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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 53)

ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
the up is good
so new entry kar de tune
woh bhi kashish ke sis ke roop mein
par yaar yeh kashish ke sis sujal ko plumber kun samajh rahe haai dont she have any brain
anyways let see how surprise kashish become after seeing sujal
plz cont soon and pm me

dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
nice part
Kashish is very understanding. Sujal needs to be with her,
Finally Sujal ko time mil hi gaya Kashish se milne ka. Yeh ladki kaun hai...hope that sujal has reached the right house,
continue soon
NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged


He rings the door bell of the house.

A middle aged lady opens the door.


The school girl passes him, goes inside the house.

s-wo..namaste..main Sujal Garewal hoon, kashish se milne aaya hoon

lady-oh to tum ho Sujal...aao naa beta andaar..main Kashish ki maa hoon, tumse phone pe baat...

s-haan aunty mujhe yaad hai

maa smiles.

Ma-main abhi kashish ko bulake laati hoon, tab tak jaake paani le aana Kiran. [looking at the schoolgirl]. Waise ye Kiran hai beta, kashish ki chotti behen. Abhi 12th standard mein hai.

Ma goes.

Sujal baith jaata hai, uss chotte se ghar mein.

Maa comes back after a while.

Ma-abhi aa rahi hai wo.

The little girl brings a glass of water and give sit to s.

Kiran-ab piyo naa sujal

Ma-arre, aise bolte hain kya. Tujhse umar mein bade hain.

Kiran-ok maa. Pii lijie naa, sujal uncle [says with a dangerous sweetness]

Sujal looks at her then takes a sip of the water.

Paani peete hi thukk deta hai, it was horribly salty

Sujal ka expression dekh ke zor zor se hasne lagti hai.

Ma-ye sab kya hai Kiran ! ghar aye mehmaan ke saath aise. I am sorry beta..wo...

Tabhi wahan kashish comes with her crushes

k-sujal ! [she has the happiest grin on her face]

sujal gets up seeing her



s-kaisi ho tum?

k-better, aise achanak? Bolna bataye.

s-i thought of surprising you

k-i am surprised, pleasantly. Waise tum maa aur Kiran se to mil liye naa, papa se mile?


k-abhi milwati hoon

ma-sambhalke laana, kashish.

k-jii maa

k goes.

Ma-waise beta, khana khaake jaoge naa.

s-nahi..wo..aunty main...

ma-nahi kya? Itni durr se aaye ho, aise to jaane hi nahi dungi main.

Tabhi wahan pe bhaagke Kiran aa jati hai, jo kuch palon ke lie kahin gai hui thi

Kiran-di kahan gai?

Ma-papa ko lene gai hai.

Kiran-ohhhhh I see. Koi nahi, tab tak main hamare sujal uncle ko hamare garden mein ho naye phool khile hain wo dikhake laati hoon.

Before anyone would even retaliate or respond she pulls sujal with her.

She takes him to the garden.

Kiran-ye dekho ye hamara garden hai.

s-wow ![showing sarcasm]

kiran-aur wo dekho, wo hamare padosiyon ka garden hai

s-double wow [rolling his eyes]

kiran-aur wahan rehta hai pyaara sa Troy, unka doggie. Who is a cuteeeeeee Doberman, jo bohot pyaara hai. he loves everyone, emm..waise kabhi kabhi pyaar karte karte logon ko kaat bhi deta hai, but neve mind, he is sweet. Bass aaj tak bees-tees logon ko kata hai, 15 ko kharocha hai, aur 5-6 pe chadke haath pair tode hain, warna he is harmless.

Says with a dangerous sweetness and looks at s, s looks back at her bit cautiously.

Sujal ek step badata hai to walk, but uska pair rassi mein phass jata hai and he finds himself hanging from the rope which is tied to a tree in a upside down position.

Aur kiran zor zor se hass rahi hai

Aur wo aisi position se latak raha hai ki wo ho khunkhaar Troy naam ka dog hai is just few feet away from him.

Its jumping to get him.

s-put me down !!!!!!!!

kiran to haste haste bhaag jaati hai wahan se.

kiran-bye bye, hero !

Edited by storywriter - 01 March 2011 at 10:49am

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bd670816 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
amazing update neelu. loved it. kashish's sister is so naughty.
thanx fr the pm
Iqbal Neha1 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
amazing part
kiran and sujal scenes were really nice
maanmishti Goldie

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
loved kashish sister mentally retarted......plzzzzzzz update soon
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Mind blowing she is so naughty Hahaah i hope sujal iss se pareshaan na ho jaye
cute_samrah Goldie

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
hahahahahaha............................kashish ki behan kya cheez....................sujal ki saali tu buhat shaarati ha yar...................

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