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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 65)

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
nice update neelu. hope sujol clear this misunderstanding before  its too late !!

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
amazing part

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
poor sujal ........ LOLLOLLOL...........sharafat ke chakar mein band baj gayi LOLLOLLOLLOL........ who told him to be so caring & take pia to his own house LOLLOLLOL ........ but u shud be blamed .......TongueTongueTongue...kashish ko subah subah kyun bheja ..surprise dene ke liye LOLLOLLOLLOL ......... phasa diya na sujal ko Unhappy ........... wonder kaise manaega kashish ko Ermm ....... he stuck bad this time round LOL
LOL& pweese can i kill pia AngryAngryAngry .........

continue soon Big smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:16am | IP Logged
very nice update. I thought some way kashish may find out abt the things, but this was really too much for her. wondering wht will happen next. continue soon.............

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:04am | IP Logged
ye kia hoga ya.......................that Pia i wanted to kill her .........................sujal is in idiot usko samjh na aya ke pia ki intentions kia hai...........................
 
 
plz plz con't soon dear

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
nice parts.EKDUM FILMY DIS TIME:)HMM AAAB KYA DHAMAKA HOGA.WILL WAIT N WATCH;)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged

PART 40

Kashish reaches her place.

She is wailing like a child. She is heart broken.

She calls her mom.

k-maaaa ! [crying like a baby]

ma-arre kya hua beta? Ro kyun rahi hai?

k-maa...maa..[she is panting]..maa..wo mujhse pyaar kyun nahi karta? Mujhmein kya kami hai? Kya main buri hoon? Main to usse itna pyaar karti hoon, wo kyun nahi samajhta?

Ma-kya hua Kashish? Saaf saaf bata, hua kya hai?

k-ma..maa..wo Sujal...kisi aur ladki..wo...wo..islie...mujhse thik se baat bhi nahi katra, mujhe kabhi phone bhi nahi karta..wo..maa....[she sobbing]..aaj..main usse milne gai to wo....uske saath..maa !!!! [she squeals]

ma-Kashish, ro mat ! chup, chup ho jaa, beta.

k-kaise chup ho jaun, maa? Aapko pata bhi hai ..main..mere dil pe kya beet rahi hai...mujhe laga subah subah mujhe dekh ke Sujal khush hoga...par...

ma-par, agar uski khushi uss ladki ke saath hai to?

k-matlab?

Ma-tu usse pyara karti hai to, teri khushi uski khushi mein honi chahie.

Kashish is silent.

Ma-Kashish?

k-haan maa

ma-kya hua? Kuch bol

k-kya kahun? Aap thik keh rahi ho. Kitni bevkuf hoon naa main. Wo mujhe kyun pasand karega. Aur agar maine usse sachche dil se chaha hai to, to...mujhe Sujal ko ussi ke paas jane dena chahie jiske saath wo khush rahe. Shayad. Mujhmein hi khot hai jo mujhse aaj tak wo pyaar nahi kar paaya, main shayad uske layak hi nahi. Kahan wo aur kahan main.

Ma-Kashish, tu aise...

K wipes her tears.

k-nahi, maa don't worry main thik hoon. Mera shoot hai, main rakhti hoon. Bye.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Sujal subah se Kashish ka phone try kar raha tha, par phone tha ki lag hi nahi raha tha.

He was feeling angry and frustrated. But, he was also confused that why actually was he feeling angry and frustrated; Kashish ko kuch bhi lagta rahe use kya, why is he hell bent on making her understand the truth.

Why couldn't he stand when tears flow from her beautiful sea deep eyes.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Kashish is sitting on a chair, she is waiting for her shoot to start.

The actor of the movie comes and sits beside her.

Actor-hi

k-hi [she comes out of her thouts]

a-so kya socha?

k-kis bare mein?

a-maine uss din kaha tha naa lets party together, par you said you were busy.

k-party to ho gai naa

a-haan, par we can date each other

k-no thank you

a-Why you like someone else?

k-i don't wanna talk about this

a-arre , ajeeb ho tum. I am the superstar, every actress wanna date me. Your career will get a big jump plus lot of publicity, aur main kuch serius thode keh raha hoon, just a casual affair. My gf and I just broke up, so its time to start the hunt again.

k-no thank you, I am genuinely not interested.

a-but I'l take care of you, I'l give you everything you want.

k-shoot start ho gaya hai, lets go.

She gets up and goes for the shoot.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

The shooting was going on, when she sees Sujal speaking to the director.

She frowns in surprise, seeing him.

