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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 37)

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
nice updates. well sujal's anger is justified, but he is not tht mad and came to her for apology. hope he gets his phone back. continue soon..........

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
aww so nice he think he is rude hahaha pyar bhi toh karte ho awesome
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
nice part but i really hope sujal gets his phone back.....................but him getting the balloons for her was really nice.......................cont soon dear.................
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged
amazing part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Awesome part neelu.loved it.
cont.soon !!

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Awesome update !
Loved it !
I really didnt expect that Sujal will bring balloons for Kashish !
But it was really very cute !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged

PART 23

It had been couple of days that they had reached backed India from Paris.

But they hadn't communicated with each other since then.

Sujal was busy in his cabin with his work & chaos that had been created due to lose of his phone.

Someone knocks at his cabin.

s-come in

kashish enters his cabin, with a smile.

k-hi !

s-tum? Yahan? Iss samay??

k-to?

s-ye office time hai

k-to? Busy ho to I can wait.

s-baat wo nahi, bahar mere employees hain. Aur tum aaj ek famous actress ho.

k-to kya hua?

s-i don't want media hounding around me

k-thik hai, ab se nahi aungi [she feels a lump in her throat]

he gets back to his work.

k-main tumhare lie kuch layi hoon.

She walks up to him and hands over a gift wrapped box to him.

He takes it.

s-ye kya hai aur kislie hai?

k-khol ke to dekho naa [says gleefully]

he opens it.

It's a smart phone that she got for him, with her savings. It was the best model available in the country.

k-like it? [she asked excitedly]

he looks at her with a straight face.

k-i am sorry, again. Meri wajah se tumhara mobile tutt gaya naa, islie main ye le aayi. Naya model hai, the best achcha hai naa?

s- I don't need this.

k-huh? But…

s-maine naya mobile kharid liya hai, isse behtar and its imported. I don't need this, you can keep it with yourself.

He looks down, her face has a dejected and sad look.

k-i..i thought..that…[her voice is choking, as she feels a lump in her throat]

s-why do you act so stupidly? Tumhe kya laga mere paas paise nahi honge, ek mobile kharidne ke? It was the data that was important, mere clients ke numbers, messages, emails, datas..everything. can't you understand this small thing?

Her eyes are brimming with tears, she got his gift with so much love and care, instead of being happy, he is acting so rudely with her.

k-no, I cant understand even a thing because you don't understand me, neither you try.. I know you can buy any mobile you want, but I gifted…you…you..because..because..i..i…l…[she takes a deep breath, a tear roll down her cheek] khair..leave it..you will never understand..never…yeah..how would the smart entrepreneur Sujal Garewal understand a stupid girl like me

he is just looking at her with a straight face.

k-i..i..am sorry for everything, bye. I won't disturb you..ever.

she rushes out of his cabin trying to control her tears in front of the whole world.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

'I Love Him !'

She wails on the phone sitting on her bed to her mother.

k-wo mujhse pyaar kyun nahi karta,maa? [she is continuously crying on the phone]

ma-kashish..chup…ro mat beta. Kiski baat kar rahi hai tu?

k-sujal ki, aur kiski. Bataya tha naa maine uske baare mein.

Ma-haan bataya tha, par ye nahi bataya tha ki tu uss se…

k-kaise batati, pata hi nahi chala maa kab ho gaya. [tears are not stopping]..par..ek wo hai..jis ko meri koi parwah nahi..mujhe laga kam se kam phone to..phone bhi nahi kiya mujhe…usse to koi farak hi nahi padta

ma-kashish, chup ho jaa. Koi aise bachchon ki tarah rota hai kya

k-to main kya karun? Usko main pasand kyun nahi? Mujh mein kya kami hai?

Ma-kashish, kuch mat kar. Sabr se kaam le, beta. Har cheez mein jald baazi thik nahi

k-maa, aap use baat karo naa, use pucho naa

ma-main kya baat karu, tu koi bachchi hai kya, kashish?

k-nahi, main kuch kahungi to mujhe daantega, aapko kuch nahi keh payeha. Main aapko uska no. deti hoon. Aap baat karo naa usse. Likho [she gives no. to her ma]

ma- kashish chup ho jaa, rote nahi hai. Khana khaa so jaa. Sab thik hoga. Tu usse pyaar karti hai, sachche dil se karti hai to kabhi naa kabhi usko tere pyaar ka ehsaas zarur hoga.

k-kab ayega wo din?

Ma-jaldi ayega, agar tu himmat rakhgi to. Chal ab rona band, aur so jaa.

k-hmm, good night ma

ma-good night.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Sujal was rushing towards his car after a deal.

When he hears a familiar manly voice call his name.

He knows who it is.

He just stops but doesn't bother to turn around.

His father walks over to him.

Father-sujal !

s-kya chahie aap ko?

father-kya ek baap apne bte se baat bhi nahi kar sakta.

s-mujhe der ho rahi hai

f-bohot busy ho?

s-haan

f-hmm, achcha hai. Hona chahie. Aur kam se rest bhi lena chahie. Maine suna tum Paris gaye the for holidays.

s-aap se matlab?

f- Kashish ek bohot hi achchi ladki hai, Sujal. Wo Raigaung se hai aur uske parivaar mein…

 sujal roars like a tiger.

s-kashish ke baare mein jasusi karne ka hak aapko kisne diya hai??????

f-nahi beta, main bass ye keh raha tha ki kashish ek bohot achchi….

s-kashish kaisi hai, aur kaisi nahi wo aap ko mujhe batane ki zarurat nahi. Kashish ko mujhse behtar aur koi nahi jaanta.

f- haan nahi jaanta koi, aur tumhe nahi lagta iss jaan pehchaan ko aura age badana chahie

s-matlab?

f-pasand karte ho tum usse

s- That's not your concern

f-no son, it is

s- [he turns and looks at his father with his pitch black brooding eyes] kashish is wholly and solely my concern, and nobody else's.

the father nods.

f-i just want to advice you that its high time you make the first move in the relationship.

s-i don't need any advice from you. I don't want nay relationship !

f-why?

s-because I don't wanna cheat on her, like you did.

f-why would you? You will not.

s-its in my blood, I know. I just know. I don't wanna break her heart. I can't see her sad. [he bangs his fist hard on his car]

f-sujal, you know you love her.

s-let her go away from me. Let her leave me. I can manage alone.

He rides car and zooms away in full speed without even bothering to hear his Dad out.

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
nice part
wel wel all confusion n chows is clar now so both has realise thier love n feeligs for each other...
well so sweet of kashish to give him such a classy phone i mn sh thik abt him n his loss well its so rude of sujal cant he jus take it  put wit him even though he dot want to use it..i mn he cn simply n sweetly said no to her i he wanna do but ye kya koi aise bolta hai apne frnd se...its bad to tke ur such asweet frnd for granted..wel sujal is very tough guy to hadle..well its so childish n innocent n cute of k ki usne sidha hi apni feelins apni ma se share ki .well very gud ki use ma ko kaha to talk wit him
so finally i wanna thank sujal dad atlst hume to uski felings clear hui well so he does luv him...i mn he do but now its clear on words too.so it is the reason of his whole rudeness n arrogance n y he is avoiding her..well he can manage..yeah we all knw how gud he is in that but ab ye dekhna hai ki daddy ji kya karenge..
well nice going dear...

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