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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 36)

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged

PART 22

in all this chaos his phone gets entagled in the strings of her balloons.

As in order to resist herself from sujal, her grip loosens and the balloons fly off in the sky with his mobile hanging to its strings.

The balloons flies off in the sky along with his mobile.

Sujal & kashish look on as the balloons go higher and higher in the sky.

Kashish looks at him, his eyes are filled with wrath.

s-ARE YOU NUTS? See what you have done.

She looks down with her guilt laden face.

k-i am sorry [she murmers]

s-SORRY????????what should I do with your sorry??? Huh?  I lost my phone because of you. Tumhe pata bhi hai, how important it was? Do you even realize?

k-emm…I am sorry sujal…very sorry..but you don't worry, yahin kahin gira hoga. i..will search for it..i will find it out.

He rolls his eyes.

s-you? Find out? My foot! [his teeths are clenched in anger]..pehle hi tum..i shouldn't have…come now.

k-sujal, I am really sorry. Really I am. Promise I will find it out. Main dhund lungi.

s-you coming or not? [says in a business like manner]

k-wo..ruko naa..main dhund lungi na usko

s-fine ! padi raho yahan. I am going.

He walks out in anger leaving her alone.

++++++++++++

She remains there, trying to search every corner for his phone.

Par wo phone to kahin aur hi tha.

Some NRIs had spotted kashish & sujal together, aur unko wo phone mil jaata hai.

Aur wo phone kholke sujal & kashish ki sab pictures and messages and calls sab dekh lete hain.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++

Kashish reaches her hotel room after couple of hours.

Dejected and tired, she sits on the bed.

She is feeling miserable & guilty that because of her he lost his phone. She is also feeling helpless that she failed to find his phone for him.

He knocks at her door.

She is just laid on the bed in her depressed mood.

After considerable knocking, when she doesn't responds. He pushes in the half closed door.

s-kashish, khana khalo [he orders with a straight face]

she is just laid on the bed silently with tears rolling down her cheeks.

He looks at her & waits for some moments for her reply.

She doesn't respond he just walks out the door, banging the door after him.

++++++++++++++

Its been about an hour.

Kashish ki lete lete aankh lag gait hi.

Tabhi use darwaze pe knock sunai deti hai.

She gets up sleepily to check who is it.

She opens the door to see sujal standing in front of him carrying a dozen of balloons.

She looks at him with an astonished expression.

He hands walks inside and hands over the balloons to her.

Her eyes are filled with questions.

s-for you

she looks at the balloons blankly as she is too astonished to react anything.

s-tumhe balloons pasand hai naa

he looks down & continues after a pause.

s-emm..i am sorry..i was rude

k-no, I am sorry. Really very sorry. I am stupid.

s-yeah I know

k- [she is surprised hearing his answer, she didn't expect him to reply like that] you do?

s-yeah, that's pretty stupid what you did today. Whatever, we are leaving tomorrow morning, I have lost all my contacts I need to personally meet them or I will lose my important clients. Ok. Good night. Bye.

She nods half-heartedly.

k-good night, sujal

he walks out of her room to his room.

 

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Awesome part
hope sujal gets his phone back,but i really liked the way u showed how even though sujal was angry with kashish he didnt like seeeing her upset.
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
nice part
Sujal is very angry with Kashish.
Hope the NRI return Sujal his phone.
Sujal realises that he had behaved rudely with Kashish aur iss liye who usse manane chala jata hai.
please continue soon
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
so sweet of sujal..in the end only though..
well its really grateful ki k tried her best to search dat phone.
well their is sum earthquake in their way or i should say in k n s life individually..
well the part is short(though not really) n nice..
well the trip is going to end so soon...
nice part...
well well u write it big but it seems short 2 me:))
well k is really tired n sleep ..sujal u should respect her..atleast she doesnt show off fake attitude which mostly people often show ater committing such mistake.but he is a man na so he cnt help it but he must hav control his anger as a gentle man n not show his anger atlst in such manner..but well he is also not hypocrite n so he cnt help it.....well well k wants to find his mobile so she should stop sujal frm going na n told her ki thy will go back together are hw cn he go all alone leaving behind her all alone..well in dono ka pata nai par maine kya kiya ..i mn kya likha i dunno jus likh diya...well nothin much to comment abt dem as thy both jus dont left nythg in this part to comment ..i mn thy both r going back...so soon..jus again drop my expectations n feelings n emotion....well let c abhi aur kya baki hai in store...


Edited by pinky901 - 09 February 2011 at 11:12am

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
hi
the up is good
yeh kashish bhi naa thik he kaha sujal ne she is a nuts agar main sujal ke jaaga hote then i should have slapped her tihgtly but anyways kashish is really feeling sorry but sorry akhene se kya hot haai
plz suajl ko uska phone dilwa do bcoz me too knows what importance mobile plays in our daily life we cant even move a step withour it
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwww nice parts..................................
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
as expected sujal was angry LOLLOLLOLLOL........... any1 wud be LOL............
hope the NRIs give back sujal's phone TongueTongueTongueTongue......... bechari kashish feeling so bad Ouch
Ouchi am confused has sujal forgiven or not WinkWinkWink

continue soon Big smileBig smileBig smile


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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Hmm....Sujal was angry...and it was justified actually....wudnt say he did anything wrong....Main to isse zyada gussa karti...hehe. But of course...he is not that much mean as me....so he went to Kashish finally and behaved as much nicely as possible.

But ye phn jo NRIs ke paas tha....I wonder wat will happen in that regard. Lets see wat happens next....continue soon pls...Thumbs Up

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