The director halts the shoot abruptly to everybody's surprise.

Sujal signals her to come to a side.

Kashish looks away.

Sujal tries several times to make her come to a secluded area for a conversation but she royally ignores him and busies herself with the crew.

It is height of Sujal's patience.

He walks over to her & turns her holding her elbow.

She is turned with a jerk, the whole syudio is engulfed in silence.

s-mujhe tumse baat karni hai, side mein aao !

k- mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni, I am busy ! [she looks away]

the actor comes.

a-hey, who are you? Just go

s-[with a warning look] you stay out of this ! [he looks at k again] phone kyun band kar rakha hai?

k-phone band nahi hai, tumhara number reject list mein daal dia hai

his jaw tightens as he hears her.

k-main busy hoon, mujhe kaam karna hai.

s-aur mujhe tumse baat karni hai !

k-mujhe nahi karni hai !

actor again come sin.

a-hey go ! she doesn't wanna speak to you !

s-did I ask you?

a-tum jaante nahi main kaun hoon, don't bother her !     

Sujal looks t him with a ferocious look with a dangerous smirk on his lips.

s-kaun hai bey tu? Huh?

Sujal steps towards him.

s-haan, bol naa kaun hai?

Sujal steps again, the actor stepa back.

a-emm..wo...

sab chup chap dekh rahe hain, sabko lag raha hai ab to ladai hogi, sure Sujal  ek maarega.

Sujal pushes the actor hard , wo actor jaake 3-feet durr girta hai

s-kya kar lega? Steroid leke 6-packs banana se kuch nahi hota.

a-oye..wo...

s-shhhhh ! aage kuch bhi bola naa to tere khubsurat thobde pe permanent nishana bann jayega. Bol banau ? [shows his fist]

Kashish holds Sujal's shirt.

k-no ! please ! ladna band karo !

he looks at her.

s-nahi ladunga, agar mere saath chalogi to.

k-kahan?

s-mujhe baat karni hai

Kashish looks at the director for permission.

Director-haan, haan aaram se jao, wo..waise bhi abhi lunch break hone hi wala hai naa..jao jao

Sujal holds her hand and takes her along towards his car.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Sujal drives in the highest speed in full silence.

They reach a secluded highway, he stops the car with a jerk.

He gets out of the car, Kashish follows.

Sujal holds her from her arms and looks into her eyes.

s-I am really sorry Kashish, par tum jo samajh rahi ho waisa kuch nahi hai.

k-Sujal mujhe uss bare mein baat nahi karni !

s-par wo bass ek nazro ka dhoka tha

k-achcha maine jo dekha wo galat hai?

s-galat nahi hai, par sahib hi nahi hai. She forced me !

k-achcha [she rolls her eyes]. Itne bade 26 saal ke, 6 feet ke aadmi ko usne force kiya, kya baat hai !

s-really, main sach keh raha hoon. Wo aise achanak se usne mujhe ..ki...mere kuch samajhne se pehle..aur wahan tum...

k-aur usne tumhari shirt kyun pehni thi, bass tumhari shirt?

s-mujhe nahi pata, I had gone for a jog, believe me. Bass, uss raat wo drunk thi to main use ghar laaya, she slept on my bed aur main living room mein, then I went for a jog in the morning, aur jab aaya to...

k-to you smooched her

s-wo ek galti thi !

k-sujal, at least don't lie. Main jaanti hoon ussi ke saath busy rehte the naa tum,  that's why you avoided me naa, mujhe phone bhi nahi karte the.

s-aisa nahi hai, main busy tha.

k-Uske saath?

s-tum mujh pe shak kar rahi ho?

She looks away folding her arms to her chest.

s-Kshish, job hi hua use bhul jao, please. Mujhe maaf kar do.

She looks at him.

k-agar main tumhari jagah hoti, to kya tum mujhe maaf karte?

She looks into her eyes.

She is looking up at him.

s- I have already forgiven you !

he turns around as his eyes have over flown with the pain.

She is standing at the same position, as if she is freezed.

She couldn't believe what he said, she thought he had forgotten.

She thought he had forgotten her incidence with that movie director ,Sudir Sharma; but he hadn't.

She looks down.

There is complete silence between them for some moments.

Sujal turns and says without looking at her.

s-lets go, shoot ke lie late ho raha hai tumhe.

Sujal gets in the car, she follows.

He drops her to the studio, but they didn't even share a single word the whole time.

He also leaves without a word, she also doesn't say anything.

 



Edited by storywriter - 23 March 2011 at 9:19am

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