se jaa sakte ho.

s-nahi aunty, Kashish ne mujhe nahi bheja. Usko to pata bhi nahi ki main yahan aaya hoon. Aap please Kashish ko galat mat samajhiye, wo aap sab se bohot pyaar karti hai.  Main Kashish ko jaanta hoon,  wo aisa koi kaam kar hi nahi sakti jisse aap sab ko hurt ho. Mera yakeen maaniye, Kashish ki zindagi hain aap log.

Mom is silently standing and listening to him.

Sujal walks a few steps and stands in front of her mom.

s-aunty, maine aaj tak kisi ke saamne aajtak haath nahi jode.  Par aaj....[he folds  his hands in front of her mom]..aaj aunty main aap se haath jodke viinti karta hoon, aap Kashish ko maaf kar dihie. Usne jo kiya majburi mein kiya, iss parivaar ke lie kiya. Main jaanta hoon Kashish ne jo raasta apnaya wo sahi nahi tha, par uske iraade...wo to sahi the naa aunty. Aap sab Kashish ka hausla ho, uski taakat  ho, uska jahaan ho. Usko aise akela mat kijie aunty, maine dekhi hai uski halaat; ro-roke bura haal ho gaya hai uska. Main jaanta hoon, duniya job hi bole use Kashish ke hausle nahi tutt sakte, par aap uss se naraaz ho gai to wo bilkul tutt jayegi. Please aunty.

Her mom looks at Sujal and nods in agreement to his words and moves her hand on his hair.

Mom-thik hai

s-[grins] thank you so much , aunty. Main ab chalta hoon.

Mom-ruko to, khuch khaa ke

s-nahi aunty kaam hai

mom-suno ! ponch lo, tumhari ankhon mein asoo hain

he is a bit surprised he never realised that his eyes had welled up, he rubs his eyes with the hankerchief with a bit of embarrasement and quickly heads towards his car.

+++++++++++++++++++++++

Kashis is laying on her bed, she doesn't feel like getting up ar even moving. Her life feels so void and empty.

The phone rings, she picks it up after several rings as she sees her mom's no. displayed on the screen.

He sits up.

k-maaaaaaa !!!!!!!

ma- kaisi hai? Bhi bhi mann kharaab hai?

k-wo..maa...aap....main kitni khush hoon main....[she is too overwhelmed to express anything]..aap

ma-maine apni bachchi ko bohot rulaya naa

k-maaa !!!!!! [she has tears of joy]...aisa mat kaho..i am so happy....i love you, ma. Mujhe aur kisi ki parwaah nahi jab aap mere saath ho.

Ma-I love to, beta. Bass...chup ho jaa...aise rote hain kya bachchin ki tarah chal asoo ponch.

k-I am sorry, maa !

ma-nahi Kashish, galti to meri hi hai, maine apni bachchi ko samajhne mein bhool ki. Aur agar Sujal aake puri baat nahi batata to shayad main...

k-Sujal? Wahan aaya tha?

Ma-haan, subah subah aaya tha. Usne mujhe sab khul ke bataya aur samjhaya.

She is overjoyed hearing that Sujal had travelled to her home just for her.

She is grinning happily.

k-oh !!!!!!!!!!!! main...wo...aj hi Sujal se baat karti hoon....kuch bataya hi nahi usne mujhe, I should thank him hai naa maa.

Ma-bikul, waise tu bata rahi thi aaj tera sham ko ek nayi movie ka premier hai naa

k-haan, meri first non-commercial movie. Arre baap re, abhi to mujhe ready hona hoga premiere mein jo jaana hai

ma-haan, jaldi kar

k-ok , ok . bye maa

ma-bye beta

she hangs up the phone.

 



Edited by storywriter - 06 April 2011 at 9:54am

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
superb update....
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
wowoowowo i love sujal aaj pehli baar acha kaam kiya hai kashish ki maa ussko lauta do so sweet ..he is crying also awww jaao kashish ja ke baat karoo usse

thank you very much for this part and pm

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