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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 26)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:13am | IP Logged
hmm 1st of thnx updating dear  and yes  sk in the party sujal is observing kashish and he finds her   pure this time is she?or she is a good actress??well only time will tell b'coz now her motive is to impress and grab   sujal only na u never no these actresses    lets c what happens  nice ud y she said sorry btw?

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
mazing part cont soon
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Oh yes....I love this part.....though mujhe end me Sujal ka ans samajh me nahi aya....hehe...yet I knw....sab thik hi hoga...hai na? Embarrassed However....this part had more of Kashish....Sujal's Kashish...the Kashish we knew....I was hating that Kashish....I am glad the party went smoothly....and Kashish was more herself....and Sujal also felt that. And she says sorry....hmm...lets see how things turn now....pls continue soon!!
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PART 16

She goes to her room & lays on her bed.

She dials her mother.

k-hello, maa kaisi ho aap? [very happily]

ma-main o thik hoon, ini raat ko kaise phone kiya

k-kyun main aapko phone bhi nahi kar saki kya, haan bolo. Abhi o aai naa main islie abhi hi phone karungi naa

ma-kahan gai thi?

k-arre, wo sujal hai naa, bataya tha naa; mera sabseeeeeeee achcha dost uske saath gai thi party mein. Boho mazza aaya. Pata hai naa, wo bohooooooooooooo achcha hai, bohot hi achcha hai, pata hai mujhe kya laga hai, mujhe laga hai ki naa wo auro jaisa hai hi nahi, sabse alag hai wo, boho hi achcha hai, bohot hi zyada. Bohot sweet bhi hai aur boho nice bhi.

Ma-[ma is smiling, listening her daughter blabber like a teenager] haan, haan samajh gai, ki use achcha koi nahi

k-haan

ma-to pasand hai tujhe?

k-wo maa'aap bhi naa, aap bhi naa he is just a friend, friend hai ,wo bass. Chalo maa aap so jao main rakhti hoon, bye maa.

Ma-bye beta, apna khayal rakhna

k-bye bye maa

she disconnects the phone.

She thinks to herself, looking at the phone.

k-mere pasand hone se kya hoga maa, usko bhi to main pasand honi chahie naa. Mujhe laga ki main'par ye galat hai'wo sujal hai, sujal; mera sabse achcha dost. Sujal, jisne har mukaam pe mera saath dia hai, main use dhokha kaise de sakti hoon. Kahin main, inn sab mein sujal ki dosti bhi naa kho doon.

She walks to her window & looks out.

k-pata hai tumhe sujal,mujhe tumhari dosi boho pyaari hai, anmol hai. Itni keemti ki main use kabhi khona nahi chahti.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

It has been a couple of months sujal & kashish were not in contact.

Kashish was engrossed in her outdoor shoots & movies. It was very hectic for her. She was working on double shifts, she had hardly slept for days.

Sujal was also involved in his work & didn't bother to call her as she hadn't called him.

Sujal had just read it in the newspaper that she had fainted on the sets of some movie.

So he at last calls her, after refraining himself for some time.

k-hello [she sounds weak]

s-sujal

k-jaanti hoon

s-kaisi ho? I heard you fainted on the sets.

k-hmm, tumhe bhi pata chal gaya

s-its in the newspaper, you are famous.

k-hmm, bass kaam zyada hai, douple shift hai, I was sleep deprived aur was working for 42 hours at a stretch. So, ho gaya.

s-hmm, how are you now?

k-better. Thanks for calling. How are you?

s-fine. I guess you should go for holiday; Greece is great.

k-hmm, you are right. Main abhi ghar hi jaa rahi hoon. Kuch din wahan rahungi.

s-ok good, to you take care, main rakhta hoon.

k-ok thanks, you also take care.

s-ok bye

k-bye

 

 



Edited by storywriter - 28 January 2011 at 7:02am

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Gud to see things settling a bit....but Sujal still hasnt overcum the sudden turn of his Kashish....and now I guess he is taking things slowly!! Hope he realizes her position soon....and tries a bit to understand her....coz I dont think Kashish has much thing to do in this regard....am just happy that she dropped that bogus idea of getting hooked wid Sujal for publicity and life long comfort!!

W8ing for things to be much better btwn them.....pls continue soon....and yeah....both this part and the previous one....are very nicely written!! Gr8 job!!

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
nice n cute part
gud to knw kashish realize her upcuming mistake..
well its gud to be home after so much work..
nice going..

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lovely update neelu. loved it. hope they remove their misunderstanding between them !!
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
lovely part cont soon

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