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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 47)

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged

PART 28

Room mein ghusti hai to she is shocked.

Pura room tehas-nehas pada hai, jaise koi bada toofaan aaya ho wahan.

Pure room ko hairaani se dekh rahi hai.

Uski nazar padti hai sujal pe, she is freezed for a second.

Sujal pada hua hai bed pe, par uske pair touch kar rahe hain floor ko.

He is shirtless, with only his trouser on.

k-sujal ! [she exclamates with surprise]

he looks at her with his red blood shit eyes, he tries sitting up but unable to balance his weight.

Her heart sank seeing the almost empty liquor bottle in his hand that he was gulping from.

He was drunk ! she thought to herself.

She walks to him quickly and sits beside him.

k-emm..su..sujal , are you ok?

s-no...(-hic-) ...I am..dddddddddrunk..baby !

k-emm...emmm...wo..[she doesn't know what to say, she hadn't ever seen him drunk like this]

he takes another swing from his bottle.

k-emm..arre don't drink, please.

She tries to take the bottle from him, par wo haath hata leta hai.

s-na...h ! my..my bottle....you...go an..take your...borrle...

he takes another big swig.

His eyes fall on her hands.

He gets up with difficulty, supporting his weight on his elbows.

He holds her hands and looks at them, as if checking them.

She is confused.

He looks at her and gives a drunk grin.

He pulls her cheek.

s- you... are my... gooooooooooood girl

kashish is freezed due to confusion and dilemma.

k-sujal..[she mumbles his name]

s-hmm...

he holds her tiny waist and pulls herself more towards him, she is getting clipped to him.

She keeps her hands on his bare shoulders.

The tip of their noses touching each other.

Kashish ke dil ki dhadkanne tez chal rahi hai, sujal uske itne kareeb hai.

k-sujal..wo...

s-shhhhhhh...shhhhh....look at me...

k-huh?

s-look at me...look into my eyes...[he tightens her grip, pulling her more to him]

she looks into his passion oozing eyes while he gazes at her swan like eyes.

k-emm..eh...sujal?

s-hmm

k-are...you upset...with me?

s-nah.....you are my personal calming alcohol..you calm my heart... tumhari..inn ankhon..mein..zyada nasha hai...

k-why were you angry? Because of me?            

He shakes his head drunkly and brings his face closer to hers.

s-nah..bacause..of tht h**ny b***ard !

k-huh? Who? [she asks innocently]

s-that old man !

k-your dad....

s-shhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!! he is jus a f***ing b***ard !

she could feel the pain evident in his eyes.

She lovingly puts her palm on his cheek.

He holds her hand and kisses it.

s-you know...you know....[his red drunk eyes oozing pain]..he is a cheat..he left...left us....he ruined it all

she holds his face with her soft hands to console him, take away his grief.

He puts his face on her shoulder, wrapping his arms around her waist.

His weight makes her fall on the bed, with sujal on top of her.

He looks at her, they are lost in each other's eyes.

He pushes a wild strand of hair off her face, and kisses on the curve of her ear.

Then his lips go down to the hollow of her neck.

She closes her eyes in ecstasy.

He further goes down and kisses on her belly button, she moans of pleasure

k-ahhhh ! sujal !

he climbs up and starts nibbling on the curve of her neck, rubbing his nose to her cheek.

k-aaah ! naa..ah..nahi..please...sujal....ye sahi nahi hai

he stops, he is looking into her eyes blankly

k-kuch galat ho jayega

his eyes become heavy and close, and he falls on her and drifts into sleep.

While kashish is under him. He is too heavy for her to be pushed.

So she also closes her eyes.

He is sleeping on top of her on his stomach, with one of his arm around her waist & his hair prushing agains her chin.

As he is sleeping, his mouth slightly opens and his face is resting on her soft skin of her arm

 

 



Edited by storywriter - 23 February 2011 at 1:24pm

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
hope he doesnt misunderstand kashish........anyways nice update..........plzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
amazing part
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
lovely part ClapClapClapClap.................  somewhat expected Suzal to be drunk LOLLOLLOL........
thank god.......... sujal was not too angry on kashish now TongueTongue......... else i had thot he wud blast kashish LOLLOL...........
sujal really hates his dad OuchOuch...........
now i wonder WinkWink........... film premiere toh gaya pani mein LOLLOLLOL......... i think both were supposed to go LOLLOLLOL.........
waiting 4 next part WinkWinkWink................want to see sujal's reaction on seeing kashish in his house TongueTongueTongue...... in his room WinkWinkWink

continue soon (er) TongueTongue

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Great part !ClapClap
Sujal is sharing his biggest sorrow with Kashish !Cry
And the way he drifts into sleep was soo adorable !Embarrassed
I hope after he wakes up nothing goes wrong between them !Smile
Update soon !Big smile
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
nice update. well at least he wants to share his pain whn he is drunk. wondering wht will happen in the next morning. continue soon................
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
please sujal ko dimaag dedena ab kuch galat na hoo
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nice update neelu. hope there isnt any misunderstanding between them :P

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