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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 48)

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
veryyyy sweet  part.hahaha
well start se start krte hai
i mn jab kashish room main aayi to wo jis tarah se hairan hui i mn i think use ek pal yehi lag raha hoga ki kaha aagyai..kiska kamra hai aur jab sujal ko aise bed par dekha to usko horrified hona hi tha ..its natural i mn zor ke zatke usko ek saath itne baar lagenge to wo ek dum hairan pareshan to ho hi jayegi na......heheheLOL
welll ab jis tarah se sujal ki halat thi i  mn totally drunk n totally lost in himself ab aise situtation main wo insan jisse aap har pal apne kamre main ape saath apne pass dekhna chahte hai aur wo aajaye is tarah se to insan ek dum blank to ho jayega kuch sec ke liye ab isme hamare drunkkk sujallllll ka kya kasoor..hmm...well fir bhi he is such a gentlemen ki he tried his best in this sitution also ki sai se bedh jaye kashish ke saamne ...how cuteDay Dreaming
well ab kashish bhi kaha khudko rok saktii hai sujal ko is haal main dekh ker chinta to hogi na use aur is chinta mai mam sujal ke pass chali gayi aur sujal ke saath bedh gayi...sai hai true companion hai wo uski.....well its very cute part wen kashish tried to take the bottle away n he said nai its mine...take ur borrleWink..hmm kitna cute lag raha hoga wo..aur kitna mushkil hoga kashish ke liye resist karna aise....hmmm...Wink
well the way sujal do checking wit her hand is jus so cute..i mn wo itna drunk hone ke baad bhi itna drunk nai...very 1st time i guessWink kashish jo waise hi kuch jaldi nai samjhti us ko hairan hona hi tha but the way sujal said u r my good girlll is u knw soooooooooooooooo agn veryy cute...hmm uske cheek ko pull kar raha tha aaj aise laga ki kashish mature hai aur sujal is kid like innocent n cute..Wink well mana padega sujal ko i mn chahe kuch ho mauka nai chodte ye koi bhi chance pe dance karne ka ..i mn itne drunk hai janab but fir bhi kashish ko pakadne ka bahana mil hi gaya..aur aaj  to mauke ka bharpur fayda udya hai i mn uski waist ko pakad kar apni aur kinch liya..aur bechari kashish waise hi sujal ko dekher bolti band ho jati hai uski aur ab sujal ki aise hrkat se to wo ...9th cloud main chali gai hogiWinkhmm
lekin abhi bhi kaha chain hai inhe fir bhi iss sitution main bhi sawal puch rahi hai...aur jo sujal ne nashia answer diya haye kya kehne ..aise kashish kya koi bhi apne hosh kho dega ...haye pehle wo drunk phir shirtless uspar ais batein kashish kya hoga tumhara....ConfusedDay Dreaming

well sujal kitni nafrat karta hai dad se wo to pehle hi pata tha but ab kashish ko bhi pata chal gaya..socho jo insan nashe main aise baatein bolega apne dad ke liye to uske dil main kya hoga we can imagine..aur ye acha hai ki kashish can read this pain alst in is eyes..
aww the way kashish console him is so sweett kitne pyar se usse sahara de rahi thi yaar mano jaise aaj wo apna sara pyar de degi us aur sujal wo bhi to kashish ke baho mai  hi jannat dhund raha tha aaj ....hmm so janab ne use hug kiya aur  like origiality thy both fell on bed in that intense position..hmm the whole moment is soooo romanticcc..no words as usual Blushingwell the moment where kashish said nahi sujal please ye sai  nai..aww thats agn very sweet aur uske baad jo sujal ke expression ya kahu yaar this 1 scene take my heart awayHeart....i feel like hug him at that very moment..awww...Blushingaur uske baad kashish ka wo dar is jus us time mujhe wo pari jaise pure aur bholi lag rahi thi yaar too cute n gud...hats offThumbs Up
aur uske baad jaise sujal obey her mano jaise use samjh aagya ho aur wo wahi so gaya it reminds me sumthgWink hope u get thtWinkbut again dono wahi so gaye in same intense state is jus sweet n nice..
hmmm well ye to night ki baat thi jo bahut pyari thi isse pyari raat hi nai aayi "is" sujal-kashish ki life main...well ab intezaar hai" morning blues "ka dekhna ye hai ki tir is paar hoga ya uspar.......khamosh raat ke baat bolti subah hogi ya ..........
well  ab subah ka intezaar to kashish ko bhi hai ur hume bhi par wo to tabhi aagayegi jab waqt hoga uske aane ka...so
as usual me waitingDay Dreaming

i hope meri comment cheap na ho aaj u knw....aaj main bhi nashli baato main kho gayi sujallll kiWink

