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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 56)

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Test?? Hmm....interesting....bas I hope mera aisa test koi kabhi na le....Poor Sujal!! And well....he fought wid the media....ahemz....thats sweet but he better be careful. They can write just abt anything if they want...hehe. And finally.....Kashish ki dad se mulakat hogi Sujal ki...do parts lag gaye...Embarrassed

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PART 34

They enter the house, sujal sees a an extremely weak figure on a wheel chair.

K goes over to him.

k-papa, ye sujal hai mera dost. Mujhse milne aaya hai.

sujal is stunned to see him, specially his condition.

The man doesn't respond to what kashish had said, but sujal folds his hands out of formality.

s-namaste

he slightly moves his head.

k-sujal ye papa hain mere, wo actually he is paralyzed so…emm…[the sadness is prevalent in her eyes]

s-wo…ye…sab…tumne kabhi..mujhe..[he is himself very shocked]

ma-nahi bataya tune kashish? Arre yahi aadat hai uski, isli itni pareshaan rehti hoon main iske lie. Koi chotti se bhi khushi hogi to sab se baant legi, par gham kabhi nahi.

k-maa, aap bhi naa.

Ma-kya main bhi? Haan? Kashish waise bhi unse bohot close hai, par unki ye bimaari

k-maa bass bhi karo dukhda, khaana lagado naa bhukh lagi hai mujhe aur sujal ko bhi, hai naa.

Ma-haan baba, lagati hoon.

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Ma khana laga deti hai.

Ma-kashish tu sujal ko company de de, main aaj tere papa ko jaake khila deti hoon.

k-ji maa

mom goes and kashish sits with sujal to have lunch.

K is having the lunch silently, sujal is just gazing at her.

s-wo…tumhare papa ko ye..kab..se..?

k-takreebann 2 saal ho aaye hain

s-oh I am sorry

k-islie aai main wapas [she looks at him and sighs]. Tum soch rahe hoge naa main wapas kyun aai

he looks away from her.

k- train main uss din iss iraade se chadi thi ki kabhi wapas nahi jaungi, par ghar aai to [she looks down with a streak of sorrow in her eyes]…to papa ka ilaaj…ventilators, dialysis , roz minimum teen hazaar ka kharcha, Kiran ki padhai sab, maa ki school teacher ki salary aur papa ke pension se kitna chalta hai, sab to mujhe ki dekhna tha naa.

s-mujhe kuch kyun nahi bataya?

k-kya batati? Kya karte tum? Humdardi jatate? Paise dete? Nahi chahie mujhe hum dardi, aur paise? Udhaar dete, to chukaati kaise? kabhi nahi chukaa paati. Kam se kam abhi ek stable income to hai naa.

He is silently looking into the space.

k-aur shayad darti bhi thi, tumhe batane se

s-darti thi? Kyun? [he frowns looking at her]

k-kyunki rishton ke beech agar paisa aa jaye to rishte tutt jaate hain, aur ye rishta….main uss ehsaas ko khona nahi chahti thi. Its precious [she says looking into his eyes with full sincerity and honesty]

their eyes meet for some moments.

Tabhi mumma comes.

Ma-khana kaisa laga beta?

s-emm…acha tha..thanks aunty…[he answers coming back from his world]

ma-pata nahi tha naa tum aaoge, islie zyada kuch bana nahi paai

s-no aunty , I loved the food. [he gets up] waise, I am late. I should leave.

Ma-achcha beta

s-bye aunty. Kashish, bye and take care of yourself.

k-bye sujal, thanks for coming.

He nods.

s-I'l call you.

She gives an ear to ear grin, while maa smiles as sujal waves goodbye to them.

 

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
nice update neelu . loved it
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
nice part
Sujal is shocked to see kashish's father in such a fragile condition. Finally Kashish tells him the reson for which she had come back to become an actress. And Sujal feels guilty for thinking all the wrongs things about her.
continue soon
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
nice part
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
lovely part ClapClap............... so finally kashish's position & her reason of coming back is known to sujal SmileSmileSmile............

felt bad for kashish Hug........ hope everything gets well 4 her soon Big smileBig smile.......

& this time sujal remembers to call her LOLLOLLOL.....he 4gets everytime LOLLOLLOL........

waiting to see the progress in their relation from now on WinkWinkWink

continue soon Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
hi
the up is good
so kashish dad id paralysed very sad to know this
so this was the reasson behind kashish's doing that film and again coming back to mumbai
i really pity for her
she is a self made girl
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Awesome update !
Loved it !
So all Kashish's actions are justified now !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

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