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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 31)

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
am shocked...................sujal aur aisa??????????????? ha ha ha..............cant believe it.....................but was worth seeing him like this................totally cool......................cont soon dear...................

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged


he starts watching the movie without even paying a heed to her.

'ye lo'

She snaps after few minutes.

He looks at her standing with a plate of sandwich.

He looks at the sandwich and raises an eyebrow.

k- itni jaldi ye hi bann sakta tha, zyada saamaan nahi bhi hai kitchen mein.

s-i want something filling.

k-abhi ye khalo, I have ordered unhone kaha adha ghanta laega, tab tak ye kha lo.

He takes the plate from her hand with a triumphant grin on his lips.

He takes a bite of the sandwich.

k-kaisa hai? [asks like a small girl, who had cooked for the first time]

s-emm...[after exploring the the taste]..zyada achcha nahi hai, thik hai.

K is jaw dropped.

k-kya??????  Kya kaha tumne? Maine tumhare liye itni mehnat se banaya aur tum ho ki, koi appreciation hi nahi. Achcha nahi laga to pyaar se bhi to bol sakte the, yaa jhooth-jhooth bhi to keh sakte the naa ki achcha laga [she complaints with a babyish pout]

s-jhooth hooth kyun kahun main?

k-kyun itna bhi nahi kar sakte kya mere liye?

s-nahi keh sakta. Aise bolte raha to, saari zindagi aisa hi khaana khana padega.

They are just speaking in a flow without thinking what are they saying.

Before they could evaluate their words, there is a soft knock at the door.

s-come in

the room service guy comes and place sthe ordered fppd on the table and goes.

Sujal sits to start the meal.

s-aajao, khalo

k-mujhe nahi khana

she holds her nose high and heads to go.

s-kyun? Uffffff, kya hua?

He grabs his hand.

k-kaha naa, nahi kahana [her back is facing him, but he could realize her voice breaking]

s-kashish, turn.

He makes her turn holding her shoulders.

Her eyes have been filled with fat tears.

s-arre, kya hua. Tum ro kyun rahi ho

he is puzzled.

k-nahi, kuch nahi. Its nothing [she rubs her eyes with her wrist]

s-no, tell me what is the matter? I will not let you go until you tell me

k-nahi, nothing. Its just, no its stupid, leave it.

s-what? Tell me.

k-its just, I wanted you to eat the sandwich that I made for you.

He is looking at her.

She looks at him.

k-but, you don't have to. I know its bad, I hope I learn to cook some day. So that you like my cooking.

Sujal keeps staring at her with a straight face for few seconds.

Then bursts into laughter.

She is looking at her with astonishment & confusion.

After controlling his fits of laughter, he finally speaks up.

s-look at your face, dumb[ nudges her forehead playfully]

k is still looking at him blankly.

s-this dumb girl doesn't even understand that I was teasing her.


He is just looking at her, he feels as if he has again found his lost kashish in her with her innocence & simplicity.

His lips automatically bend in a smile.

He touches his forehead to her.

s-sorry [whispers softly], maine tumhe rulaya. I promise, aage se tumhare haath ke bane hue khaane ke sivae kuch bhi khana, mere lie ban

k looks at him with wide eyes & hits him lightly

k-pagal ho tum

her face now has a sweet smile

k- aisa bilkul mat karna [she holds his chin & shakes it] kahin jaoge to kaise khaoge, haan?

Edited by storywriter - 01 February 2011 at 10:32am

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
ohhh  so sweet part yeh sujal bhi na   rula dia kashish ko  isse bhi maza ata hai usse tease karne mein    and yeh kya baatein karte hain yeh log   specially sujal  sari zindagi aisa he khana kahne padega  hmmmmmmm and again tumhare haath k  siwa nahi khainga wow haan yeh sab kya ho raha hai i hope  there is no plan of kashish plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i dnt wanna see her cheating him plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
nie n sweet part
like their whole littl sweet convo
so sujal k atually realise ho raha h ki k ekdum pehle jise h..a gud sign
pa rye kya k ko sachi muchi kuch banana nahi aata well kyun aayega..wo t ek celebrity h ab..aur pehle se dream tha uska bhai to y shld she bother abt food
well is she really itni sensitive n soft that this whole drama of s making her cry...i doubt..
welll ike the way s jus said ki he will not eat nethg..n k actually give attention on dat n replied ki nai aisa mat karna
nice going but dunno wat is excatly in store..

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
wow great part sujal bhi na
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 6:02pm | IP Logged
awww so sweet......................sujal is so nice.................they are fighting like married couples and havent yet noticed their words carefully......................cont soon dear.......................
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
awesome update neelu. loved it very nuch.
thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
nice happy happy part LOLLOLLOL........... good to see both SK bring back old times TongueTongueTongue........
hope from here its beginning of  anew dimension in their relation TongueTongue.......... no more saddy parts LOLLOLLOLLOL.............. hope sujal has forgiven what kashish had done earlier
continue soon Big smileBig smile

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