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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 46)

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
great part kahsih should be with him he is angry .

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
well nice part
sujal ka gussa hona jayaz hai as he is such a personality that he cnt hide his emotions n anger in frnt of one hwom he considered him own n kashish is such 1 n only person in his llife so she has to face his this side sooner or later.ye sab scene dekh ke mujh do chij yaad aayi
pehle apna orginial sujal aur uska gussa dad ko lekar same yehi kaha tha usne "dont call him that,dont".
aur dusri well mujhe "dil movie"yaad aayi as aisa hi kuch scene usme tha but diff kafi hai they were couple t dat tim e+ma aati hai for giving kangan to her bahu par yaha na to ye dono couple hai...though officially na hi ma aayi as yaha dad aay wo bhi kangan +pproperty papers lekar well jo ho gusse main ye baat achi hui ki he said tumhe kangan chahiye to main lake dunga,jitne bhi kangan chahie...are gusse main hi dil ki honto par aa hi gayi
aur ye kashish ab iska kya kahe she jus so naive cnt she understand his anger at this very moment...but well not her fault agan as she is jus being like dis in whole fic till nw are usse nature main hi nai aise sab double meaning baatein samjhna she is jus kid frm heart uske lliye to sab jannat jaisa hai jaha koi bhi gussa jyyada dere tak ke liye nai...are ab wo kya kare agar use ye samaj nai aata ki sujal upset hai kafi ha mana ki uski galati nai as use kya pata kooi apne dad ki is tarah ke gifts dene ki harkat se aise aag babula ho jayega are  bhai ye to normal nai hai na..ab usse to kuch pata nai ki y sujal  is acting like dis..aur sujal bhi to kuch kehta nai ..aadhi adhoori baatein karta hai orders deta aise utt patang si harkatein karta aur uske baat aise hi chala jata aur bechare kashish use hamesh hi aise confusing si state main chod jata hai welll ab kashish kare bhi to kya wo to ab bhi apni kwabo ki duniya main hi  hai jaha ye sapna hai ki aaj sujal uske saath premeire par jayega ab phir chahe kyun na earthquake hi aagaya ho ya baad par ye sapna to kashish ne dekha hai aur use to bas ab iske pura hone ka wait hai...well ab sujal ne phone nahi udaya usse baat nai ki to apna pura haq samajh ke uske ghar hi pachuch gayi bechara naukar bhi kya kare hmmm wo to pehle dra sa hi kabhi ye dharti fate gi aur wo usme chala jayega aur upar se kashish ki entry bechare khudko kaus raha hoga ki kis ghadi main main nilu ji ki fic main ek naukar bana..hehehehe
well ab ye dekhna hai ki aage hota hai kya..kashish n sujal encounter for the very first time in this fic in his roomm..............Evil Smile..uhahahaha..ab ye sweet hota hi ya bitter,spicy hoga ya soar ye to agal part hi batayeg a

so me waiting......Day Dreaming

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sweetangel_25

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged
I am having a very bad feeling neelu...badd...the servant was so hesitant to point to sujal's room..jaise waha koi sher ho...ya kuch aur..i dnt wanna say....m waiting 4 u to prove me wrong neelu...plz dont live upto my thoughts....
the scene was very well written...his ghussa style was so real...nt jus trypical sujal style...bt considering the situation...very spontanious...kitna possesive aur insecure hogya...his personal life...hia kashish...hmmm...bt no priaisng u for this...Tongue   ..ur experienced enough to write it yr....itna ffs likhe hai tune...typical sujal char par...ki ab tujhe adhi raat ko utha kar bhi bole...ki ek scene likhde...to bhi wo oscars ke liye nominate hojae..LOL  LOL.
done wid my bak bak...poor kashish...mujhe fir wahi yaad arha hai...room scene..coming back to the vanity van..us bechari ki to halat kharab hogyi...sujal ko aise dekh kar...bt i liked tht u didnt make her freak out and run for her own life.  Ouch  .instead she wanted to comfort him...n was more concerned for him...ab cont soon...tc.. Wink
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
great part
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Awesomee update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
superb part....

as expected sujal was very angry....

I hope kashish cools him down...

waiting for more
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
nice part
Sujal ka yeh reaction expected tha.
Kashish is completely shocked to see sujal lose control of his emotions in such a way.
Hope who sujal ke gusse ko shaant kar sake
please continue soon
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 11:59am | IP Logged
too good part ........................sujal out of control.....................
 
 
plz con't soon dear

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