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
nice part............................hope Sujal shares his pain with Kashish....................and hope he doesnt misunderstand their position and her...................cont soon......................
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
hi Smile
the up is really fantasticcccccccccccccccccccccccccccccSmileSmileSmileClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
its toooooooooo goodSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile and tooo hot BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
after so many ups u have a really dhamaal upSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
ok without much ado lets discuss about the up
so kashish jee goes to meet sujal in his room SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileand she is shockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked to see sujal is fully drunk ShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked and uper se shritless bhi EmbarrassedWinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
so kashish goes and starts comforting him SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileand asking him why is drunk and what thing is hurting himSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
so sujal tells her that he is hurt by his dad OuchOuchOuchOuch who left him and his momCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
kashish se sujal ka dukh dekhna nahin gaya she hugs himHug and sujal too hugs her too tightly wahhhhhhhhhEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
aur sujal jee ka weight nazuk kashish se seh nahin hua aur woh gr gaye bed TongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueaur girte sujal ko mila chance kashish ke romance karne kaa WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
he was enjoying his romance WinkWinkWinkbut nahin kashish ne usse rokha AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngrykun roke tu hume dekha tha romance par nahinnnnnnnnnnn ganddi AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
anyways sujal uske uper he so gayaSleepySleepySleepySleepySleepySleepyEmbarrassed haiiiiiiii becchare kashish ka kya hoga itna weight usse seh hoga kya LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
plz cont soon with another romantic dhamaal up like this and pm me
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
1st of all thanks for proving me wrong..Wink
itne time baad aisa update...wah wah...specially after u dissappeared for a big gap...maza agya...it was soo sweet...sujal was drunk...and so all his emotions were pouring out unconsiously...and kashish understood and comforted him...Smile...u didnt even had to detail on the part of sujal telling kahish abt his dad...thode sentences but he cud convey to her...n she understood...wow...very well written...ab sujal ko jab hosh aega tab kya karega...i dnt think he will misunderstand her...but will he finally accept his own feelings...for his 'personal calming alcohol' LOL Embarrassed....cont soon...tc...
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
i hope everything is back to normal next morning.........

waiting for more soon
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
Nice Part. I had thought Sujal to be drunk...hehe. But the way the part was written it was nice. Hope Kashish is able to talk to him when he gets back in his senses.....but wonder if he wud like to talk abt it at all. Anyways....w8ing for the morning I guess...hehe. Continue soon!!
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 4:04am | IP Logged

PART 29

Its morning.

Sujal's eyes open slowly, his head feels so heavy.

But he cant understand, why does it feel so soft under him, its not his bed.

Is it a girl? But he hasn't even been with a girl from the time he had met kashish.

He pulls his head up to make sure.

He could see a girl's arm, he had been sleeping on it the whole night.

The most embarrassing part was, he had laden it with his saliva as he had slept with his mouth open and his teeth had almost dug into her pinkish skin making a hickey like scar.

He sits up with a jump to take a look at the lady.

His eyes pop out seeing that's its non other than kashish.

She was dressed in a gown, he remembers they were supposed to go the premier.

Kashish's eyes also open slowly.

As she opens her eyes, she sees sujal looking at her with a blank expression.

Kashish uthke baith jaati hai

k-hi

s-emmm...h..hi...[he is looking at her scared arm, that was because of him. And the scar looked so prominent on her fair pinkish skin]

she is looking at him.

s-emm...

he quickly goes to grab his shirt as he realizes that he is shirtless.

k-main chalti hoon

s-nahi ruko !

she looks at him

s-I'll drop you [he feels so embarrassed looking at her arm and also the feeling that he ruined her plan and she had to stay overnight]

k-emm..ok

she starts to walk, while he follows.

He wants to say sorry to her but he doesn't know to, everything is so damn embarrassing.

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They reach her place.

k-andar aao naa

s-no...i...

k-black coffee can help you.

s-emm..ok..[he was actually feeling a bad hangover and it was getting difficult to him to drive]

+++++++++++

She opens the door of her flat, and they get in.

k-you sit, I'll just come.

He sits on the couch.

She comes back after a while with a cup of coffee and hands it over to him.

He quietly haves it.

As he finishes the coffee he gets up.

s-thanks, I should better go.

k-do you feel better? [she says out of concern]

s-yup ! emm...emm...sorry for the previous night.

k-no sujal, why are you feeling sorry? You are always free to share with me, I'l always be there with you no matter what.

She gives him a bear hug.

k- hum kuch aur ho naa ho, dost to hai hi naa. Kuch bhi pareshaani ho, tum mujhse share kar sakte ho, aur tumhe sorry feel karne ki bhi koi zarurat nahi.

He nods.

s-i should leave now, bye

he goes



Edited by storywriter - 25 February 2011 at 4:05am

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 4:19am | IP Logged
awww Hug............ nice part ClapClapClap.................... good to see sujal didn't reacted the way i predicted LOLLOLLOLLOL................ i had thot he wudn't remember anything LOLLOLLOLLOL..........

nice to see kashish's caring side Big smileBig smileBig smile
hope now sujal shares his feelings with kashish Big smileBig smileBig smile

will wait 4 next part eagerly Big smileBig smile

continue soon Big smile

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