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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 5)

pinky901 Goldie

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
kitna chweettttttttt part h yaar
i mn sujal is such a gentleman firstly he waits for her so dat they cn walk togethrnice
aur k to saare part k credit le jati hai yaar
the  way she is doing all such innocent thgs is jus heart taking ..
kya bat hai
convo start kiya bhi to sidha F*Ly par hi attack..bholi hai par samjhdaar bhi ;)i mn wat she wanna do knowing abt his F*Ly ;)hahaha
well its gud ki ek hi mulakaat main dono ki awkwardness ekdu hi chali gayi k do hav small F*Ly..n ya she is very diff frm all those people but she is not atall ignorant individual.i mn the time wen s says u want to become model den the way she aswer back him wit onfidence is actually the important thg which 1 should hav to achieve their goal..waah yyaar sai hai
kitni aasani se kaha ma kehti hain all sujal bhi sitten by her bholiapan n saadgi n he also wonder ki k jaise pyari si ladki bhi actress banna chahti hai
but she is not aware abt cruelty of dis industries.
well lik the scemne wen she said ki sheena ne kaha aap khadoos ho,muh fatt ho n all n after dat the  rare laugh of sujal is jus awesome
well kitni easil usne s ka rasta saaf kiya na ki main kabhi date par nai aayi
.so sweetttttt yaar
n last but not d least hw can i forget the way she rub her eyes....yaar ye to bilkul bacho i tarah karti hai aur aise hi s ka dil bhi le legi .waise mujhe lagta har norml ladki apni aakhein aise hi rub karti hoogi wen she is vry sleepy par sirf k hai jo s ka dil lelegi aisa karne par..kyun..wat say:)
aur sujal i kitna caring hogay k kke liye wo 3rd part main hi ..dats so interestig dear.k chahe kuch bhi karle s ke liye to always gorgeous hi hoggi.hehehe
welll to s use ghar chode ga
thats cool n very gettlemen istyle..aur k ka mana karna aur syig to drop at auto stnd is also vry rgt bcoz she also belongs to the respective n self  respect crowd.
so ab in logo ne next meeting to plan ki nai,.as usual is case main to dono hi dumbo nikale aur inki naiyya to sirf tu yani hamariiiiiii niluuuuuuu hi paar laga sakti hi.
so pls sujal i nayya ko paar tu lagai dde...
ab jaldi se cont karna kahi pani ice na ban jaye aur unki naiyya kahi attak na pls..
waise sahi h k itni batein karegi to s ki to bolti band ho hi jayegi na..hahaha:)))

ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged


the up is good
so sujal kashish ko leekar dinner pe jaata haai
sujal aur kashish aapne family ke baare mein baat karte haai
aur sujal impressed ho jaate and as wel kashish too
ab dekhte haai aage kya hota haai
plz cont soon and pm me
Iqbal Neha1 IF-Dazzler
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Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
awesome part
The interaction between sujal and kashish was potrayed amazingly.kashish is really very innocent and i liked the way she was opening up 2 sujal.
-purnima- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 22768

Posted: 05 January 2011 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Ahem ahem so diner date went gud Wink much better than i was sweet innocent date.. Smile I am lving this simple adorable Sujal Embarrassed with nt much attitude & hangups (hope i am nt soon to judge him) keep him like this throughout.. Likd SK convo.. & sujal all alone Unhappy uski family again complicated ..hope he nt clules like last time Suzaal Wink.. As 4 kashish i thnk she is 2sweet & innocen 4 big mumbai.. Smart sujal abhi se ghar ka adress janna hai Wink giving lift.. So did sumthng startd brewing b/w busines tycoon & wannabe actress Wink..hope they meet soon nxt .. Wil eagerly wait 4 nxt part continue soon..
Pumpkinn IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5682

Posted: 05 January 2011 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !!
Sumi_162710 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6229

Posted: 05 January 2011 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Aww....that was such a sweet dinner-date!! I actually didnt think the story this way....but do I need to say I love it? Hehe....

Loved the way Sujal-Kashish started off....a lil nervously. That was necessary and they gradually they became a lil more comfortable and that showed in their convo....a very well written one Nilu.

Sujal was pleased wid her innocence and true nature....and like his comment abt

I can mention each single dialogue....actually!! Coz I loved them all..hehe. However now Sujal will drop her home....and wanna knw how they meet again....

Pls continue soon....
jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
lovely part loved the ease bet the 2 of them gr8 part cont soon
sania_58 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 July 2006
Posts: 5434

Posted: 05 January 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
another awsome update
tumne chota chota cute moments bohut hi expertly include kiya hai
very nice
continue soon

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