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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 45)

jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
lovely part cont soon

NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged


After an hour sujal enters her vanity van.

s-hey ! how are you?

k-never better [answers with a big happy grin]

s-good. Shoot over?

k-nahi, bass thoda bacha hai. Waise ek cheez dikhaun?

she shows him the kangan in her hand.

s-ye kya hai? Kahan se mila tumhe.

k-road pe pada hua tha maine utha liya. Arre, dia hai mujhe.


k-pata hai kaun aaya tha. Mujhe ye kangan aur ye bhi diya.

She gives him the file.


k-property ke papers hain, mere naam pe. Tumhare papa aaye the, mujhse milne

s-kya??? [he gives a hard frown]

k-haan, bohot achche hain wo. Unhone hi to mujhe ye khandaani kangan aur ye property di. Nice naa.

s-utaaro ye kangan ! [he orders]

k-kya? Par kyun?

s-ek baar kaha, samajh mein nahi aaya !

he forcefully removes the kangan from her hand throws them out

k-arreeeeeee ! ye kya kiya !

she starts to go towards them.


k-par..wo kangan...


gusse ke mare side mein job hi saaman tha phek deta hai uthake.

K jumps with surprise.


he takes the file and burns them with his lighter.

k-sujal, tum

s-DON'T CALL HIM THAT ! DON'T !!!!!!!!

sujal apna gussa kaabu nahi kar paa raha. He doesn't understand why his dad came to kashish. But he just knows he is just feeling insecure and protective, and his emotions were venting out in form of his dangerous anger.

Sujal gusse ke mare aas-paas ka saara sammaan tehas-nehas kar deta hai.

He wants to be alone. His dad had crossed his limit, he had invaded his space that was too personal.

Kashish to sujal ko aise dekh ke bilkul hairaan reh gai hai.

Usse samajh nahi aa raha sujal ko achanak kya hua.

Wo ghabra gai hai sujal ke gusse se, he was uncontrollable today.

Sujal goes out banging the door behind him and zooms off in his car.

Before she could speak to him or pacify him, he went.


Kashish tries his phone several times but it was switched off.

She has to complete the shoot, so she thinks shoot complete karke she would directly speak to him when they would go for the movie premiere.


She gets ready to go for the movie premiere.

She had called sujal several times but his phone was switched off.

She decides to go o his place and directly meet him, and they can go to the premiere directly from there.


She reaches his place in a red dress, all ready to go to the premiere.

She rings the door bell of his house.

His servant opens the door.

k-saab, kahan hai?

Servant-emm...wo...wo..ghar pe...

k-ghar pe hain? To kya kar rahe hain? Phone kyun nahi utha rahe?


k-kya? Achcha, kahan hai unka karma?

Servant-wo..wo..madam wo....

k-kya ye..wo....? kahan hai unka kamara, dikhao jaldi.

The servant shows her the room and she heads for sujal's room.

Edited by storywriter - 21 February 2011 at 11:28pm

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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Ohh.....Sujal absolutely lived up to my expectations....hehe. I didnt expect anything less than this....actually!! Waise first se shuru karu to....Kashish ka wo sarcastic tone when she says 'raaste me padha mila tha utha liya'....that was nice...hehe. And phir to Sujal ki gusse wali volcano phat gayi....and damn....kya lava nikla!!

But jokes apart.....he is actually very he takes Kashish to be a part of him on which only he has got the this unwanted invasion of his father towards Kashish....was bound to make him really angry!!

Now I hope Kashish can pacify him at least.....though I wonder how's Sujal's condition in that the servant seemed very unsure and hesitating!!

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 12:06am | IP Logged
sujal's anger really is very scary....................only kashish can tame him....................hope she consoles him now....................cont soon dear..................
mamon.moon Senior Member

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
nice update. well wondering wht makes the difference between sujal and his dad. the scene was very much expected now wants to know abt the room condition. continue soon............
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
now wasn't it something expected LOL LOL.......... seems kashish se zyada we understood sujal LOLLOLLOLLOL.....but i guess sujal reaction was wrong somewhere ....he shud have made her understand......but woh yeh sab karle toh woh sujal nahi rahega LOLLOLLOLLOL.... ab bechari kashish ko sach thodi pata hai...she doesn't know his relation is with his Dad...... Ouch.........

good to see kashish go to his house SmileSmile......... hope he is fine........ EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed........ & now he doesn't get more angry SmileSmileSmile.......... make everything well soon TongueTongueTongue

continue soon Big smileBig smile


bd670816 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged
nice update neelu.sujal is very angry. cant wait to know what  happened next !! 
thanx for the pm
ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged
the up is good
so sujal reacted in a very emotional and rude way
kashish was so happy to get the kangan and the file from sujal's dad but sujal when he get to know about this he reacted so angrily
it was ovious from him
as he doesnt his father
anyways hope that kashish comforts him nicely
plz cont soon and pm me

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